Re: One more PAW

2004-04-06 Thread Frits Wüthrich
I attended a masterclass on architecture photography last month, and with that in mind, here are my comments on your picture: Correct the perspective further so that the horizontals are completely parallel. Come back later when the sun brings the structure of the walls of the building to life. The

Re: One more PAW

2004-04-05 Thread Boros Attila
Hello Boris, It is simply beautiful. The only thing I see that could be improved are the palm trees, which are too dark. Maybe you could add a little more foreground, but I'm not sure about it. Attila Monday, April 5, 2004, 9:03:43 PM, you wrote: BL> Hi! BL> I know I am posting a little too o

Re: One more PAW

2004-04-05 Thread Dag T
Well, the first impression is the trees in the foreground. I think I would have tried to use the foreground more in the composition. Find some lines that point at the building, past the trees. The other option is to go closer. There are lots of interesting reflections here, and the outline

Re: One more PAW

2004-04-05 Thread Shel Belinkoff
Hi Boris ... I like how you reduced the perspective effect. Clever. The photo looks flat, lacking in contrast. Perhaps punching it up a bit would help. However, the odd thing is that I don't see any shadows in the photo. Is that just my poor eyes and crummy monitor, or are there really no

Re: One more PAW

2004-04-05 Thread Peter J. Alling
I was going to comment immediately but I think I'll have to meditate for a while. Boris Liberman wrote: Hi! I know I am posting a little too often. But then I haven't been posting PAWs for quite some time before that. Anyway - here's Mark Cassino's K 24/2.8 on Leon Altov's ME Super with some Ko

One more PAW

2004-04-05 Thread Boris Liberman
Hi! I know I am posting a little too often. But then I haven't been posting PAWs for quite some time before that. Anyway - here's Mark Cassino's K 24/2.8 on Leon Altov's ME Super with some Kodak TMAX 400 loaded in it . I have some particular question to the wizards of Land of Pentax: You see, I