Dear Shoichi, I appreciate you again for the detail review and correction of my errors. I just uploaded the new version fixing the editorial errors you commented. You will find the new version at http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases/ Thanks again!
Eunah On Thu, Aug 5, 2010 at 11:24 AM, Eunsook "Eunah" Kim <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks Shoichi, > I will change the two terminologies as your suggestion. :) > > (This specification ==> This document, > Multihop ==> Multi-hop) > > Thanks for your support, > Eunah > > On Sat, Jul 31, 2010 at 4:23 AM, Shoichi Sakane <[email protected]> wrote: >> Hi, >> >> I have reviewed this draft. I think it shows very good example and >> information to be worth for the implementers and the designers >> of LoWPAN networks. I thank the authors. >> >> With minor modifications that I listed below, this document must >> be ready to go. >> >> - "This specification" used in section 1.1 sounds unreasonable to me. >> It would be better to change into "This document", which is used >> many other places. >> >> - "Multihop communication" used in section 3.5.1 has any special meaning ? >> If not, just use "Multi-hop communication" that is used other places. >> >> - I attached a diff file for fixing typos. >> >> Shoichi Sakane >> >> On 07/28/10 22:52, Carsten Bormann wrote: >>> >>> LoWPANners, >>> >>> as you know, the working group chairs dropped the ball on the usecases >>> document. >>> A version with fixes resulting from the WGLC issued on 2009-01-09 was >>> submitted on 2009-10-02. We wanted to get some quick feedback on >>> whether that was fixing the issues and then never actually issued the >>> second working-group last call. Indeed, the Internet-Draft expired >>> after six months... Then the terminology of the ND draft changed. >>> Since the usecases draft now has been resubmitted with updated >>> terminology: >>> >>> This is a Working-Group Last-Call for: >>> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6lowpan-usecases-06 >>> >>> The document is intended to be submitted by this Working Group to the >>> IESG for publication as an Informational Document. >>> >>> This is a one-week Working-Group Last-Call, ending on 2010-08-09 >>> (Monday, August 09, 2010) at 2359 UTC. >>> >>> Please review the document carefully (one last time), and send your >>> comments to the 6lowpan list. Please also indicate in your response >>> whether or not you think this document is ready to go to the IESG. >>> >>> Carsten and Geoff >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> 6lowpan mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan >> >> _______________________________________________ >> 6lowpan mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan >> >> > _______________________________________________ 6lowpan mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6lowpan
