Not a bad crop.  I agree that taking both sides off certainly loses
too much context.  What you have tried here seems about right.  Thanks
for taking a look.



Friday, March 5, 2004, 9:42:24 PM, you wrote:

SB> Hi Bruce ...

SB> It's one of those likable, "too cute" pics ;-))

SB> The crop is too tight.  Loses all context.  It becomes just
SB> some happy looking kid staring into space, perhaps a Ritalin
SB> advertisement <LOL>  Lose the guy in jeans and keep the
SB> little girl peeking around her daddy's legs.  Then you have
SB> a relationship going, and the photo becomes alive.  I just
SB> did a real QuikCrop <LOL>, trimmed a bit off the top, too. 
SB> See what your think:

SB> http://home.earthlink.net/~digisnaps/bruce-son.jpg

SB> shel

SB> Bruce Dayton wrote:
>> 
>> I'm a little slow to get my 2nd PAW up.  I was scanning some negatives
>> and ran across this little slice of life.  It is my son several years
>> ago.  He was playing at his sister's soccer game and settled in to
>> enjoy the game.
>> 
>> As to the color-back when I used to shoot Kodak Gold 100 (way to
>> contrasty and intense), I have scanned this several times with
>> different programs and played around to reduce the green without
>> ruining the skin tones and white shirt.
>> 
>> As to the crop - first version is uncropped
>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/0537-05.htm
>> I really like this because the framing gives a better feeling about
>> the surroundings and helps me to better understand the subject.
>> 
>> I have cropped this way:
>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/0537-05b.htm
>> 
>> In this one we can better see his expression but I think it loses
>> something.
>> 
>> Let me know what you think.
>> 
>> Thanks
>> 
>> Bruce



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