Hi Alysson, Thanks for your time to review, my replies inline.
On 01/28/09 14:52, Alysson Troffer wrote: > This is very exciting news! Just a couple of things: > > 1. To me, it does seem odd to have the book graphic link to Wiley's > page about the book and the first text link to link to Amazon.com. > Could you perhaps signify that the text link takes you to Amazon.com? > For example: > > The first English-language book on OpenSolaris, OpenSolaris Bible > (available on Amazon.com), is set to be published by Wiley on February > 17th. I've made this change. > > Or, maybe it's too distracting... > > 2. In my browser (Mac Safari 3.2.1), the top of the book graphic > doesn't line up with the first sentence. Ideally, it would (but > perhaps it's only in my browser). > > 3. Why not use the exact name of the Installation and Packaging > community (rather than Install & Packaging Group)? I've changed Install to Installation. In general, I'm using the term Group rather than Community Group to keep it shorter and because I think Group is more meaningful and less confusing. > > 4. The Table of Contents link takes you to the index, and the Index > link takes you to the Table of Contents. These should be reversed. Good catch, I've fixed this. Thanks, Michelle > > Alysson > > > michelle olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've drafted a feature spot for the OpenSolaris Bible here: >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_25/ >> >> Let me know what you think. >> >> Thanks, >> Michelle >> _______________________________________________ >> website-discuss mailing list >> [email protected] >> _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
