Vlad,

See my comments below from my quick skip through ...

Paul

Vladimir Marek wrote:
> 
> I would like to ask you for review of
> 
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~neuron/unrar/
> 
> It's my first, so expect unexpected :) Arc case is here:
> 
> http://arc.opensolaris.org/caselog/PSARC/2008/756/

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1. usr/src/cmd/unrar/METADATA
    Delete the lines 1-4 (they are not needed)

    Is ...
      URL:            http://www.rarlabs.com/rar_add.htm
    correct as the definition website for the package? It
    doesn't look like it to me.

2. Typo on commit comment ..
      "6691161 Mising rar archive extractor"

3. usr/src/cmd/unrar/install-unrar
    Rename this to install-sfw (its more common name)

4. CDDL HEADER and top of file (various files)
    Cosmetic: change so that they conform to that in ..
"http://src.opensolaris.org/source/xref/onnv/onnv-gate/usr/src/prototypes/";

5. usr/src/cmd/unrar/unrar.1
    Should this be in the webrev, ie. under source control ? It
    looks like it came out of the tarball.

6. usr/src/cmd/unrar/install-unrar
    Change /bin/sh to /usr/bin/ksh93

7. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWunrar/copyright
    Add, at top, a list of the source owner copyright
    lines extracted from the unpacked src tarball

8. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWunrar/pkginfo.tmpl
    Add the pkg version number at the end of the DESC=
    line, eg ...
      DESC="....... (3.8.5)"

9. usr/src/cmd/unrar/sunman-stability
    Is the "Interface Stability     Volatile" state correct?

10. SUNWunrar dependencies
    You only have the default dependencies, is this correct?
    Have you checked with the dependency checker script that
    there are no others ?

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Paul Cunningham
Software Engineer
Tadpole Business Unit

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