Jim Walker wrote:
> Sheng-qi Jiang wrote:
>>> usr/src/lib/ilmbase/libilmbase.3lib
>
> - "liblmbase(3LIB)" should be "libilmbase(3LIB)"
>
> This:
> "ILM Base libraries were consisted by the following 4
> libraries."
> Should be:
> "The Industrial Light & Magic (ILM) base package consists
> of the following four libraries:"
>
> - "about the OpenEXR format" should be "about the OpenEXR
> image file format." (note period (.) at end)
> - remove extra blank lines between files in FILES section.
> - remove extra blank lines before FILES, LICENSE and NOTES
> sections.
>
fixed.
>>> usr/src/lib/openexr/libopenexr.3lib
>>>   33 cc [ \fIflag\fR\&.\&.\&.\ ] \fIfile\fR\&.\&.\&. 
>>> -\fBI/usr/include/OpenEXR -\fBlIlmImf
>>>   34 -\fBlImath -\fBlIex -\fBlHalf -\fBlIlmThread -\fBlz \fR [ 
>>> \fIlibrary\fR\&.\&.\&. ]
>>> - should only discuss IlmImf library now
>> I would let it here to state the dependency.
>
> Ok.
>
> Change this:
> "IlmImf is library to access the ILM  "OpenEXR"  file  format
> for storing 16-bit FP images. Library in this package depend
> on the IlmBase libraries."
> To:
> "The IlmImf library is used to read and write Industrial Light
> & Magic (ILM) OpenEXR images. The IlmImf library depends on
> the ilmbase libraries."
>
> - change "OpenEXR format" to "OpenEXR image file format".
> - remove extra blank lines before FILES, SEE ALSO, LICENSE
> and NOTES sections.
>
>
> You need to add the attribute section like this to all man
> pages:
>
Fixed.
> ATTRIBUTES
>      See attributes(5) for descriptions of the  following  attri-
>      butes:
>
>      _______________________________________
>     |   ATTRIBUTE TYPE   |  ATTRIBUTE VALUE|
>     |_______________________________________
>     | Availability       |  SUNWmeld       |
>     |_______________________________________
>     | Interface Stability|  Uncommitted    |
>     |____________________|_________________|
>
> SEE ALSO
>      diff(1), diff3(1)
>
> Cheers,
> Jim
Thanks.

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