Hello, By his own suggestion, I am forwarding an email from Marco Tiloca ( [email protected]) which apparently is getting his mails rejected by the mailing list, he did a review of this document.
Thank you Marco! (I hope eventually he will be in communication with us again) Regards, Renzo ---------- Forwarded message --------- From: Marco Tiloca <[email protected]> Date: Mon, Apr 14, 2025 at 2:31 PM Subject: Fwd: [Lake] Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13 To: Renzo Navas <[email protected]> (...) I have checked the draft and sent a mail to UTA earlier today, but I'm experiencing issues with IETF mailing lists: it seems that my outgoing mails are neither distributed nor archived. Please see below the text of my mail to UTA. Feel free to relay it to the UTA Chairs and/or to the UTA mailing list on my behalf. Hopefully, the original message will also appear on the mailing list at some point. (...) === MAIL ORIGINALLY SENT TO UTA === Hi all, I have re-read the document, and I think it's basically ready. Please find below just a few nits that I could notice. Best, /Marco =================== - Section 12 --- HPKE should actually be referred to as RFC 9180 - Section 17 --- s/is is/is - Section 17.1.3 --- s/utlize/utilize - Section 17.1.4 --- s/in accordance to/in accordance with - Section 17.1.7 --- s/the a post-handshake/a post-handshake - Section 17.4.1 --- s/recommendations what/recommendations about what --- s/identifer/identifier --- s/recomments/recommends - Section 18 --- s/has lead/has led - Section 19 --- s/this document RECOMMENDS that/it is RECOMMENDED that (RECOMMENDS is not a term from BCP 14) - Section 20 --- s/[RFC6979] ECDSA/ECDSA [RFC6979] ================================= -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: [Lake] Re: [Uta] WGLC for draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13 Date: Thu, 10 Apr 2025 10:17:39 +0200 From: Renzo Navas <[email protected]> <[email protected]> To: [email protected], lake <[email protected]> <[email protected]>, ace <[email protected]> <[email protected]> CC: [email protected], Valery Smyslov <[email protected]> <[email protected]> Dear UTA, ACE, and LAKE (chair hat off) WGs, I am the Shepherd of the document draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13 [1] (TLS/DTLS 1.3 Profiles for the Internet of Things). Currently in UTA WG Last call ending 14 April 2025 (not much time...). I urge principally the UTA people, but also ACE or LAKE people who can take a look (I think this profile is quite adjacent to those WGs competences), to please send your comments (to UTA ML) even if just to say there are no problems with the document. So far there are no comments sent to the UTA ML, even if in the past there were some discussion and consensus, now will be a good time to send a final OK (... or not). Have good end of the work week, Saludos, Renzo [1] https://eur05.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Fdraft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13&data=05%7C02%7Cmarco.tiloca%40ri.se%7C3bd7ed5b4b4d4892552008dd780847ec%7C5a9809cf0bcb413a838a09ecc40cc9e8%7C0%7C0%7C638798699174618719%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=cH8j%2FHLfs7oVZ7QWXQTNQ5oPjsZE0JFzA9k7GPiMAmM%3D&reserved=0 On Mon, Mar 31, 2025 at 10:53 AM Valery Smyslov <[email protected]> <[email protected]> wrote: Hi, this message starts a two-week Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-uta-tls13-iot-profile-13 (TLS/DTLS 1.3 Profiles for the Internet of Things). The call will end 14 April 2025. Please send your comments to the list before this date. Please do this even when you do not have problems with this document. Regards, Alan & Valery. _______________________________________________ Uta mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] -- Lake mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
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