Hi all,

I have read rev-05 of the draft and I think this document is ready to progress. 
The draft defines a flexible service assurance architecture and provides some 
concrete examples to illustrate how to use it.

Just a few suggestions to improve readability:

1           The definition of 'service' seems not clear to me, e.g. 
Introduction refers the service module definition in RFC 8199, but Section 
3.7<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture#section-3.7>.
  Flexible Functional Architecture says the definition of service is very 
generic, and this is true that in the example the IS-IS, device and interface 
could also be service. I noticed Med also raised some questions on this. I hope 
this has been solved.

2           'metric engine' is defined in Terminology. It is not clear to me 
where is this function belonged to, is it part of  SAIN agent?

Thanks,
Bo
From: OPSAWG [mailto:opsawg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Tianran Zhou
Sent: Wednesday, June 8, 2022 6:00 PM
To: opsawg@ietf.org
Subject: [OPSAWG] WGLC for draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03

Hi WG,

This mail we start a two weeks working group last call for 
draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture-03.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-architecture/
Please send over your comments before June 22.
Please also indicate if you think this document is ready to progress.

Cheers,
Tianran, on behalf of chairs
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