[OPSAWG] Further small issue with draft-ietf-opsawg-yang-vpn-service-pm

2022-04-29 Thread Adrian Farrel
Hi, Apologies for not catching this in the previous review. I noted that the Security Considerations section (Section 6) doesn't match the text suggested (required?) at https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines Is there a reason for this? Fixing it will remove one f the complai

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-04.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Jean Quilbeuf
Dear Tom, Thank you very much for your comments. Here is the updated version: URL: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang/ Htmlized: https://data

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-05.txt

2022-04-29 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : YANG Modules for Service Assurance Authors : Benoit Claise

[OPSAWG] Last Call: (A YANG Network Data Model for Layer 2 VPNs) to Proposed Standard

2022-04-29 Thread The IESG
The IESG has received a request from the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG (opsawg) to consider the following document: - 'A YANG Network Data Model for Layer 2 VPNs' as Proposed Standard The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final comments on thi

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, Indeed. I've requested IETF LC. Thank you, the other authors, and WG for their work on this model. And apologies for the slightly slow interactions during the AD review. I do believe that this work is an important piece in an overall network management architecture solution. Regar

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Re-, Thanks Rob for checking. A new version that implements the remaining changes is now online. I think that we are now ready for the IETF LC. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Rob Wilton (rwilton) > Envoyé : vendredi 29 avril 2022 14:29 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >

[OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-15.txt

2022-04-29 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF. Title : A YANG Network Data Model for Layer 2 VPNs Authors : Mohamed Boucadair

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, >- translate 2 with tag-2 leaf is > provided: the outer tag is popped > while the inner tag is translated."; I think that using tag-1 leaf would be more consistent with other models and the

Re: [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-04.txt

2022-04-29 Thread tom petch
From: OPSAWG on behalf of Jean Quilbeuf Sent: 25 April 2022 18:37 Dear All, This new version of the draft addresses the comments from Tom Petch and Mohamed Boucadair. Thanks again for their reviews. m I see a structural problem that I think will confuse users. IANA Considerations (wher

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Re-, > I'm not that keen to binding the behaviour to the type of the tag, > I think that what I suggested previously of indicating the number > of tags being translated would end up being simpler and easier to > understand, and besides I think that sometimes implementations > want to change both t

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > Sent: 29 April 2022 10:45 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) > Cc: opsawg@ietf.org > Subject: RE: OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg- > l2nm-13.txt > > Hi Rob, > > What we had in mind is as follows: >

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Re-, Thanks, Rob. Will make the change. Cheers, Med > -Message d'origine- > De : Rob Wilton (rwilton) > Envoyé : vendredi 29 avril 2022 11:13 > À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET ; > adr...@olddog.co.uk > Cc : opsawg@ietf.org > Objet : RE: OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ie

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread mohamed.boucadair
Hi Rob, What we had in mind is as follows: The following operations are supported: (1) Translate both the inner and outer tags. This operation requires providing both tag-1 and tag-2 leaves. (2) Translate only the outer tag. This operation requires providing one ta

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, Please see inline ... > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > Sent: 28 April 2022 15:53 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) > Cc: opsawg@ietf.org > Subject: RE: OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg- > l2nm-13.txt > > Re-, > > Please see inlin

Re: [OPSAWG] OFFLIST TR: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-opsawg-l2nm-13.txt

2022-04-29 Thread Rob Wilton (rwilton)
Hi Med, I think that this should be a normative reference, but I don’t think that should be a problem. Regards, Rob > -Original Message- > From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > > Sent: 29 April 2022 07:34 > To: Rob Wilton (rwilton) ; adr...@olddog.co.uk > Cc: opsawg@ietf.org > Subject: