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Bob
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> Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
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> A few th
A few thoughts. First, again with the caveat that I am not familiar
with the photo-essay concept as might be interpreted by the
distinguished learned judges, I have been uncomfortable with the two-
part structure you have selected since you first mentioned it.
Without narration (as in a live
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following an act of gross stupidity over the weekend.
Bob
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Bob W wrote:
Here's another draft of the slideshow, incorporating some suggestions
people have kindly made:
http://www.web-options.com/ARPS2/
Comments solicited.
Thanks,
Bob
Bob, I think that #2 is considerably weaker than photo #5 whereas they
seem to be about the same motif.
Also I am n
Here's another draft of the slideshow, incorporating some suggestions
people have kindly made:
http://www.web-options.com/ARPS2/
Comments solicited.
Thanks,
Bob
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> >
> > From: "Bob W" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
> > consider them if
> > From: "Bob W" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
> > consider them if they have gross technical faults.
>
> How very middleagedwhitemale of them. Don't they know art
> (sorry, Art) when they see it?
>
> Outraged of Notting Hill
They're
>
> From: "Bob W" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Whatever their other qualities, the RPS judges just won't even
> consider them if they have gross technical faults.
How very middleagedwhitemale of them. Don't they know art (sorry, Art) when
they see it?
Outraged of Notting Hill
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> > Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
> >
> > Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this
> context, but
My opinion... I'd drop the "man in the door image". The cut off human
and very little detail to show what I can assume is the final step in
the process as you depicted it, storage, just don't do it for me.
I'd then move the last image into position #3. Doesn't seem to fit as
a last image,
>
> From: Stan Halpin <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> Date: 2008/10/16 Thu AM 12:27:26 GMT
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> Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this context, but
> amo
On Oct 12, 2008, at 7:01 AM, Bob W wrote:
A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essays, presented as a
slideshow,
I went back and looked at the whole set in that first edit.
For what it is worth, I would still end with #7 from the reduced set.
Number 8 and 9 I would delete. In their place I would use 9299-213 in
position #7 and A039901 in #8 position.
Oh, and I would choose -171 vs. -174 for the second
Not sure I understand the criteria for success in this context, but
among these 9 images, I think the "strongest" and the one I would end
a mini-show with is #7. The bright yellow is a nice exclamation point
behind what has been mostly muted colors.
stan
On Oct 15, 2008, at 5:41 PM, David
Very nice Bob.
As Frank said, i don't envy the thought of editing those to 8-9 photos.
Dave
On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
> http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
>
> For the ARPS submission I
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> I agree - I think a portrait of one of the workers would be very
> effective as a clinch
[...]
> > Here is my 2nd edit of the tanneries section, done as a
> Flash gallery
> > so you can see approximately how the slideshow will work:
> > http://www.web-options.com/RPSTanneries/
> >
> > I'd welcome your thoughts about the content, sequencing and
> so on. It
> > will need to lose some p
On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 7:01 AM, Bob W <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> A couple of days ago I posted a first edit of the tanneries in Fez:
> http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/
>
> For the ARPS submission I need an essay of exactly 15 pictures. I have
> decided that I will probably make 2 mini-essay
008 16:57
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> Subject: Re: Fez - candidate essay for the RPS. Opinions please.
>
> Bob,
> All the Fez photos are very accomplished and the series are
> interesting.
> I think the problem with the clincher is not having a very
> close photo.
>
alf Of Christine Aguila
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>> Hi Bob: Boy, your 9 pic essay really is great. The
>> sequencing looks good
>> to me. You know
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> Hi Bob: Boy, your 9 pic essay really is great. The
> sequencing looks go
Hi Bob: Boy, your 9 pic essay really is great. The sequencing looks good
to me. You know, I really like this shot
http://www.web-options.com/Tanneries/content/_A039925_large.html, which is
not in your 2nd edit. Just a thought--really all the pics in the 2nd edit
are great. I have no idea w
It is really tough question, Sir Bob, that you're asking. I, for one,
really liked the slide show. Many photographs of other photographers
came up in my mind when I saw this gallery. I cannot say much about this
APRS submission business, but I do thank you for taking me visually
along on your t
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