森本さん、はじめまして。 横田です。
タイトルですが、every の感じを、「いつも」にして、 「終りはいつも新しい始まり」、「お終いはいつも何かの始まり」 とかはどうでしょうか。 -- ----- Yokota, Kunihiko Tokyo, Japan 2010年11月29日23:02 Mari Morimoto <mm...@singnet.com.sg>: > Hi Sam, > > I don't find anything odd, but it is good to put more people's > thoughts to produce better finish products. > I want to hear other people's opinions especially on the translation of "a > foundation" and > the title, "Ever end,,,,,,". > More or less our, I mean you and me, works were done. > I want to leave this to others. > > Any way I am very impressed by your Japanese. Just amazing. > > > みなさん、サムと森本の意見は出尽くした感じですので、 > このタイトルとfoundationの良い訳はないでしょうか？ > foundationに関してはサムは"社会事業団体", "協会" or just "ファンデーション" > という代案をだしています。 > > 他のところでも 直すところがあったらよろしくお願いします。 > > 森本 > > > > ----- Original Message ----- From: "Sam Lin" <semin2...@gmail.com> > To: <translate@ja.openoffice.org> > Sent: Monday, November 29, 2010 3:00 PM > Subject: Re: [ja-translate] [com] Every end is a new beginning の訳です。 > > > > Hi Mari - >> >> It is perfectly fine if you find my amendments odd, and please feel >> free to reject whatever you feel inappropriate. I actually felt the >> original email from Jacqueline Rahemipour somewhat awkward and had a >> difficult time understanding and translating it. Preferably we could >> get some more others to have a look at the translated content. >> >> I have been thinking of a more appropriate translation for the word >> "foundation" because I also felt it does sound somewhat negative as >> you too have pointed out. Perhaps "社会事業団体", "協会" or just "ファンデーション" >> would be better? >> >> Regards, >> Sam >> >> 2010/11/29 Mari Morimoto <mm...@singnet.com.sg>: >> >>> Hi Sam, >>> You gave me good suggestions/ amendments. >>> I really appreciated them. Thank you. >>> However I would like to put some up for discussion. >>> Others are all small, I think. >>> >>> >>> 1.Every end is a new beginning >>> は直訳ではありませんが「お終いは何かの始まり」に >>> してみました。自然な日本語になり意味も >>> ほとんど同じだとと思います。「お終いは新しい始まり」 >>> はなんか おかしくありませんか？ >>> >>> ２．2，3番目のパラグラフにでてくるfoundation ですが、 >>> Samが指摘しているようにここでは あるfoundation , >>> a foundationです。しかしこれを財団と訳すと 大金を >>> 持っている組織、団体になりますので、これは >>> たんに「団体」と訳したいと思います。 >>> >>> 3.サムの訂正に さらにどこに訂正を加えたかは >>> 添付ファイルをご覧ください。 >>> >> >> --------------------------------------------------------------------- >> To unsubscribe, e-mail: translate-unsubscr...@ja.openoffice.org >> For additional commands, e-mail: translate-h...@ja.openoffice.org >> >> >> > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: translate-unsubscr...@ja.openoffice.org > For additional commands, e-mail: translate-h...@ja.openoffice.org > >
