Will do... all those changes look good.  Thanks!

-Yonik
http://www.lucidimagination.com

On Sat, Oct 31, 2009 at 2:31 PM, Mattmann, Chris A (388J)
<chris.a.mattm...@jpl.nasa.gov> wrote:
> Hey Yonik,
>
> Looks great. A couple of comments:
>
> 1. How about instead of "... Apache Lucene project.  Major features include
> powerful full-text search,...", we say "... Apache Lucene project.  Its major 
> features include
> powerful full-text search,..." [key change: added "Its" in front of major 
> features]
>
> 2. Instead of "... and rich document (Word, PDF) handling..." we say "... and 
> rich document (e.g., Word, PDF) handling..." [key change: added e.g.]
>
> 3. Instead of "... Solr is highly scalable, providing distributed search and 
> index replication, and powers the search and navigation features of
> many of the world's largest internet sites...", we say "... Solr is highly 
> scalable, providing distributed search and index replication, and it powers 
> the search and navigation features of many of the world's largest internet 
> sites..." [key change: added "and it powers..." rather than "...and 
> powers..."]
>
> 4. Instead of "... Many powerful query enhancements, including ranges over 
> arbitrary functions, nested queries of different syntaxes...", we say, "... 
> Many powerful query enhancements, including ranges over arbitrary functions, 
> and nested queries of different syntaxes..." [key change, added "and nested 
> queries"]
>
> Again, looks great, and these are minor comments, but thought I'd pass along 
> to help crisp it up.
>
> Thanks,
> Chris
>
>
> On 10/31/09 10:44 AM, "Yonik Seeley" <yo...@lucidimagination.com> wrote:
>
> Putting my marketing hat on... here's a draft for a release
> announcement on other sites like theserverside (for an audience that
> may or may not be familiar with what Solr is).   I've tried to keep
> the new feature list limited, while still trying to convey the scope
> of this new release.  Thoughts?
>
> -Yonik
> http://www.lucidimagination.com
>
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> Apache Solr 1.4 has been released and is now available for public download!
> http://www.apache.org/dyn/closer.cgi/lucene/solr/
>
> Solr is the popular, blazing fast open source enterprise search
> platform from the Apache Lucene project.  Major features include
> powerful full-text search, hit highlighting, faceted search, dynamic
> clustering, database integration, and rich document (Word, PDF)
> handling.  Solr is highly scalable, providing distributed search and
> index replication, and powers the search and navigation features of
> many of the world's largest internet sites.
>
> New Solr 1.4 features include
>  - Major performance enhancements in indexing, searching, and faceting
>  - Revamped all-Java index replication that's simple to configure and
> can replicate config files
>  - Greatly improved database integration via the DataImportHandler
>  - Rich document processing (Word, PDF, HTML) via Apache Tika
>  - Dynamic search results clustering via Carrot2
>  - Multi-select faceting (support for multiple items in a single
> category to be selected)
>  - Many powerful query enhancements, including ranges over arbitrary
> functions, nested queries of different syntaxes
>  - Many other plugins including Terms for auto-suggest, Statistics,
> TermVectors, Deduplication
>
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>
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> Chris Mattmann, Ph.D.
> Senior Computer Scientist
> NASA Jet Propulsion Laboratory Pasadena, CA 91109 USA
> Office: 171-266B, Mailstop: 171-246
> Email: chris.mattm...@jpl.nasa.gov
> WWW:   http://sunset.usc.edu/~mattmann/
> ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
> Adjunct Assistant Professor, Computer Science Department
> University of Southern California, Los Angeles, CA 90089 USA
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>
>
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