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Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
A few thoughts. First, again with the caveat that I am not familiar
with the photo-essay concept as might
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Bob
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Boris Liberman
Sent: 20 October 2008 20:07
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Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS
A few thoughts. First, again with the caveat that I am not familiar
with the photo-essay concept as might be interpreted by the
distinguished learned judges, I have been uncomfortable with the two-
part structure you have selected since you first mentioned it.
Without narration (as in a
Bob W wrote:
Here's another draft of the slideshow, incorporating some suggestions
people have kindly made:
http://www.web-options.com/ARPS2/
Comments solicited.
Thanks,
Bob
Bob, I think that #2 is considerably weaker than photo #5 whereas they
seem to be about the same motif.
Also I am
From: Bob W [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
consider them if they have gross technical faults.
How very middleagedwhitemale of them. Don't they know art (sorry, Art) when
they see it?
Outraged of Notting Hill
From: Bob W [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
consider them if they have gross technical faults.
How very middleagedwhitemale of them. Don't they know art
(sorry, Art) when they see it?
Outraged of Notting Hill
They're just a bunch
Here's another draft of the slideshow, incorporating some suggestions
people have kindly made:
http://www.web-options.com/ARPS2/
Comments solicited.
Thanks,
Bob
From: Bob W [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
consider them if they have
From: Stan Halpin [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Date: 2008/10/16 Thu AM 12:27:26 GMT
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this context, but
among these 9 images, I think
My opinion... I'd drop the man in the door image. The cut off human
and very little detail to show what I can assume is the final step in
the process as you depicted it, storage, just don't do it for me.
I'd then move the last image into position #3. Doesn't seem to fit as
a last image,
AM 12:27:26 GMT
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Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this
context, but
among these 9 images, I think the strongest and the one I
would end
a mini-show
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Sent: Sunday, October 12, 2008 6:01 AM
Subject: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
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Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
Hi Bob: Boy, your 9 pic essay really is great. The
sequencing looks good
to me. You know, I really like this shot
http
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Subject: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly
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Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
Bob,
All the Fez photos are very accomplished and the series are
interesting.
I think the problem with the clincher is not having a very
close photo.
Perhaps some link of portrait would be too cliche, but I yearn
On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays,
[...]
Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a
Flash gallery
so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work:
http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/
I'd welcome your thoughts about the content, sequencing and
so on. It
will need to lose some pictures, but
October 2008 20:08
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Subject: RE: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
I agree - I think a portrait of one of the workers would be very
effective as a clincher for the tanneries shots. Unfortunately I
haven't got one - I wasn't shooting to a plan
Very nice Bob.
As Frank said, i don't envy the thought of editing those to 8-9 photos.
Dave
On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need
Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this context, but
among these 9 images, I think the strongest and the one I would end
a mini-show with is #7. The bright yellow is a nice exclamation point
behind what has been mostly muted colors.
stan
On Oct 15, 2008, at 5:41 PM, David J
I went back and looked at the whole set in that first edit.
For what it is worth, I would still end with #7 from the reduced set.
Number 8 and 9 I would delete. In their place I would use 9299-213 in
position #7 and A039901 in #8 position.
Oh, and I would choose -171 vs. -174 for the
On Oct 12, 2008, at 7:01 AM, Bob W wrote:
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a
slideshow,
It is really tough question, Sir Bob, that you're asking. I, for one,
really liked the slide show. Many photographs of other photographers
came up in my mind when I saw this gallery. I cannot say much about this
APRS submission business, but I do thank you for taking me visually
along on your
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a
slideshow, one of which will be about the tanneries -
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