On 29 Jan 2009, at 01:12, Michelle Olson wrote: >> The first English-language book on OpenSolaris, OpenSolaris Bible >> (available on Amazon.com), is set to be published by Wiley on >> February >> 17th. > > I've made this change.
Perhaps it would be better to turn "Pre-order your copy today" (last paragraph) into the amazon.com link instead? Web text ought to be as short and snappy as possible, so adding parenthetical text into what should be the most attention-grabbing sentence of them all (the first one) doesn't work so well, IMHO. Cheeri, Calum. -- CALUM BENSON, Usability Engineer Sun Microsystems Ireland mailto:[email protected] OpenSolaris Desktop Team http://blogs.sun.com/calum +353 1 819 9771 Any opinions are personal and not necessarily those of Sun Microsystems _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
