How can we clarify the wording. If it is misleading you, we need to improve it. The text is not asking to create an entry (i.e. it does not "ask for an assignment"), but rather to change an entry that already exists. (And obviously, it won't do so until and if the document becomes an RFC.)

Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 12:20 PM, tom petch wrote:
From: Joel M. Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com>
Sent: 18 June 2021 16:29

Tom, I am not sure what you mean by "the update has happened">  The code
point has been assigned.  Assuming this document becomes an RFC, it will
be significantly clearer if the 303 code point IANA entry points at this
for information instead of 5309.  So this document requests that update.

<tp>
I mean that the IANA Registry has been updated to include 303 with a reference 
to 5309 so I think it wrong of this I-D to ask for assignment which is what I 
see it doing with

IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)"  with the following status 
types:

   |  303    |  p2pOverLan      |    Point to Point over LAN interface  |

  It should only ask for the reference to be changed and should also spell out 
that the assignment was made by Expert Review since that may otherwise be 
unclear to users..

Likewise the update to the YANG module is automatic, has happened and so 
specifying it here can only confuse IMHO.

And elsewhere I find the flavour misleading.  The abstract and introduction 
should IMHO reference RFC5309 as the source of p2pOverLan, add that the values 
have been assigned by Expert Review and that this I-D ... well I am not clear 
what it does except lay claim to things that others have already done with 
RFC5309 and expert review :-)

I think too that camel case is problematic.  SMI uses it, YANG does not but we 
are now likely stuck with identity p2pOverLan .

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 7:47 AM, tom petch wrote:
From: Lsr <lsr-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 
<j...@joelhalpern.com>
Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46

This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
    I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.

A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
point does reference 5309.)

<tp>
which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain this.  
I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the update has 
happened.

What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was made 
by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to this I-D 
and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an updates to 5309 
as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG having fun with 
that concept but I would go for it.

I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present it 
looks like an Unused Ref.

Tom Petch



Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that LSR 
is probably as good as any other place.

Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
be referenced?

Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern" <lsr-boun...@ietf.org on 
behalf of j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

       Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
       IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.

       It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document
       (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
       asked for it would be helpful.

       The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
       community to improve and clarify teh draft.

       Thank you,
       Joel


       -------- Forwarded Message --------
       Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
       Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
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       To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


       A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
       directories.


                Title           : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to
       Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
                Authors         : Daiying Liu
                                  Joel Halpern
                                  Congjie Zhang
        Filename        : draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
        Pages           : 7
        Date            : 2021-06-16

       Abstract:
           The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
           types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
           the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
           state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
           defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
           provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.


       The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/

       There is also an htmlized version available at:
       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00


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