Shawn Walker wrote: > michelle olson wrote: >> Hi all, >> >> I've drafted a feature spot for the OpenSolaris Bible here: >> http://opensolaris.org/os/project/website/content/home_page_draft_25/ >> >> Let me know what you think. > > The wording here seems somewhat awkward: > > The OpenSolaris Bible publication date is set for February 17th! > > This first English-language book on OpenSolaris will show you... > > What about: > > The first English-language book on OpenSolaris, OpenSolaris Bible, is > set to be published February 17th. This book will show you...
Thanks for the rewrite Shawn, I've made this change. -Michelle > > Cheers, _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
