Thanks, I've no further suggestions. On Tue, Mar 20, 2018 at 08:45:32PM +0530, Pratul Kumar wrote: > * > Hello, > > Thanks for providing feedback and guiding me in the right direction. > I have worked on it and tried to add them and make things bit more refined. > > [1]https://docs.google.com/document/d/ > 1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing > > Kindly have a look at it and if there is something which can be improved, > kindly let me know, > I will be more than happy to work on it. > > Regards, > Pratul Kumar > > On Mon, Mar 19, 2018 at 1:02 PM, James Cameron <[2]qu...@laptop.org> wrote: > > G'day Pratul, > > Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal. > > Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks. In > general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either > aspirational, hopeful, or procedural. Some of the responses don't > address the risks. > > For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks; > > > [3]http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html > > Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide. Instead, please use > Markdown. Markdown has a wider audience of authors. HTML should be > generated automatically. > > Please consider better controls for risk #3. My post on 14th February > gave some ideas. Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the > project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable. It is aspirational. > > -- > James Cameron > [4]http://quozl.netrek.org/ > > -- > > Pratul Kumar | Sophomore LNMIIT | +91-8107525493 > > GCI Mentor SugarLabs, Mentor & Beta Tester at Coursera, HKUST University > Stanford Scholar Internship, Mozilla Club Captain LNMIIT, Head of > Developers Group HackerEarth > _ [5]LinkedIn [s] [6]Github [s] [s] > > References: > > [1] > https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing > [2] mailto:qu...@laptop.org > [3] http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html > [4] http://quozl.netrek.org/ > [5] https://www.linkedin.com/in/pratul1997/ > [6] https://github.com/Pratul1997
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