2013/7/31 Marcus (OOo) <marcus.m...@wtnet.de> > Am 07/31/2013 02:08 AM, schrieb Ricardo Berlasso: > >> 2013/7/31 Marcus (OOo)<marcus.m...@wtnet.de> >> >> Am 07/28/2013 10:18 PM, schrieb Marcus (OOo): >>> >>> Am 07/28/2013 09:55 PM, schrieb Dave Fisher: >>> >>>> >>>> >>>>> On Jul 28, 2013, at 11:21 AM, Marcus (OOo) wrote: >>>>> >>>>> Am 07/28/2013 06:28 PM, schrieb Dave Fisher: >>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>>> On Jul 28, 2013, at 5:46 AM, Marcus (OOo) wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Am 07/28/2013 02:18 PM, schrieb Rob Weir: >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> On Sun, Jul 28, 2013 at 8:12 AM, Marcus >>>>>>>>> (OOo)<marcus.m...@wtnet.de> wrote: >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Am 07/28/2013 01:56 PM, schrieb janI: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> On 28 July 2013 13:47, Marcus (OOo)<marcus.m...@wtnet.de> >>>>>>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> Am 07/28/2013 12:37 PM, schrieb Andrea Pescetti: >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> On 24/07/2013 Hagar Delest wrote: >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> Huge thanks for such reactivity indeed. >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> But a lot of people are missing it due to the "portable" >>>>>>>>>>>>> version being >>>>>>>>>>>>> too hidden in our download infrastructure. >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> What's the best solution to ensure that: >>>>>>>>>>>>> 1) Users can actually find the "portable" version and >>>>>>>>>>>>> 2) Users are correctly informed that this is a third-party >>>>>>>>>>>>> port? >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> My proposal (subject to lazy consensus or discussion here) >>>>>>>>>>>>> would be to >>>>>>>>>>>>> modify >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> http://www.openoffice.org/******download/<http://www.openoffice.org/****download/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/**download/<http://www.openoffice.org/**download/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/**download/<http://openoffice.org/download/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/download/<http://www.openoffice.org/download/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> as follows: add it to the line that says >>>>>>>>>>>>> Get all platforms, languages, language packs | Source Code >>>>>>>>>>>>> tarballs and >>>>>>>>>>>>> SDK | >>>>>>>>>>>>> so that it becomes >>>>>>>>>>>>> Get all platforms, languages, language packs | Source Code >>>>>>>>>>>>> tarballs and >>>>>>>>>>>>> SDK | Third-party and portable versions >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> and to link the additional text to >>>>>>>>>>>>> http://www.openoffice.org/******porting/<http://www.openoffice.org/****porting/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/**porting/<http://www.openoffice.org/**porting/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/**porting/<http://openoffice.org/porting/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> <http://www.**openoffice.org/porting/<http://www.openoffice.org/porting/> >>>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> so that people are correctly informed. This also ensures that >>>>>>>>>>>>> when/if we >>>>>>>>>>>>> have other portable versions available nothing needs to be >>>>>>>>>>>>> changed. >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> To have a visible impression see here: >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> http://ooo-site.staging.****apac**he.org/download/test/**** >>>>>>>>>>>> index.** <http://he.org/download/test/**index.**> >>>>>>>>>>>> html<http://apache.org/**download/test/**index.html<http://apache.org/download/test/**index.html> >>>>>>>>>>>> >< >>>>>>>>>>>> http://ooo-site.staging.**apac**he.org/download/test/**index.** >>>>>>>>>>>> html <http://apache.org/download/test/**index.html>< >>>>>>>>>>>> http://ooo-site.staging.**apache.org/download/test/**index.html<http://ooo-site.staging.apache.org/download/test/index.html> >>>>>>>>>>>> > >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>> +1, is "portings" the right word ? my dictionary suggest >>>>>>>>>>> "ports", but I >>>>>>>>>>> am >>>>>>>>>>> no native speaker. >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> Hm, my favorite online dictionary says "portings". ;-) Let's see >>>>>>>>>> what our >>>>>>>>>> native speakers will say. >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>> "ports" is more usual in a software context. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> But "portable" is ambiguous, since it means two things: 1) capable >>>>>>>>> of >>>>>>>>> being ported to multiple platforms. 2) something you can carry. >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> Since we offer portable code, ports of the binaries and a portable >>>>>>>>> version, it is hard to avoid confusion here ;-) >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> The link says: >>>>>>>> Portable USB version and other third-party portings >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> I think "Third-party ports including a portable USB version" is >>>>>>> better US English. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>>> and the title: >>>>>>>> Get Apache OpenOffice as portable USB version or choose from other >>>>>>>> third-party portings >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> "Get third-party ports of Apache OpenOffice including a portable USB >>>>>>> version." >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> I want to put the portable thing first as it seems to be the more >>>>>> important info. So, how to do it in better English? >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>> Link: "Portable USB versions and third-party ports." >>>>> >>>>> Title: "Get Apache OpenOffice software packaged as portable USB >>>>> versions and third-party ports." >>>>> >>>>> >>>> Thanks, I've corrected the text. >>>> >>>> >>> This little change is now also live. >>> >> >> >> Looks nice! I've tried to implement this on the ES download site but >> almost >> break the page... I'm not on good relations with html (it's all OK, in >> fact I ended correcting a typo...). I'll look at this again later. >> > > If you need a helping hand, just give me a mail. > > Maybe you should wait a few days until the new webpage(s) have been > settled down a bit with the last mirco fixes - as I can see already the > next requests.
Perfect! Many thanks! Regards Ricardo > > > Marcus > > > > Shouldn't this be enough to make it clear? Or is it better when I >>> >>>> replace "Portable USB version" with "Portable USB App"? >>>>>>>> >>>>>>>> >>>>>>> If we say App then users will be thinking "App Store". >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>> OK >>>>>> >>>>>> Marcus >>>>>> >>>>> > ------------------------------**------------------------------**--------- > To unsubscribe, e-mail: > dev-unsubscribe@openoffice.**apache.org<dev-unsubscr...@openoffice.apache.org> > For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@openoffice.apache.org > >
