Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-02-14 Thread Dale R. Worley
My apologies for not replying to this sooner. To give the TL;DR, I think the proposed changes adequately address my concerns. "Murray S. Kucherawy" writes: > In the interests of getting this document on its way, I'd like to suggest > the following edits in response to Dale's most recent

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-29 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 29, 2021 at 8:21 AM Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: > On Fri, Jan 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM Tim Wicinski wrote: > >> >> I suggest adding it to this paragraph: >> >>This document specifies experimental updates to the DMARC and PSL >>algorithm cited above, in an attempt to mitigate this

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-29 Thread Alessandro Vesely
On Fri 29/Jan/2021 19:11:56 +0100 I wrote: I attach a patch. P.S. It also changed the example slightly. It sounds wrong as is now. Pls look at that... Best Ale -- ___ dmarc mailing list dmarc@ietf.org

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-29 Thread Alessandro Vesely
On Fri 29/Jan/2021 17:21:19 +0100 Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: On Fri, Jan 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM Tim Wicinski wrote: I suggest adding it to this paragraph: This document specifies experimental updates to the DMARC and PSL algorithm cited above, in an attempt to mitigate this abuse.

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-29 Thread Kurt Andersen (b)
On Fri, Jan 29, 2021 at 6:52 AM Tim Wicinski wrote: > > I suggest adding it to this paragraph: > >This document specifies experimental updates to the DMARC and PSL >algorithm cited above, in an attempt to mitigate this abuse. > update to DMARC = yes; update to PSL = no > On Fri, Jan

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-29 Thread Tim Wicinski
I suggest adding it to this paragraph: This document specifies experimental updates to the DMARC and PSL algorithm cited above, in an attempt to mitigate this abuse. On Fri, Jan 29, 2021 at 1:44 AM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 5:01 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > >>

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-28 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 5:01 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > Since this is an experiment, Appendix A discusses the updates that > happen. we don't actually say explicitly "if the experiment is a success, > the following changes will be made" and perhaps I should add some wording > like that. >

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-23 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Sat, Jan 23, 2021 at 3:29 AM Alessandro Vesely wrote: > On Sat 23/Jan/2021 01:55:05 +0100 Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: > > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > > > >> Here's the paragraph in question > >> > >> To determine the organizational domain for a message under >

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-23 Thread Alessandro Vesely
On Sat 23/Jan/2021 01:55:05 +0100 Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: Here's the paragraph in question To determine the organizational domain for a message under evaluation, and thus where to look for a policy statement, DMARC makes use

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 6:44 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > (this is really for Murray) > > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 6:25 PM Murray S. Kucherawy > wrote: > >> >> Looks good to me where it is. I would add "(PSL)", introducing the >> acronym, right after its first use if we decide to leave it there. >>

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
(this is really for Murray) On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 6:25 PM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > > Looks good to me where it is. I would add "(PSL)", introducing the > acronym, right after its first use if we decide to leave it there. > > A formatting thing to take care of at some point: Anyplace you

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:58 PM Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM Murray S. Kucherawy > wrote: > >> On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:55 PM Kurt Andersen (b) >> wrote: >> >>> On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: >>> Here's the paragraph in question

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
Kurt Since this is an experiment, Appendix A discusses the updates that happen. we don't actually say explicitly "if the experiment is a success, the following changes will be made" and perhaps I should add some wording like that. On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 7:58 PM Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: > On

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Kurt Andersen (b)
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:57 PM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:55 PM Kurt Andersen (b) > wrote: > >> On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: >> >>> >>> Here's the paragraph in question >>> >>> To determine the organizational domain for a message under

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 4:55 PM Kurt Andersen (b) wrote: > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > >> >> Here's the paragraph in question >> >> To determine the organizational domain for a message under >> evaluation, >> and thus where to look for a policy statement,

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Kurt Andersen (b)
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:06 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > > Here's the paragraph in question > > To determine the organizational domain for a message under > evaluation, > and thus where to look for a policy statement, DMARC makes use of > a Public Suffix > List. The process for

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 6:25 PM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:05 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > >> >> Thinking twice, perhaps we don't need to introduce the PSL until Section 3.4. In that case, strike the last two sentences of the above paragraph. >>> >>> It's

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 3:05 PM Tim Wicinski wrote: > > Thinking twice, perhaps we don't need to introduce the PSL until Section >>> 3.4. >>> In that case, strike the last two sentences of the above paragraph. >>> >> >> It's not obvious to me that this is better, but sure, let's discuss it. >>

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 9:19 AM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 2:31 AM Alessandro Vesely wrote: > > > To determine the organizational domain for a message under >> evaluation, >> > and thus where to look for a policy statement, DMARC makes use of a >> > Public

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 5:31 AM Alessandro Vesely wrote: > On Tue 19/Jan/2021 07:43:01 +0100 Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > > [...] > > > I guess "[this document]" refers to the RFC number to be. I think it's > useless > and can be safely removed, all of the five occurrences of it. > > It is

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-22 Thread Tim Wicinski
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 1:43 AM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > In the interests of getting this document on its way, I'd like to suggest > the following edits in response to Dale's most recent message. If the > working group concurs, we can finally get this out to Last Call. > > My goal as an AD

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-20 Thread Douglas Foster
I am happy to postpone the topic in the interest of moving the experiment forward. Ticket 97 has been created to discuss it later. On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 6:23 PM Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: > On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 2:11 PM Douglas Foster < > dougfoster.emailstanda...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> No

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 2:11 PM Douglas Foster < dougfoster.emailstanda...@gmail.com> wrote: > No Murray, I was speaking to the PSD document. > > PSD's entire purpose is to detect abuse of non-existent organizational > domains, so the definition of non-existent is crucial to its success.I >

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Douglas Foster
No Murray, I was speaking to the PSD document. PSD's entire purpose is to detect abuse of non-existent organizational domains, so the definition of non-existent is crucial to its success.I believe the current language will produce false positives, albeit probably a small number.The

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 4:34 AM Douglas Foster < dougfoster.emailstanda...@gmail.com> wrote: > I raised objections to the definition of "non-existent", which never > received an adequate response before the discussion went silent. > > DMARC checks the From header address, which may exist only as

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
On Tue, Jan 19, 2021 at 2:31 AM Alessandro Vesely wrote: > I guess "[this document]" refers to the RFC number to be. I think it's > useless > and can be safely removed, all of the five occurrences of it. > That's fine too. >> I believe that my strongest critique was that section 1 is

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Douglas Foster
I raised objections to the definition of "non-existent", which never received an adequate response before the discussion went silent. DMARC checks the From header address, which may exist only as an identifier used for mass mailings. These mailings are often sent by an ESP using an unrelated

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-19 Thread Alessandro Vesely
On Tue 19/Jan/2021 07:43:01 +0100 Murray S. Kucherawy wrote: [...] On Mon, Nov 16, 2020 at 7:16 PM Dale R. Worley wrote: My apologies for not tending to this promptly. In regard to the description of the experiments, the result criteria are rather subjective, but I don't see that as a

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2021-01-18 Thread Murray S. Kucherawy
In the interests of getting this document on its way, I'd like to suggest the following edits in response to Dale's most recent message. If the working group concurs, we can finally get this out to Last Call. My goal as an AD here is just to get the GenART feedback addressed, but the text is

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2020-11-16 Thread Dale R. Worley
Tim Wicinski writes: > Apologies for the delay on the PSD updates. I sat down with Scott and went > through your review and made lots of edits > related to your comments. I actually attached the reply to your email as > it's been sitting in my editor buffer for a few months too long. > > One

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2020-10-11 Thread Alessandro Vesely
On Sat 10/Oct/2020 00:52:14 +0200 Tim Wicinski wrote: Here's the link to the diff. https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08=draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-09 For a nit: o Provides controls to mitigate potential privacy considerations associated with this extension I don't

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2020-10-09 Thread Tim Wicinski
Dale Apologies for the delay on the PSD updates. I sat down with Scott and went through your review and made lots of edits related to your comments. I actually attached the reply to your email as it's been sitting in my editor buffer for a few months too long. One normative change that I want

Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

2020-04-21 Thread Dale R. Worley
Scott Kitterman writes: > [important discussion clipped for brevity] > If you want to add it and are confident we aren't diving into a deep, > deep hole, I don't strongly object. Just let me know what to add. Well, my review amounted to about 5 pages of ordinary text, and my follow-up e-mail