Hello, Did you use auto focus on this shot? The focus seems to a bit forward of her eyes. Auto focus or manual, y'gotta get the eyes in focus.
Her head is at an awkward angle, the lighting is very good. Framing might be improved with some cropping and trimming. Why is this a "proper" portrait? Shel > [Original Message] > From: Mike Hamilton > http://www.michaelhamilton.ca/images/jocelynshort5-1window.jpg > > I've been taking a portraiture course through my local community > college. This was for an assignment. I was using window light only. > I have other shots using off-camera flash as a fill, but this was by > far the best photo of the session. > > :) > > Any tips? comments? Thanks. -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List PDML@pdml.net http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
