On Mon, Jul 9, 2012 at 8:20 PM, Barry Dingle <btdin...@gmail.com> wrote:
> Mark, > > Really good job. My suggestions are mainly minor edits. Some (hopefully) > improve the meaning. > Barry, excellent job -- I've saved your list, too. It'll definitely reduce "last call" workload (if agreement is achieved with Section 5) Thanks, Mark Rejhon
