Mark Martin wrote: > Michelle Olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've drafted a new feature spot here: >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_16/ >> >> Note several other changes that are built into this page. The first >> is the new 'at-a-glance' section suggested last week. Then, I've >> simplified the text blocks (my plan is to move the content we had >> about the licensing and hardware compatibility to the About page so >> it isn't lost). Finally, I've added new buttons for four tasks that >> we want developers to complete with ease, but which aren't easily >> found on the front page currently (Install, Join a User Group, >> Contribute a Package, and Report a Bug). >> >> Let me know what you think. >> > I'm not sure I'm comfortable with the wording at the bottom of the > spot: "led by our friends"... My instinct is that this is nice and > endearing, but perhaps suggests something more along the lines of a > partnership or some other collaboration. I am not sure if dropping some > of the familiarity and calling them "contributors" is any better, so I'm > only, at this point, indicating that it reads slightly different to me > than "this project is a distribution, and it is a formal project of the > community produced by contributors (members)". That's all I've got to > say about that. > > Mark > Thanks Mark, I've changed it to 'contributors'.
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