G'day Pratul, Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal.
Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks. In general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either aspirational, hopeful, or procedural. Some of the responses don't address the risks. For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks; http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide. Instead, please use Markdown. Markdown has a wider audience of authors. HTML should be generated automatically. Please consider better controls for risk #3. My post on 14th February gave some ideas. Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable. It is aspirational. -- James Cameron http://quozl.netrek.org/ _______________________________________________ Sugar-devel mailing list Sugar-devel@lists.sugarlabs.org http://lists.sugarlabs.org/listinfo/sugar-devel
