Sheng-qi Jiang wrote:
>> usr/src/lib/ilmbase/libilmbase.3lib

- "liblmbase(3LIB)" should be "libilmbase(3LIB)"

This:
"ILM Base libraries were consisted by the following 4
libraries."
Should be:
"The Industrial Light & Magic (ILM) base package consists
of the following four libraries:"

- "about the OpenEXR format" should be "about the OpenEXR
image file format." (note period (.) at end)
- remove extra blank lines between files in FILES section.
- remove extra blank lines before FILES, LICENSE and NOTES
sections.

>> usr/src/lib/openexr/libopenexr.3lib
>>   33 cc [ \fIflag\fR\&.\&.\&.\ ] \fIfile\fR\&.\&.\&. 
>> -\fBI/usr/include/OpenEXR -\fBlIlmImf
>>   34 -\fBlImath -\fBlIex -\fBlHalf -\fBlIlmThread -\fBlz \fR [ 
>> \fIlibrary\fR\&.\&.\&. ]
>> - should only discuss IlmImf library now
> I would let it here to state the dependency.

Ok.

Change this:
"IlmImf is library to access the ILM  "OpenEXR"  file  format
for storing 16-bit FP images. Library in this package depend
on the IlmBase libraries."
To:
"The IlmImf library is used to read and write Industrial Light
& Magic (ILM) OpenEXR images. The IlmImf library depends on
the ilmbase libraries."

- change "OpenEXR format" to "OpenEXR image file format".
- remove extra blank lines before FILES, SEE ALSO, LICENSE
and NOTES sections.


You need to add the attribute section like this to all man
pages:

ATTRIBUTES
      See attributes(5) for descriptions of the  following  attri-
      butes:

      _______________________________________
     |   ATTRIBUTE TYPE   |  ATTRIBUTE VALUE|
     |_______________________________________
     | Availability       |  SUNWmeld       |
     |_______________________________________
     | Interface Stability|  Uncommitted    |
     |____________________|_________________|

SEE ALSO
      diff(1), diff3(1)

Cheers,
Jim

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