Thanks Henry, I have no further comments.
Good job! Cheers, Jim Sheng-qi Jiang wrote: > Jim Walker wrote: >> Sheng-qi Jiang wrote: >>>> usr/src/lib/ilmbase/libilmbase.3lib >> >> - "liblmbase(3LIB)" should be "libilmbase(3LIB)" >> >> This: >> "ILM Base libraries were consisted by the following 4 >> libraries." >> Should be: >> "The Industrial Light & Magic (ILM) base package consists >> of the following four libraries:" >> >> - "about the OpenEXR format" should be "about the OpenEXR >> image file format." (note period (.) at end) >> - remove extra blank lines between files in FILES section. >> - remove extra blank lines before FILES, LICENSE and NOTES >> sections. >> > fixed. >>>> usr/src/lib/openexr/libopenexr.3lib >>>> 33 cc [ \fIflag\fR\&.\&.\&.\ ] \fIfile\fR\&.\&.\&. >>>> -\fBI/usr/include/OpenEXR -\fBlIlmImf >>>> 34 -\fBlImath -\fBlIex -\fBlHalf -\fBlIlmThread -\fBlz \fR [ >>>> \fIlibrary\fR\&.\&.\&. ] >>>> - should only discuss IlmImf library now >>> I would let it here to state the dependency. >> >> Ok. >> >> Change this: >> "IlmImf is library to access the ILM "OpenEXR" file format >> for storing 16-bit FP images. Library in this package depend >> on the IlmBase libraries." >> To: >> "The IlmImf library is used to read and write Industrial Light >> & Magic (ILM) OpenEXR images. The IlmImf library depends on >> the ilmbase libraries." >> >> - change "OpenEXR format" to "OpenEXR image file format". >> - remove extra blank lines before FILES, SEE ALSO, LICENSE >> and NOTES sections. >> >> >> You need to add the attribute section like this to all man >> pages: >> > Fixed. >> ATTRIBUTES >> See attributes(5) for descriptions of the following attri- >> butes: >> >> _______________________________________ >> | ATTRIBUTE TYPE | ATTRIBUTE VALUE| >> |_______________________________________ >> | Availability | SUNWmeld | >> |_______________________________________ >> | Interface Stability| Uncommitted | >> |____________________|_________________| >> >> SEE ALSO >> diff(1), diff3(1) >> >> Cheers, >> Jim > Thanks.
