Hi, I have done a brief review. The document looks good!
One question/comment: The document enlists LC(Local Controller) in the diagrams in several examples. But its definition is unclear whether LCs are only controllers or they are aggregator routers or LRs or a combination of all or one of them in logical form. There might be some room for more clarification on LC definition of terms. Thanks, -Samita > > > LoWPANners, > > > > as you know, the working group chairs dropped the ball on the usecases > > document. > > A version with fixes resulting from the WGLC issued on 2009-01-09 was > > submitted on 2009-10-02. We wanted to get some quick feedback on > > whether that was fixing the issues and then never actually issued the > > second working-group last call. Indeed, the Internet-Draft expired > > after six months... Then the terminology of the ND draft changed. > > Since the usecases draft now has been resubmitted with updated > > terminology: > > > > This is a Working-Group Last-Call for: > > > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases-06 > > > > The document is intended to be submitted by this Working Group to the > > IESG for publication as an Informational Document. > > > > This is a one-week Working-Group Last-Call, ending on 2010-08-09 > > (Monday, August 09, 2010) at 2359 UTC. > > > > Please review the document carefully (one last time), and send your > > comments to the 6lowpan list. Please also indicate in your response > > whether or not you think this document is ready to go to the IESG. > > > > Carsten and Geoff > > > > _______________________________________________ > > 6lowpan mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan > > > > > _______________________________________________ > 6lowpan mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan _______________________________________________ 6lowpan mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan
