michelle olson wrote: > Hi all, > > I've drafted a feature spot for the OpenSolaris Bible here: > http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_25/ > > Let me know what you think.
The wording here seems somewhat awkward: The OpenSolaris Bible publication date is set for February 17th! This first English-language book on OpenSolaris will show you... What about: The first English-language book on OpenSolaris, OpenSolaris Bible, is set to be published February 17th. This book will show you... Cheers, -- Shawn Walker _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
