Hi Dmitriy, thanks for checking!
The "your name" stuff came at my request. Justin had his personal details in there (e.g. Justin McLean, etc.) and in my opinion the material should be anonymous. Similar to code where we don't have any @author tags. So Justin removed the information. I'd be in favor of entirely removing those slides but I'm fine with the current solution as well. As to the other one: Just reading that sentence makes sense to me. I just looked at the slide and I think it's fine. Looking at the title of the slide "Why we have an incubating process" this one could begin with "To ensure" but I believe it's fine the way it is. The decision is yours but if that's everything you dislike I'd suggest we can fix/change it post-release. Cheers, Lars On Fri, Jun 7, 2019 at 5:44 PM Dmitriy Pavlov <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, Justin, Training developers, > > +0.9 (PPMC Binding), > Checked license, notice readme and build from sources. > > I have only one remark. Generated slides in > > /apache-training-navigating-ASF-incubation-1.0-incubating/target/generated-slides/index.html > contain > The first slide contains: > ```Your Name > Your Job title > Your email``` > > The second slide contains > ```Who am I? > TODO Fill in your own your info here``` > > One from the next slide contains > ```Ensure that decision making is done in the open``` <- Phrase seems to be > incomplete. > > Sincerely > Dmitriy Pavlov > > пт, 7 июн. 2019 г. в 10:28, Justin Mclean <[email protected]>: > > > Hi, > > > > Thanks now we only need one more +1. Anyone? > > > > Thanks, > > Justin > > > > P.S I was hoping this talk was going to be accepted at ApacheCon but my > > other incubator talk got accepted instead. So looks like I have to work > on > > that and submit it here now ;-) >
