On Fri, 2012-06-08 at 19:27 +0100, sebb wrote: > On 8 June 2012 19:05, drew <d...@baseanswers.com> wrote: > > On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 21:13 -0400, Rob Weir wrote: > >> On Thu, Jun 7, 2012 at 6:43 PM, drew <d...@baseanswers.com> wrote: > >> > On Thu, 2012-06-07 at 14:35 -0700, Nancy K wrote: > >> >> I do like all of these, but have to show you folks what my friend Reya > >> >> Mellicker is offering - and she is willing to let Apache Open Office > >> >> use it as you see fit. If you need an email consent or something, I > >> >> can get that as well from her. What do you think? > >> >> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/download/attachments/27834929/CloudsReyaMellicker.jpg > >> >> > >> > > >> > Hi Nancy > >> > > >> > Thanks - I'll see if there is something I can do with that. > >> > > >> > OK - I've updated all three pieces > >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png > >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-sleeve-win.png > >> > http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-folded-win.png > >> > > >> > will leave these as is for now - any ideas on better content, etc. > >> > appreciated. > >> > > >> > >> Missing 't' in Productivity in > >> http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-cd-label-win.png > >> > >> Also it looks like you have (C) for the MS Office, etc. I assume you > >> want to acknowledge their trademark, not copyright. > > > > > > Alright, Productivity now has a 't' where it should be, on all three > > pieces. > > > > The (c) is now a (r) for the MS trademarks. > > > > Made the copy changes, per Nancy's recommendations - reads better now, > > thank you Nancy. > > It's not 100% clear to me if the CD contains just the Software > Development Kit for the suite, or if it contains the SDK in addition > to the suite. > > I suspect the latter, but perhaps consider adding "includes" before > the SDK text.
Howdy Sebb, Ok, well I tried to be more explicit when putting the first cut of the hard case cover together http://lo-portal.us/aoo/temp/AOO34-dvd-case-win.png will go back and update the others to match, if that looks with everyone. //drew > > > Pushed png with those changes to the URLs listed above. > > > > The clock/calendar tells me I need to call these done - unless someone > > sees a real issue with anything there. > > > > So - question - is this the point where I need to send an email to the > > ASF trademark mail list? > > > > //drew > > >
