On 8 June 2012 19:05, drew <d...@baseanswers.com> wrote:
> On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 21:13 -0400, Rob Weir wrote:
>> On Thu, Jun 7, 2012 at 6:43 PM, drew <d...@baseanswers.com> wrote:
>> > On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 14:35 -0700, Nancy K wrote:
>> >> I do like all of these, but have to show you folks what my friend Reya 
>> >> Mellicker is offering - and she is willing to let Apache Open Office use 
>> >> it as you see fit.  If you need an email consent or something, I can get 
>> >> that as well from her. What do you think?
>> >> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/27834929/CloudsReyaMellicker.jpg
>> >>
>> >
>> > Hi Nancy
>> >
>> > Thanks - I'll see if there is something I can do with that.
>> >
>> > OK - I've updated all three pieces
>> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png
>> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-sleeve-win.png
>> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-folded-win.png
>> >
>> > will leave these as is for now - any ideas on better content, etc.
>> > appreciated.
>> >
>>
>> Missing 't' in Productivity in
>> http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png
>>
>> Also it looks like you have (C) for the MS Office, etc.  I assume you
>> want to acknowledge their trademark, not copyright.
>
>
> Alright, Productivity now has a 't' where it should be, on all three
> pieces.
>
> The (c) is now a (r) for the MS trademarks.
>
> Made the copy changes, per Nancy's recommendations - reads better now,
> thank you Nancy.

It's not 100% clear to me if the CD contains just the Software
Development Kit for the suite, or if it contains the SDK in addition
to the suite.

I suspect the latter, but perhaps consider adding "includes" before
the SDK text.

> Pushed png with those changes to the URLs listed above.
>
> The clock/calendar tells me I need to call these done - unless someone
> sees a real issue with anything there.
>
> So - question - is this the point where I need to send an email to the
> ASF trademark mail list?
>
> //drew
>

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