In general I'm +1, with one exception :) > > This software was developed at the Apache Software Foundation > (http://www.apache.org) and may have dependencies on other > Apache software licensed under Apache License 2.0. While the above sentence is true, I personally would read it that the project does not know if they have dependencies to other Apache software (so for me if someone says "may" I conclude that he doesn't know) :) Maybe that's just me not being a native speaker?
What about simplifying the sentence along these lines: This software was developed at the Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org) and contains software licensed under the Apache License 2.0. Carsten -- Carsten Ziegeler cziege...@apache.org
