Hi Mohit and Casey,
Here are a few comments on the web page mockup:
- There are so many different fonts & design styles (e.g. text boxes)
used across the pages - this almost makes me feel like I'm visiting
different sites, not different pages of a single site
- In the footer there are two columns:
- Company: this title doesn't make sense since it's not a company
website.
- Our Social Media: Gerrit is not a social media. And I also wonder
whether we want to keep Twitter there since we don't have any
control over
the account. And also it's not Twitter any more - it would be
nice if Linux
Foundation has its own Mastodon instance and OpenDaylight has an account
hosted there.
- In the Platform Overview page there is a mention of ALTO, Group Based
Policy and Network Intent Composition but these projects are not active any
more. And there is a mention of Maven - "OpenDaylight uses OSGi and Maven
to build a package ..." and this doesn't seem to fit in this architecture
summary
Thanks,
Sangwook
On Thu, Aug 10, 2023 at 9:56 AM Mohit Saini <msain...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Hi,
>
> All concerns have been addressed except for the testimonials text labeled
> as [Number 8]. It would be greatly appreciated if Verizon and Pantheon tech
> could furnish us with some testimonials. Additionally, I believe you should
> also be able to observe the Release, Total commits, and Committer dialog
> box in light mode, as we have not come across any issues with it. However,
> if you're unable to view it, kindly inform me.
>
> On Thu, 20 Jul 2023 at 20:09, Ivan Hrasko <ivan.hra...@pantheon.tech>
> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> the netconf team has the following comments to the new ODL web page
>> available at:
>> https://wiki.opendaylight.org/display/ODL/Figma+Design%27s+For+OpenDaylight
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__wiki.opendaylight.org_display_ODL_Figma-2BDesign-2527s-2BFor-2BOpenDaylight&d=DwMFaQ&c=udBTRvFvXC5Dhqg7UHpJlPps3mZ3LRxpb6__0PomBTQ&r=tFlYQtdB5h1Aic2Ti7Ncev9qFTcOZoMgJ6CVN_sDUdU&m=h400XvXxT1-I33CGcWx3a_toJ8iJ5F-bv2B30v2dF-T6_Nr6bMJVsaDws6DB1PQ4&s=9wb8m_E5hM6heoTvpW5leu_LeXMDOOT3puv1Z0TBDQg&e=>
>>
>> 1. ABOUT PAGE DESKTOP - WHAT IS SDN
>>
>> Last sentence right column “ODL is the by far the largest…” (The
>> first “the” should not be there)
>>
>> 2. USER STORIES DESKTOP
>>
>> “How we can help your Succeed!“ → should be “How we can help you
>> succeed!” (without capital S and with “you”)
>>
>> 3. GETTING STARTED DESKTOP - RESOURCES
>>
>> The heading says “GitHub”, but the link goes to Gerrit
>>
>> Project - “We have lot of things going on at ODL” → Use either “a lot
>> of” or “lots of”
>>
>> 4. NRO DARK DESKTOP - MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS
>>
>> The heading “MULTI-LAYER TRANSPORT CONTROLLER SOLUTIONS” is black on
>> a dark background → based on the theme it should be orange
>>
>> 5. In dark theme is OpenDaylight logo invisible
>>
>> 6. In dark theme is missing ODL logo in footer
>>
>> 7. Governance desktop:
>> Members of TSC would deserve having their names written with full
>> diacritics - Ivan Hraško instead of Hrasko. Same for Robert Varga.
>>
>> 8. User Stories desktop:
>> - Section: Our testimonials
>> Both Verizon and Pantheon tech have the same quote associated with
>> them
>>
>> 9. Footers: Bump up the year to 2023
>>
>> 10. Release, Total commits, Commiter dialog is not visible in light mode
>>
>> 11. Learn more about LFN should be a link
>>
>> 12. Learn how to get started with OpenDaylight as a developer should be a
>> link
>>
>> 13. (Training) LFS 465 course link is not clickable
>>
>> 14. (Our testimonials) Phanteon Tech -> PANTHEON.tech
>>
>>
>>
>> Best,
>> --
>>
>> *Ivan Hraško*
>>
>> Senior Software Engineer
>>
>>
>>
>> *PANTHEON* *.tech*
>>
>> Mlynské Nivy 56, 821 05 Bratislava
>>
>> Slovakia
>>
>> Tel / +421 220 665 111
>>
>>
>>
>> *MAIL **/* ivan.hra...@pantheon.team
>>
>> *WEB **/* https://pantheon.tech
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>>
>>
>
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