Hello, Thanks for providing feedback and guiding me in the right direction. I have worked on it and tried to add them and make things bit more refined.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Xzn-ub8pBCQuz9-RfltzHqDZqY7uZ2xF77MFP_9fKzw/edit?usp=sharing Kindly have a look at it and if there is something which can be improved, kindly let me know, I will be more than happy to work on it. Regards, Pratul Kumar On Mon, Mar 19, 2018 at 1:02 PM, James Cameron <qu...@laptop.org> wrote: > G'day Pratul, > > Thanks for the opportunity to comment on your draft proposal. > > Your proposal suffers from lack of measurable controls for risks. In > general, you've added responses to the risks which are mostly either > aspirational, hopeful, or procedural. Some of the responses don't > address the risks. > > For reference, here is what I had previously written on these risks; > > http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/sugar-devel/2018-February/055030.html > > Please do not use HTML for the beginner guide. Instead, please use > Markdown. Markdown has a wider audience of authors. HTML should be > generated automatically. > > Please consider better controls for risk #3. My post on 14th February > gave some ideas. Just claiming that you'd like to keep working on the > project after GSoC ... doesn't seem probable. It is aspirational. > > -- > James Cameron > http://quozl.netrek.org/ > -- *​Pratul Kumar | S**ophomore LNMIIT** | +91-8107525493* *GCI Mentor* SugarLabs*, Mentor* & Beta Tester at *Coursera*, * HKUST University**Stanford* Scholar Internship,* Mozilla* Club Captain LNMIIT, *Head of Developers* Group *HackerEarth* [image: LinkedIn] <https://www.linkedin.com/in/pratul1997/> [image: Github] <https://github.com/Pratul1997>
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