> Please take a few minutes to review these and make any comments or 
> suggestions.

Consider adding "worldwide" as follows:

    The purpose of NewNOG is to provide forums in the North American
region for education and the sharing
    of knowledge for the worldwide Internet operations community.

I think this helps clarify that although the focus for venues is on
North America, that the focus of the work
is not geographically restricted.

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