There are a few editorial issues (see below) that I’d like to fix before Benoit
gets back (tomorrow, I think). Please let me know if you spot any other issues
like these, today if possible.
Thanks,
Kent
- ensure that this inconsistency minimizes gaps in the application of
+ ensure that this process minimizes gaps in the application of
^^^^^^^
- policies or not dependent on external input that an attacker might
+ policies are not dependent on external input that an attacker might
^^^
- Sterne, Jason
+ Jason Sterne
On 1/4/16, 5:29 PM, "netmod on behalf of Kent Watsen" <netmod-boun...@ietf.org
on behalf of kwat...@juniper.net> wrote:
>
>This update addresses comments received during the Last Call.
>
>Warning! - the Diff1 and Diff2 outputs somehow mangle the Applied
>Configuration term. Please look at the draft itself for the correct text.
>
>Kent
>
>
>
>On 1/4/16, 5:17 PM, "netmod on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org"
><netmod-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language Working
>> Group of the IETF.
>>
>> Title : Terminology and Requirements for Enhanced
>> Operational State Visibility and Control
>> Authors : Kent Watsen
>> Thomas Nadeau
>> Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-02.txt
>> Pages : 6
>> Date : 2016-01-04
>>
>>Abstract:
>> This document discusses the difference between intended configuration
>> and applied configuration of a device and how intended and applied
>> configuration relate to the operational state of a device. The
>> document defines the necessary terminology and identifies
>> requirements enabling visibility into the difference of intended
>> configuration and applied configuration.
>>
>>
>>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs/
>>
>>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-02
>>
>>A diff from the previous version is available at:
>>https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-02
>>
>>
>>Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>>until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>>
>>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>>ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>>
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