Please disregard question 2. from my previous email, I was just not reading
the docs carefully enough :(

On Fri, 7 Jun 2019 at 21:46, Sönke Liebau <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Hi Justin,
>
> sorry for the long time it took, but I finally had a look at the release
> candidate.
>
> Overall it looks good to me, I checked the signatures, built it and looked
> at regulatory files.
>
> I do have two questions on the NOTICE and LICENSE file though:
>
> 1. in NOTICE there is a sentence that mentions that this content was
> originally developed by you. Is that legally required to be there? I
> absolutely don't want to remove your name from the material as original
> author, but when looking at the Apache docs for assembling a NOTICE file it
> said to not put anything in there that is not legally required [1], which
> got me wondering.
>
> 2. At the bottom of the License file, there is a section that this project
> contains parts of the reveal.js framework which is licensed under the MIT
> license. Should that not be in the Notice file? In the docs I found the
> following two sentences, which have me confused :)
> "LICENSE should contain the text of the ALv2 -- no more, no less."  [2]
> "The LICENSE file communicates the licensing of all content in an Apache
> product distribution. It always contains the text of the Apache License,
> and sometimes more." [3]
>
> Probably both nits/non-issues, but wanted to briefly clarify.
>
> Best regards,
> Sönke
>
> [1] http://www.apache.org/dev/licensing-howto.html#mod-notice
> [2] http://www.apache.org/dev/licensing-howto.html#simple
> [3] http://www.apache.org/dev/licensing-howto.html#overview-of-files
>
> On Fri, 7 Jun 2019 at 19:07, Lars Francke <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Dmitriy,
>>
>> thanks for checking!
>>
>> The "your name" stuff came at my request.
>> Justin had his personal details in there (e.g. Justin McLean, etc.) and in
>> my opinion the material should be anonymous. Similar to code where we
>> don't
>> have any @author tags.
>> So Justin removed the information. I'd be in favor of entirely removing
>> those slides but I'm fine with the current solution as well.
>>
>> As to the other one: Just reading that sentence makes sense to me. I just
>> looked at the slide and I think it's fine.
>> Looking at the title of the slide "Why we have an incubating process" this
>> one could begin with "To ensure" but I believe it's fine the way it is.
>>
>> The decision is yours but if that's everything you dislike I'd suggest we
>> can fix/change it post-release.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Lars
>>
>>
>>
>> On Fri, Jun 7, 2019 at 5:44 PM Dmitriy Pavlov <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>> > Hi, Justin, Training developers,
>> >
>> > +0.9 (PPMC Binding),
>> > Checked license, notice readme and build from sources.
>> >
>> > I have only one remark. Generated slides in
>> >
>> >
>> /apache-training-navigating-ASF-incubation-1.0-incubating/target/generated-slides/index.html
>> > contain
>> > The first slide contains:
>> > ```Your Name
>> > Your Job title
>> > Your email```
>> >
>> > The second slide contains
>> > ```Who am I?
>> > TODO Fill in your own your info here```
>> >
>> > One from the next slide contains
>> > ```Ensure that decision making is done in the open``` <- Phrase seems
>> to be
>> > incomplete.
>> >
>> > Sincerely
>> > Dmitriy Pavlov
>> >
>> > пт, 7 июн. 2019 г. в 10:28, Justin Mclean <[email protected]>:
>> >
>> > > Hi,
>> > >
>> > > Thanks now we only need one more +1. Anyone?
>> > >
>> > > Thanks,
>> > > Justin
>> > >
>> > > P.S I was hoping this talk was going to be accepted at ApacheCon but
>> my
>> > > other incubator talk got accepted instead. So looks like I have to
>> work
>> > on
>> > > that and submit it here now ;-)
>> >
>>
>
>
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