Hi Kent, You use MUST, SHOULD, MAY, and you refer to RFC 2119. Fine. However, it might be beneficial to say something such as in RFC 7698
The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in [RFC2119]. While [RFC2119] describes interpretations of these key words in terms of protocol specifications and implementations, they are used in this document to describe design requirements for protocol extensions. Btw, I never quite understood what a MAY means for a requirement. See requirement 2B and 2C Regards, Benoit
In addition to the title update, I also updated the abstract/introduction and fixed a couple editorial items. Kent On 1/8/16, 7:58 PM, "netmod on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org" <netmod-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the NETCONF Data Modeling Language Working Group of the IETF. Title : Terminology and Requirements for Enhanced Handling of Operational State Authors : Kent Watsen Thomas Nadeau Filename : draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-03.txt Pages : 7 Date : 2016-01-08 Abstract: This document primarily regards the difference between the intended configuration and the applied configuration of a device and how intended and applied configuration relate to the operational state of a device. This document defines requirements for the applied configuration's data model and its values, as well as for enabling a client to know when a configuration has been fully applied or not, how to access operational state, and how to relate intended configuration nodes to applied configuration and derived state nodes. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-03 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netmod-opstate-reqs-03 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ _______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod_______________________________________________ netmod mailing list netmod@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netmod .
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