Hi Med and All:
Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to
follow the comments;
The main updating is:
1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
2. Change the reference style;
3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is
lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change
this section next update the document once this part is finalized;
And I would like to share more background information for this internet
draft:
As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment from
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several weeks
ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc describing
why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the
management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific
management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we
propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher
layer and lower layer);
Brs
-----Original Message-----
From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>
Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
To: Joel M. Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com>; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Hi Joel, all,
Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:
* pdf:
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a&q=1&e=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.pdf
* doc:
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=938b5849-cc1060ab-938b18d2-86073b36ea28-e0406a2599fa2a6d&q=1&e=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fraw%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.docx
Cheers,
Med
> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Lsr [mailto:lsr-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Joel M. Halpern
> Envoyé : mercredi 16 juin 2021 22:47 À : Acee Lindem (acee)
> <a...@cisco.com>; lsr@ietf.org Objet : Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with
> 5309.
> I believe they are. If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.
>
> A reference would be reasonable to add. (The IANA entry for the code
> point does reference 5309.)
>
> Thank you,
> Joel
>
>
>
> On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> > Hi Joel,
> >
> > At first I wondered where this document should reside and then
> decided that LSR is probably as good as any other place.
> >
> > Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it
> should be referenced?
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Acee
> >
> >
> > On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern" <lsr-
> boun...@ietf.org on behalf of j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> >
> > Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type
> assignment from
> > IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet
> links.
> >
> > It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that
> a document
> > (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and
> why we
> > asked for it would be helpful.
> >
> > The below announcement is that draft. We would like to work
> with the
> > community to improve and clarify teh draft.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > Joel
> >
> >
> > -------- Forwarded Message --------
> > Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> > Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
> > From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
> > Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
> > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-
> Drafts
> > directories.
> >
> >
> > Title : Interface Stack Table Definition
> for Point to
> > Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
> > Authors : Daiying Liu
> > Joel Halpern
> > Congjie Zhang
> > Filename : draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> > Pages : 7
> > Date : 2021-06-16
> >
> > Abstract:
> > The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used
> circuit
> > types in link state routing protocol. It is important to
> identify
> > the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies,
> flooding link
> > state database packets, and monitor the link state. This
> document
> > defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack
> tables to
> > provide benefit for operation, maintenance and
> statistics.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/
> >
> > There is also an htmlized version available at:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-
> p2poverlan-00
> >
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >
> >
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