Please find below some additional points
1) "Abstract
This document describes the motivation and benefits for applying
segment routing in the data-center. It describes the design to
deploy segment routing in the data-center, for both the MPLS and IPv6
dataplanes. »
It looks to me that this document is limited to BGP-based large-scale
data-center (DC) design described in [RFC7938].
So may be
:s/ the data-center./ BGP-based large-scale data-center.
:s/ in the data-center,/ in those data-center,
2) For the document write up, are there any known deployment of
draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc?
3) § 2.1. Reference design
" o Each node is its own AS (Node X has AS X)
* For simple and efficient route propagation filtering, Nodes 5,
6, 7 and 8 share the same AS, Nodes 3 and 4 share the same AS,
Nodes 9 and 10 share the same AS.
* For efficient usage of the scarce 2-byte Private Use AS pool,
different Tier-3 nodes might share the same AS.
* Without loss of generality, we will simplify these details in
this document and assume that each node has its own AS."
First 2 bullets are contradicting each other's.
Please update/rephrase as needed.
4) [I-D.ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid] could be seen as a normative document.
IDR WG is also initiating the WG last call, hence both document could progress
together.
Thanks,
Regards,
Bruno
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Hi authors,
As the document shepherd, I have reviewed the document and have the following
comments.
Thanks,
Regards,
Bruno
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Major comment:
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- Section 12 (Manageability) is empty ("TBD")
- Section 13 (Security) is empty ("TBD")
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Minor Comment:
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- Section 11 (IANA) is empty ("TBD")
- I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing should probably be a normative reference
---
§1
Term "middle stage" is used twice but is not defined. May be replacing it with
the terms Tier-x which are defined.
---
§4.1
---
"all the nodes are allocated the same SRGB"
Please expand SRGB on first use, and provides a reference
([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing])
---
§4.2.1
"BGP-Prefix Attribute"
The name of the BGP attribute is "BGP Prefix-SID" and the TLV hosting the index
is "Label-Index"
---
§4.2.1
"Then, Node10 sends the following eBGP3107 update to Node7:
. NLRI: 192.0.2.11/32
. Label: 16011"
As per RFC 3107, the NLRI is both the IP prefix and the label. Hence, proposed
:s/NLRI/Prefix
or :s/NLRI/IP Prefix
(RFC 3107 uses the term "Prefix" but IMHO it implies "IP Prefix")
---
§4.2.1
OLD: it should allocate the label LOCAL-SRGB (16000) + "index" 11 (hence 16011)
"LOCAL-SRGB" is undefined. I would suggest
NEW: it should allocate the label from its own SRGB block, offset by the index
received in the BGP Prefix-SID attribute. (16000+11 hence 16011)
---
§7.3 seems very similar to me than §7.2. e.g.
§7.2:
" One particularly interesting instance of performance-aware routing is
dynamic fault-avoidance. If some links or devices in the network
start discarding packets due to a fault, the end-hosts could detect
the path(s) being affected and steer their flows away from the
problem spot. Similar logic applies to failure cases where packets
get completely black-holed, e.g. when a link goes down."
§7.3
"if in the topology depicted on
Figure 1 a link between spine switch Node5 and leaf node Node9 fails,
HostA may exclude the segment corresponding to Node5 from the prefix
matching the servers under Tier-2 devices Node9."
May be §7.3 should be removed or rephrased to better differentiate its content
compared to §7.2
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§8.1
"The Prefix Segment is a lightweight extension to BGP Labelled Unicast"
"Prefix Segment" is loosely (un)defined. draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-04 uses
the term "BGP-Prefix-SID" or "BGP-Prefix-SID Attribute"
Please make a consistent use of the right term in the whole document.
---
"Common SRGB"
The call for a common SRGB is duplicated in section 4.1, 4.2 and 8.1. Please
remove the duplicated text. (e.g. moving all related text to 8.1)
---
"§8 Additional Benefits
[...]
§8.4 Incremental Deployments
As explained in Section 4.2.5, this design can be deployed incrementally."
As the incremental benefit is already discussed at length in §4.2.5 there is no
need to create a one line section 8.4 as this is not an _additional_ benefit.
So either removing §8.4 or moving §4.2.5 to 8.4.
---
§10
:/BGP Prefix SID attribute/BGP Prefix-SID attribute
Plus may be adding the reference to the IDR document.
:/ORIGINATOR_SRGB TLV/Originator SRGB TLV
---
§10
" Specifically, the ORIGINATOR_SRGB TLV in the BGP Prefix SID signals
the SRGB of the switch that originated the BGP Prefix Segment.
This allows to determine the local label allocated by any switch for
any BGP Prefix Segment, despite the lack of a consistent unique SRGB
in the domain."
The above text is not clear enough for me to understand why and how the
ORIGINATOR_SRGB is used.
I find the text in the IDR draft a little more clear. "It is used to build SRTE
policies when different
SRGB's are used in the fabric ([I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc])."
Which is a pity given that the IDR draft refers to the SPRING draft for the
reason and the use.
So please rephrase/elaborate.
On a side note, I would not call this node a "switch" which for me is a layer 2
devices (e.g. Ethernet). I'd rather use the term router or LSR (or (egress) LER)
And I fail see the relation with the title "Alternative options"
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Nits:
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In figure 1 and 2, Node10 diagram outrun the box. :s/ 10 |/10 |
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"In other words, per-flow ECMP that does not perform efficiently when flow
life-time distribution is heavy-tailed."
may be :s/that does/does
---
"Referring to Figure 1Referring to Figure 1"
duplicated.
---
"In the MPLS case, we do not recommend to use different SRGBs at each node."
May be avoiding (double) negation when positive statement is meant . e.g. NEW:
In the MPLS case, we do recommend to use same SRGBs at each node
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Subject: [spring] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-msdc-02
Hello Working Group,
This email starts a 2-week Working Group Last Call on
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