On 10/12/09 14:51, Carsten Ziegeler wrote:
In general I'm +1, with one exception :)This software was developed at the Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org) and may have dependencies on other Apache software licensed under Apache License 2.0.While the above sentence is true, I personally would read it that the project does not know if they have dependencies to other Apache software (so for me if someone says "may" I conclude that he doesn't know) :) Maybe that's just me not being a native speaker?
It does say that because it is general to catch both cases. Your below sentence only captures the "includes" case, not the "uses" case. However, I don't care what the template is precisely, I just want to simplify it.
-> richard
What about simplifying the sentence along these lines: This software was developed at the Apache Software Foundation (http://www.apache.org) and contains software licensed under the Apache License 2.0. Carsten
