Hi, I've reviewed the draft and I support the adoption. This draft proposes a set of extensions for PCEP to configure the ELP information for SR-MPLS networks. It can effectively promote the application of entropy label in centralized control scenarios.
Here I have some minor comments for the authors' consideration: 1. Section 2.1: Terminology Instead of solely referencing external documents for terminology, it would be beneficial to compile a dedicated list of terms used within this draft. Furthermore, it's advisable to ensure that all terms, such as "LSR," are provided with their full names upon first mention. 2. Entropy Label Position (ELP) To maintain consistency and clarity, I suggest introducing the term "Entropy Label Position (ELP)" upon its initial mention in the document, followed by the abbreviated form "ELP" for subsequent references. 3. PCRep, PCUpd, or PCInitiate Messages In Section 4.2, it would be beneficial to include a brief description of the original documents that define terms such as PCRep, PCUpd, or PCInitiate messages. 4. Section 5: Operations I agree with Xuesong's comments to rename the section title to "Operational Example" for improved clarity. Additionally, I recommend expanding the description to encompass the behaviors associated with different roles, providing a more comprehensive understanding. Best regards, Weiqiang Cheng From: Dhruv Dhody Date: 2024-01-27 01:19 To: pce CC: pce-chairs; draft-peng-pce-entropy-label-position Subject: [Pce] WG Adoption of draft-peng-pce-entropy-label-position-10 Hi WG, This email begins the WG adoption poll for draft-peng-pce-entropy-label-position-10 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-peng-pce-entropy-label-position/ Should this draft be adopted by the PCE WG? Please state your reasons - Why / Why not? What needs to be fixed before or after adoption? Are you willing to work on this draft? Review comments should be posted to the list. Please respond by Monday 12th Feb 2024. Please be more vocal during WG polls! Thanks! Dhruv & Julien
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