Great idea, Calum. Michelle, could you italicize the book title in that first sentence?
Alysson Calum Benson wrote: > > On 29 Jan 2009, at 01:12, Michelle Olson wrote: > >>> The first English-language book on OpenSolaris, OpenSolaris Bible >>> (available on Amazon.com), is set to be published by Wiley on February >>> 17th. >> >> I've made this change. > > > Perhaps it would be better to turn "Pre-order your copy today" (last > paragraph) into the amazon.com link instead? Web text ought to be as > short and snappy as possible, so adding parenthetical text into what > should be the most attention-grabbing sentence of them all (the first > one) doesn't work so well, IMHO. > > Cheeri, > Calum. > _______________________________________________ website-discuss mailing list [email protected]
