Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-28 Thread tom petch
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
Sent: 24 June 2021 19:51

Joel -

Thanx for the revised version.
While I would still have some editorial comments to make, I think you have done 
a good job of responding to the comments made.

The bigger question for me is whether the draft is needed at all.
I am still of the opinion that it is not needed.


Again, I am in broad agreement with Les.  As I suggested before, I would still 
add to the Introduction or - probably - Abstract the fact that the assignment 
of a value to ifType was made by Expert Review.  Those who know nothing of IETF 
procedures will not find it odd that RFC5309 does not contain IANA 
Considerations.  Those that know a little, and see that omission, may think 
that the correct procedures have not been followed, for assignment.  Those who 
know the spectrum of possibilities will look at the assignment policy, see it 
is Expert Review and deduce that that is how the assignment was made.  And even 
if there is a more recent RFC to be pointed to, I think it clearer to spell out 
that Expert Review was how the value was assigned and so not to look for 
further documentation.

Tom Petch.

   Les


> -Original Message-
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
> Sent: Thursday, June 24, 2021 5:52 AM
> To: tom petch ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> Tom, please look at the latest revision and see if that helps.
>
> Also note, this document does not assign the ifType. (I.e. it does not
> "create an ifType".)  That is already done.
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
> On 6/24/2021 7:27 AM, tom petch wrote:
> > From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
> > Sent: 23 June 2021 17:38
> >
> > Joel -
> >
> > I have had concerns from the beginning as to whether this draft is really
> needed.
> > As I have commented previously, the only content of any significance is
> Section 4 - and that only provides example settings of the management fields
> for this interface type.
> > I question whether a draft is required for this purpose.
> > I will defer on this matter to folks more expert in this area than I, but, 
> > my
> opinion is that a draft solely for this purpose is not required.
> >
> > 
> > Les has a point.  I see a relevant I-D and dive in and review it and do not
> stop to think whether or not this work justifies an RFC.  Having reviewed it,
> and having worked out what is new - as Les says, examples in Section 4 and
> not much else  - I struggle to see a justification.
> >
> > The other thought that this brought to mind is why create an ifType value
> when the world has been getting on quite happily without it for 13 years?  Is
> there anything that now needs a value which previously did not?  If so, that
> might be more suitable for an I-D.
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> >
> > I thought it polite to mention this before you spend the time and effort to
> produce a new version.
> >
> >     Les
> >
> >
> >> -Original Message-
> >> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of tom petch
> >> Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1:43 AM
> >> To: Joel M. Halpern ; Harold Liu
> >> ; lsr@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>
> >> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> >> Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57
> >>
> >> Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
> >> We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.
> >>
> >> 
> >> I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is time
> for
> >> a new version to comment on.
> >>
> >> Tom Petch
> >>
> >> Yours,
> >> Joel
> >>
> >> On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:
> >>> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> >>> Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13
> >>>
> >>> Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> >>> gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> >>> 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> >>> experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> >>> yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> >>> of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
> >>>
> >>> 
> >>> Stepping back a few e-mails,
> >>> I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA
> >> Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309
> >> defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims a

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-24 Thread Gyan Mishra
Joel

>From my experience and vendor best practice as well as operators
deployments as well have always configure ethernet interfaces with P2P
subnet /31 or /127 as network type P2P for ospf to bypass DR election
immediate converge to Full state and ISIS  to avoid  DIS election and more
efficient.

This basic IGP optimization has been done for many decades as a standard
for all operators.

As Les stated as this has been a best practice for operators I guess
forever Day 1 I would call an optimization, I am not sure the draft is
necessary as well.

There are so many configuration knob type best practices for IGP and EGP as
that also digs into vendor implementations aspects and not protocol design
or even network architecture or design, I am not sure IETF is the place for
this informational documentation.

Kind Regards

Gyan

On Thu, Jun 24, 2021 at 4:25 PM Joel Halpern Direct <
jmh.dir...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:

> "Needed"?  Probably not.  Almost no Informational RFCs are "needed".
> The question is whether the WG considers it useful.
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
> On 6/24/2021 2:51 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> > Joel -
> >
> > Thanx for the revised version.
> > While I would still have some editorial comments to make, I think you
> have done a good job of responding to the comments made.
> >
> > The bigger question for me is whether the draft is needed at all.
> > I am still of the opinion that it is not needed.
> >
> > Les
> >
> >
> >> -Original Message-
> >> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
> >> Sent: Thursday, June 24, 2021 5:52 AM
> >> To: tom petch ; lsr@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>
> >> Tom, please look at the latest revision and see if that helps.
> >>
> >> Also note, this document does not assign the ifType. (I.e. it does not
> >> "create an ifType".)  That is already done.
> >>
> >> Yours,
> >> Joel
> >>
> >> On 6/24/2021 7:27 AM, tom petch wrote:
> >>> From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
> >>> Sent: 23 June 2021 17:38
> >>>
> >>> Joel -
> >>>
> >>> I have had concerns from the beginning as to whether this draft is
> really
> >> needed.
> >>> As I have commented previously, the only content of any significance is
> >> Section 4 - and that only provides example settings of the management
> fields
> >> for this interface type.
> >>> I question whether a draft is required for this purpose.
> >>> I will defer on this matter to folks more expert in this area than I,
> but, my
> >> opinion is that a draft solely for this purpose is not required.
> >>>
> >>> 
> >>> Les has a point.  I see a relevant I-D and dive in and review it and
> do not
> >> stop to think whether or not this work justifies an RFC.  Having
> reviewed it,
> >> and having worked out what is new - as Les says, examples in Section 4
> and
> >> not much else  - I struggle to see a justification.
> >>>
> >>> The other thought that this brought to mind is why create an ifType
> value
> >> when the world has been getting on quite happily without it for 13
> years?  Is
> >> there anything that now needs a value which previously did not?  If so,
> that
> >> might be more suitable for an I-D.
> >>>
> >>> Tom Petch
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> I thought it polite to mention this before you spend the time and
> effort to
> >> produce a new version.
> >>>
> >>>  Les
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>> -Original Message-
> >>>> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of tom petch
> >>>> Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1:43 AM
> >>>> To: Joel M. Halpern ; Harold Liu
> >>>> ; lsr@ietf.org
> >>>> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>>>
> >>>> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> >>>> Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57
> >>>>
> >>>> Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
> >>>> We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.
> >>>>
> >>>> 
> >>>> I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is
> time
> >> for
> >>>> a new version to comment on.
> >>>>
> >>>> Tom Petch
> >>>>
> >>>> Yours,
>

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-24 Thread Joel M. Halpern

Tom, please look at the latest revision and see if that helps.

Also note, this document does not assign the ifType. (I.e. it does not 
"create an ifType".)  That is already done.


Yours,
Joel

On 6/24/2021 7:27 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
Sent: 23 June 2021 17:38

Joel -

I have had concerns from the beginning as to whether this draft is really 
needed.
As I have commented previously, the only content of any significance is Section 
4 - and that only provides example settings of the management fields for this 
interface type.
I question whether a draft is required for this purpose.
I will defer on this matter to folks more expert in this area than I, but, my 
opinion is that a draft solely for this purpose is not required.


Les has a point.  I see a relevant I-D and dive in and review it and do not 
stop to think whether or not this work justifies an RFC.  Having reviewed it, 
and having worked out what is new - as Les says, examples in Section 4 and not 
much else  - I struggle to see a justification.

The other thought that this brought to mind is why create an ifType value when 
the world has been getting on quite happily without it for 13 years?  Is there 
anything that now needs a value which previously did not?  If so, that might be 
more suitable for an I-D.

Tom Petch


I thought it polite to mention this before you spend the time and effort to 
produce a new version.

Les



-Original Message-
From: Lsr  On Behalf Of tom petch
Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1:43 AM
To: Joel M. Halpern ; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57

Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.


I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is time for
a new version to comment on.

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.


Stepping back a few e-mails,
I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA

Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309
defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it
does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without a
numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The concept
of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and this is
one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..


I would say
Abstract
The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by

IANA, by Expert Review.

This memo 

Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.

Tom Petch

We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu



Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01

to follow the comments;

  The main updating is:
  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
introduction;
  2. Change the reference style;
  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there

is lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
this
section next update the document once this part is finalized;



I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in

its present form,


It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done

and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the
same data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in
future if not now.


This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout

the I-D.


Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.

This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if
anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text
from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are
quoting.


You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be

not, it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should
not be reproducing such

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-24 Thread tom petch
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
Sent: 23 June 2021 17:38

Joel -

I have had concerns from the beginning as to whether this draft is really 
needed.
As I have commented previously, the only content of any significance is Section 
4 - and that only provides example settings of the management fields for this 
interface type.
I question whether a draft is required for this purpose.
I will defer on this matter to folks more expert in this area than I, but, my 
opinion is that a draft solely for this purpose is not required.


Les has a point.  I see a relevant I-D and dive in and review it and do not 
stop to think whether or not this work justifies an RFC.  Having reviewed it, 
and having worked out what is new - as Les says, examples in Section 4 and not 
much else  - I struggle to see a justification.

The other thought that this brought to mind is why create an ifType value when 
the world has been getting on quite happily without it for 13 years?  Is there 
anything that now needs a value which previously did not?  If so, that might be 
more suitable for an I-D.

Tom Petch


I thought it polite to mention this before you spend the time and effort to 
produce a new version.

   Les


> -Original Message-
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of tom petch
> Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1:43 AM
> To: Joel M. Halpern ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57
>
> Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
> We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.
>
> 
> I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is time for
> a new version to comment on.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
> On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:
> > From: Joel M. Halpern 
> > Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13
> >
> > Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> > gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> > 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> > experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> > yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> > of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
> >
> > 
> > Stepping back a few e-mails,
> > I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA
> Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309
> defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it
> does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without a
> numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The concept
> of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and this is
> one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..
> >
> > I would say
> > Abstract
> > The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
> > Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by
> IANA, by Expert Review.
> > This memo 
> >
> > Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
> > ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.
> >
> > Yours,
> > Joel
> >
> > On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
> >> From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu
> 
> >> Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
> >>
> >> Hi Med and All:
> >>  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01
> to follow the comments;
> >>  The main updating is:
> >>  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
> >> introduction;
> >>  2. Change the reference style;
> >>  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
> >>  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there
> is lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will 
> change this
> section next update the document once this part is finalized;
> >>
> >> 
> >> I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption 
> >> in
> its present form,
> >>
> >> It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already 
> >> done
> and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the
> same data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in
> future if not now.
> >>
> >> This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-23 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Joel -

I have had concerns from the beginning as to whether this draft is really 
needed.
As I have commented previously, the only content of any significance is Section 
4 - and that only provides example settings of the management fields for this 
interface type.
I question whether a draft is required for this purpose. 
I will defer on this matter to folks more expert in this area than I, but, my 
opinion is that a draft solely for this purpose is not required.

I thought it polite to mention this before you spend the time and effort to 
produce a new version.

   Les


> -Original Message-
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of tom petch
> Sent: Wednesday, June 23, 2021 1:43 AM
> To: Joel M. Halpern ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> 
> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57
> 
> Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
> We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.
> 
> 
> I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is time for
> a new version to comment on.
> 
> Tom Petch
> 
> Yours,
> Joel
> 
> On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:
> > From: Joel M. Halpern 
> > Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13
> >
> > Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> > gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> > 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> > experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> > yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> > of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
> >
> > 
> > Stepping back a few e-mails,
> > I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA
> Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309
> defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it
> does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without a
> numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The concept
> of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and this is
> one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..
> >
> > I would say
> > Abstract
> > The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
> > Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by
> IANA, by Expert Review.
> > This memo 
> >
> > Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
> > ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.
> >
> > Yours,
> > Joel
> >
> > On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
> >> From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu
> 
> >> Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
> >>
> >> Hi Med and All:
> >>  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01
> to follow the comments;
> >>  The main updating is:
> >>  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
> >> introduction;
> >>  2. Change the reference style;
> >>  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
> >>  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there
> is lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will 
> change this
> section next update the document once this part is finalized;
> >>
> >> 
> >> I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption 
> >> in
> its present form,
> >>
> >> It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already 
> >> done
> and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the
> same data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in
> future if not now.
> >>
> >> This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout
> the I-D.
> >>
> >> Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.
> This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if
> anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text
> from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are
> quoting.
> >>
> >> You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be
> not, it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should
> not be reproducing such text without a good reason and t

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-23 Thread tom petch
From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 22 June 2021 09:57

Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.


I would go further than Les as I suggested on Tuesday.  Perhaps it is time for 
a new version to comment on.

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:
> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13
>
> Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
>
> 
> Stepping back a few e-mails,
> I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA 
> Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309 
> defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it 
> does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without 
> a numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The 
> concept of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and 
> this is one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..
>
> I would say
> Abstract
> The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
> Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by IANA, 
> by Expert Review.
> This memo 
>
> Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
> ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
> On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
>> From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu 
>> 
>> Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
>>
>> Hi Med and All:
>>  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 
>> to follow the comments;
>>  The main updating is:
>>  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
>> introduction;
>>  2. Change the reference style;
>>  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
>>  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there 
>> is lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will 
>> change this section next update the document once this part is finalized;
>>
>> 
>> I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption 
>> in its present form,
>>
>> It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done 
>> and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the same 
>> data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in future if 
>> not now.
>>
>> This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the 
>> I-D.
>>
>> Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.  
>> This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if 
>> anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text 
>> from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are 
>> quoting.
>>
>> You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not, 
>> it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not be 
>> reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it 
>> clear what is reproduced, from where and why.
>>
>> And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do 
>> what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I 
>> said in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing 
>> more.
>>
>> Tom Petch
>>
>>  And I would like to share more background information for this 
>> internet draft:
>>  As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment 
>> from IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links 
>> several weeks ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry 
>> now;
>>  During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc 
>> describing why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
>>  For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
>> management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the 
>> Ethernet-specific management prope

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-22 Thread Joel M. Halpern

Do Les' suggested edits address your concerns.
We will apply yor changes to the IANA considerations section.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/22/2021 4:34 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.


Stepping back a few e-mails,
I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA 
Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309 
defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it 
does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without a 
numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The concept 
of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and this is 
one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..

I would say
Abstract
The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by IANA, by 
Expert Review.
This memo 

Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.

Tom Petch

We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu 

Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
 Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to 
follow the comments;
 The main updating is:
 1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
 2. Change the reference style;
 3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
 4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is 
lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change this section 
next update the document once this part is finalized;


I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in 
its present form,

It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done 
and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the same data 
defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in future if not now.

This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the I-D.

Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.  
This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if 
anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text 
from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are 
quoting.

You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not, it 
does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not be 
reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it clear 
what is reproduced, from where and why.

And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do 
what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I said 
in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing more.

Tom Petch

 And I would like to share more background information for this 
internet draft:
 As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment 
from IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several 
weeks ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
 During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc 
describing why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
 For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific 
management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we 
propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher 
layer and lower layer);

Brs

-Original Message-
From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com 
Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
To: Joel M. Halpern ; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Hi Joel, all,

Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:

* pdf: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=938b5849-cc1060ab-938b18d2-86073b36ea28-e0406a2599fa2a6d=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef104

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-22 Thread tom petch
From: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) 
Sent: 21 June 2021 20:06

inline  
(sorry that my web browser messes up e-mail)

Joel -

In addition to the IANA section changes,

1)Please be sure that the text consistently refers to "Point to Point (P2P) 
Interface over LAN" - not simply "Point to Point"

2)I think the abstract/introduction should make it clear that this draft is 
specifying the management mappings for the " Point to Point (P2P) Interface 
over LAN".
It is NOT defining Point to Point (P2P) Interface over LAN operation - that 
clearly was already done by RFC 5309.


As previously, I suggest

 Abstract
 The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC 5309.
 Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by IANA, by 
Expert Review.
 This memo 

 Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  That is what I see.
 


3)I don’t know if Section 3 is really needed. I tend to think not.
But if you do want to keep it, please Reference RFC 8343 Section 4 as this is 
clearly a copy of the Figure in that document/section.


I agree, not needed.

I would also moderate the claim that this is the predominant circuit type for 
OSPF.  That may be true for IX or PE-CE but not for the Enterprise LAN that I 
see.  Widely used by ISP perhaps.

I do not see this type enabling routing protocols to select the right mode 
automatically; theoretically possible but ospf-yang requires explicit 
configuration thereof.

Requirements language should use RFC8174.

With the revised IANA Considerations, there is no need for Security 
Considerations to make any mention of YANG.

Tom Petch



   Les



> -Original Message-
> From: Joel Halpern Direct 
> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:47 AM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
> ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> The change Tom has proposed to the IANA considerations section is fine
> with me.
>
> If there are other specific changes that will make it clearer, I and my
> co-authors are happy to make those.   I have tried looking at the text.
>   Even before you found it misleading, I did conclude that Tom getting
> the wrong impression meant it needs to be clarified.  But as I am having
> trouble seeing what misled you, I can not suggest wording improvements
> to my co-authors.
>
> I presume from your phrasing that you want more changes than just to the
> IANA considerations section.  I presume I am just being dense in not
> seeing the rest.  I apologize, but that does not make me less dense.
> Sorry.
>
> Help?
> Joel
>
> On 6/21/2021 11:28 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> > Joel -
> >
> > I am not objecting to the draft.
> > I am simply asking for it to be both clear and accurate in what it is 
> > actually
> doing.
> >
> > I think Tom has done an excellent job of pointing out the inaccuracies and
> in some cases providing proposed revised text.
> >
> > I would ask you to reread your own draft in the context that at least two
> people have read it and found it inaccurate and both of us have made very
> explicit points about what language is confusing.
> >
> > Les
> >
> >> -----Original Message-
> >> From: Joel Halpern Direct 
> >> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:13 AM
> >> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
> >> ; Harold Liu
> >> ; lsr@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>
> >> Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309
> >> didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA
> >> considerations at all.
> >>
> >> Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the
> >> ifType simplifies.  And it does.
> >>
> >> This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.
> >>
> >> Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we
> >> requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing
> >> how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309
> >> and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for
> >> standards.)
> >> So we are trying to do so.
> >>
> >> You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?
> >>
> >> If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away.
> >>We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more
> >> useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.
> >>
> >> Yours,
> >> Joel
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> On 6

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-22 Thread tom petch
From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 21 June 2021 15:13

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.


Stepping back a few e-mails, 
I have read 5309 and did point out previously that there is no IANA 
Considerations in that RFC.  What I have said and repeat here is that 5309 
defines the p2pOverLan type.  That is what the RFC claims and that is what it 
does.  You seem to think that the definition of a type is incomplete without a 
numerical value assigned to it, the SMI ifType  or YANG identity.  The concept 
of the type exists whether or not a value has been assigned to it and this is 
one of the places where this I-D goes wrong..

I would say
Abstract
The p2pOverLan interface type is described in RFC5309.
Subsequently, this interface type has been assigned a value of 303 by IANA, by 
Expert Review.
This memo 

Well, what does it do?  Gives examples of its use?  I see nothing more.

Tom Petch

We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
> From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu 
> 
> Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
>
> Hi Med and All:
> Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to 
> follow the comments;
> The main updating is:
> 1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
> introduction;
> 2. Change the reference style;
> 3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
> 4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is 
> lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
> this section next update the document once this part is finalized;
>
> 
> I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in 
> its present form,
>
> It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done 
> and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the same data 
> defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in future if not 
> now.
>
> This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the 
> I-D.
>
> Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.  
> This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if 
> anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text 
> from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are 
> quoting.
>
> You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not, 
> it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not be 
> reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it clear 
> what is reproduced, from where and why.
>
> And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do 
> what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I 
> said in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing 
> more.
>
> Tom Petch
>
> And I would like to share more background information for this 
> internet draft:
> As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment 
> from IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several 
> weeks ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
> During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc 
> describing why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
> For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
> management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific 
> management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we 
> propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher 
> layer and lower layer);
>
> Brs
>
> -----Original Message-
> From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com 
> Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
> To: Joel M. Halpern ; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> Hi Joel, all,
>
> Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:
>
> * pdf: 
> https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Joel M. Halpern

Okay.  We will make those changes.

Thank you,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 3:06 PM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

Joel -

In addition to the IANA section changes,

1)Please be sure that the text consistently refers to "Point to Point (P2P) Interface over 
LAN" - not simply "Point to Point"

2)I think the abstract/introduction should make it clear that this draft is specifying 
the management mappings for the " Point to Point (P2P) Interface over LAN".
It is NOT defining Point to Point (P2P) Interface over LAN operation - that 
clearly was already done by RFC 5309.

3)I don’t know if Section 3 is really needed. I tend to think not.
But if you do want to keep it, please Reference RFC 8343 Section 4 as this is 
clearly a copy of the Figure in that document/section.

Les




-Original Message-
From: Joel Halpern Direct 
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:47 AM
To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

The change Tom has proposed to the IANA considerations section is fine
with me.

If there are other specific changes that will make it clearer, I and my
co-authors are happy to make those.   I have tried looking at the text.
   Even before you found it misleading, I did conclude that Tom getting
the wrong impression meant it needs to be clarified.  But as I am having
trouble seeing what misled you, I can not suggest wording improvements
to my co-authors.

I presume from your phrasing that you want more changes than just to the
IANA considerations section.  I presume I am just being dense in not
seeing the rest.  I apologize, but that does not make me less dense.
Sorry.

Help?
Joel

On 6/21/2021 11:28 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

Joel -

I am not objecting to the draft.
I am simply asking for it to be both clear and accurate in what it is actually

doing.


I think Tom has done an excellent job of pointing out the inaccuracies and

in some cases providing proposed revised text.


I would ask you to reread your own draft in the context that at least two

people have read it and found it inaccurate and both of us have made very
explicit points about what language is confusing.


 Les


-Original Message-
From: Joel Halpern Direct 
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:13 AM
To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309
didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA
considerations at all.

Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the
ifType simplifies.  And it does.

This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.

Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we
requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing
how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309
and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for
standards.)
So we are trying to do so.

You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?

If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away.
We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more
useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.

Yours,
Joel



On 6/21/2021 10:58 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.

AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is either

boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 8343.

Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
The abstract actually claims to

   "defines point-to-point interface type"

which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named

-

since the document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over
LAN".


Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new

entries - rather it is modifying existing entries. And it isn’t modifying the

code

points, the names, or the descriptions - it only seeks to modify the
references to include "this document".

But the text in the IANA section states otherwise:

" IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)" registry...with the

following status types"


I don’t know whether the content in Section 4 is sufficient to claim a

reference, but if it is it should only be in addition to the existing reference.


  Les


-Original Message-
From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 7:13 AM
To: tom petch ; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some r

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Joel -

In addition to the IANA section changes,

1)Please be sure that the text consistently refers to "Point to Point (P2P) 
Interface over LAN" - not simply "Point to Point"

2)I think the abstract/introduction should make it clear that this draft is 
specifying the management mappings for the " Point to Point (P2P) Interface 
over LAN".
It is NOT defining Point to Point (P2P) Interface over LAN operation - that 
clearly was already done by RFC 5309.

3)I don’t know if Section 3 is really needed. I tend to think not.
But if you do want to keep it, please Reference RFC 8343 Section 4 as this is 
clearly a copy of the Figure in that document/section.

   Les



> -Original Message-
> From: Joel Halpern Direct 
> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:47 AM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
> ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> 
> The change Tom has proposed to the IANA considerations section is fine
> with me.
> 
> If there are other specific changes that will make it clearer, I and my
> co-authors are happy to make those.   I have tried looking at the text.
>   Even before you found it misleading, I did conclude that Tom getting
> the wrong impression meant it needs to be clarified.  But as I am having
> trouble seeing what misled you, I can not suggest wording improvements
> to my co-authors.
> 
> I presume from your phrasing that you want more changes than just to the
> IANA considerations section.  I presume I am just being dense in not
> seeing the rest.  I apologize, but that does not make me less dense.
> Sorry.
> 
> Help?
> Joel
> 
> On 6/21/2021 11:28 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> > Joel -
> >
> > I am not objecting to the draft.
> > I am simply asking for it to be both clear and accurate in what it is 
> > actually
> doing.
> >
> > I think Tom has done an excellent job of pointing out the inaccuracies and
> in some cases providing proposed revised text.
> >
> > I would ask you to reread your own draft in the context that at least two
> people have read it and found it inaccurate and both of us have made very
> explicit points about what language is confusing.
> >
> > Les
> >
> >> -----Original Message-
> >> From: Joel Halpern Direct 
> >> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:13 AM
> >> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
> >> ; Harold Liu
> >> ; lsr@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>
> >> Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309
> >> didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA
> >> considerations at all.
> >>
> >> Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the
> >> ifType simplifies.  And it does.
> >>
> >> This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.
> >>
> >> Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we
> >> requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing
> >> how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309
> >> and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for
> >> standards.)
> >> So we are trying to do so.
> >>
> >> You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?
> >>
> >> If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away.
> >>We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more
> >> useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.
> >>
> >> Yours,
> >> Joel
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> On 6/21/2021 10:58 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> >>> I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.
> >>>
> >>> AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is 
> >>> either
> >> boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 
> >> 8343.
> >>> Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
> >>> The abstract actually claims to
> >>>
> >>>   "defines point-to-point interface type"
> >>>
> >>> which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named
> -
> >> since the document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over
> >> LAN".
> >>>
> >>> Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new
> >> entries

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
The change Tom has proposed to the IANA considerations section is fine 
with me.


If there are other specific changes that will make it clearer, I and my 
co-authors are happy to make those.   I have tried looking at the text. 
 Even before you found it misleading, I did conclude that Tom getting 
the wrong impression meant it needs to be clarified.  But as I am having 
trouble seeing what misled you, I can not suggest wording improvements 
to my co-authors.


I presume from your phrasing that you want more changes than just to the 
IANA considerations section.  I presume I am just being dense in not 
seeing the rest.  I apologize, but that does not make me less dense.

Sorry.

Help?
Joel

On 6/21/2021 11:28 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

Joel -

I am not objecting to the draft.
I am simply asking for it to be both clear and accurate in what it is actually 
doing.

I think Tom has done an excellent job of pointing out the inaccuracies and in 
some cases providing proposed revised text.

I would ask you to reread your own draft in the context that at least two 
people have read it and found it inaccurate and both of us have made very 
explicit points about what language is confusing.

Les


-Original Message-
From: Joel Halpern Direct 
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:13 AM
To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309
didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA
considerations at all.

Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the
ifType simplifies.  And it does.

This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.

Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we
requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing
how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309
and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for
standards.)
So we are trying to do so.

You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?

If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away.
   We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more
useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.

Yours,
Joel



On 6/21/2021 10:58 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.

AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is either

boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 8343.

Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
The abstract actually claims to

  "defines point-to-point interface type"

which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named -

since the document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over
LAN".


Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new

entries - rather it is modifying existing entries. And it isn’t modifying the 
code
points, the names, or the descriptions - it only seeks to modify the
references to include "this document".

But the text in the IANA section states otherwise:

" IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)" registry...with the

following status types"


I don’t know whether the content in Section 4 is sufficient to claim a

reference, but if it is it should only be in addition to the existing reference.


 Les


-Original Message-
From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 7:13 AM
To: tom petch ; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.

We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu



Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01

to

follow the comments;

  The main updating is:
  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
introduction;
  2. Change the reference style;
  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given

there is

lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
this

section

next updat

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
Joel -

I am not objecting to the draft.
I am simply asking for it to be both clear and accurate in what it is actually 
doing.

I think Tom has done an excellent job of pointing out the inaccuracies and in 
some cases providing proposed revised text.

I would ask you to reread your own draft in the context that at least two 
people have read it and found it inaccurate and both of us have made very 
explicit points about what language is confusing.

   Les

> -Original Message-
> From: Joel Halpern Direct 
> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 8:13 AM
> To: Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) ; tom petch
> ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> 
> Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309
> didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA
> considerations at all.
> 
> Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the
> ifType simplifies.  And it does.
> 
> This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.
> 
> Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we
> requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing
> how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309
> and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for
> standards.)
> So we are trying to do so.
> 
> You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?
> 
> If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away.
>   We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more
> useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.
> 
> Yours,
> Joel
> 
> 
> 
> On 6/21/2021 10:58 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:
> > I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.
> >
> > AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is either
> boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 8343.
> > Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
> > The abstract actually claims to
> >
> >  "defines point-to-point interface type"
> >
> > which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named -
> since the document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over
> LAN".
> >
> > Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new
> entries - rather it is modifying existing entries. And it isn’t modifying the 
> code
> points, the names, or the descriptions - it only seeks to modify the
> references to include "this document".
> > But the text in the IANA section states otherwise:
> >
> > " IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)" registry...with the
> following status types"
> >
> > I don’t know whether the content in Section 4 is sufficient to claim a
> reference, but if it is it should only be in addition to the existing 
> reference.
> >
> > Les
> >
> >> -Original Message-
> >> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
> >> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 7:13 AM
> >> To: tom petch ; Harold Liu
> >> ; lsr@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >>
> >> Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> >> gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> >> 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> >> experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> >> yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> >> of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
> >>
> >> We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
> >> ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.
> >>
> >> Yours,
> >> Joel
> >>
> >> On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
> >>> From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu
> >> 
> >>> Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
> >>>
> >>> Hi Med and All:
> >>>  Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01
> to
> >> follow the comments;
> >>>  The main updating is:
> >>>  1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
> >>> introduction;
> >>>  2. Change the reference style;
> >>>  3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
> >>>  4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the mo

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Joel Halpern Direct
Les, I am missing something ion both your and Tom's comments.  5309 
didn't define the ifType.  If you look at 5309, it has no IANA 
considerations at all.


Yes, this document should talk about 5309 as one of the cases that the 
ifType simplifies.  And it does.


This documents follows the lead of 8343 in defining this specific ifType.

Let's be clear.  We were asked, quite reasoanbly, by the expert, when we 
requested the IANA code point, to please submit a document describing 
how the dcode point would be used, rather than merely pointing at 5309 
and assuming everyone could guess correctly.  (Guessing is not good for 
standards.)

So we are trying to do so.

You seem to be objecting to our doing so.  Why?

If the working group really doesn't want a description, we can go away. 
 We have the code point we felt was useful.  But it seems much more 
useful to actually provide meaningful documentation.


Yours,
Joel



On 6/21/2021 10:58 AM, Les Ginsberg (ginsberg) wrote:

I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.

AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is either 
boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 8343.
Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
The abstract actually claims to

 "defines point-to-point interface type"

which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named - since the 
document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over LAN".

Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new entries - 
rather it is modifying existing entries. And it isn’t modifying the code points, the 
names, or the descriptions - it only seeks to modify the references to include "this 
document".
But the text in the IANA section states otherwise:

" IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)" registry...with the following 
status types"

I don’t know whether the content in Section 4 is sufficient to claim a 
reference, but if it is it should only be in addition to the existing reference.

Les


-Original Message-
From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 7:13 AM
To: tom petch ; Harold Liu
; lsr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.

We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.

Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu



Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
 Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to

follow the comments;

 The main updating is:
 1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
 2. Change the reference style;
 3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
 4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is

lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
this section
next update the document once this part is finalized;



I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in 
its

present form,


It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done

and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the
same data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in
future if not now.


This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the

I-D.


Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.

This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if
anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text
from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are
quoting.


You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not,

it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not
be reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it
clear what is reproduced, from where and why.


And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do

what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I
said in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing
more.


Tom Petch

 And I would like to share more background information for this internet

draft:

 As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment

fro

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)
I am in complete agreement with the points Tom has made.

AFAICT, the only new content in this draft is Section 4 - the rest is either 
boilerplate or a repetition of text already present in RFC 5309 or RFC 8343.
Neither the Abstract nor the Introduction makes that clear.
The abstract actually claims to 

"defines point-to-point interface type" 

which is both FALSE (already defined in RFC 5309) and incorrectly named - since 
the document is actually discussing "point-to-point operation over LAN".

Regarding the IANA section, it is clear that the draft is NOT creating new 
entries - rather it is modifying existing entries. And it isn’t modifying the 
code points, the names, or the descriptions - it only seeks to modify the 
references to include "this document".
But the text in the IANA section states otherwise:

" IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)" registry...with the 
following status types"

I don’t know whether the content in Section 4 is sufficient to claim a 
reference, but if it is it should only be in addition to the existing reference.

   Les

> -Original Message-
> From: Lsr  On Behalf Of Joel M. Halpern
> Sent: Monday, June 21, 2021 7:13 AM
> To: tom petch ; Harold Liu
> ; lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> 
> Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have
> gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to
> 5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the
> experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So
> yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism
> of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.
> 
> We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this
> ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.
> 
> Yours,
> Joel
> 
> On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:
> > From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu
> 
> > Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01
> >
> > Hi Med and All:
> > Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to
> follow the comments;
> > The main updating is:
> > 1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the 
> > introduction;
> > 2. Change the reference style;
> > 3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
> > 4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there 
> > is
> lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
> this section
> next update the document once this part is finalized;
> >
> > 
> > I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption 
> > in its
> present form,
> >
> > It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done
> and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the
> same data defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in
> future if not now.
> >
> > This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the
> I-D.
> >
> > Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.
> This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if
> anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text
> from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are
> quoting.
> >
> > You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not,
> it does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not
> be reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it
> clear what is reproduced, from where and why.
> >
> > And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do
> what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I
> said in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing
> more.
> >
> > Tom Petch
> >
> > And I would like to share more background information for this 
> > internet
> draft:
> > As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment
> from IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several
> weeks ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
> > During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc
> describing why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
> > For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the
> management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific
> management 

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Tom, 5309 did not define the ifType.  Go read 5309.  You seem to have 
gotten confused by the fact that the IANA entry given to 303 points to 
5309.  That was done to have some reference (with the consent of the 
experts).   What we are doing now is providing a better reference.  So 
yes, this document defines how the ifType is defined.  With no criticism 
of 5309, it does not define that, since it does not define the ifType.


We are explicit in this draft that one of the obvious uses for this 
ifType is to trigger 5309 behavior.


Yours,
Joel

On 6/21/2021 4:41 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu 

Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to 
follow the comments;
The main updating is:
1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
2. Change the reference style;
3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is 
lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change this section 
next update the document once this part is finalized;


I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in 
its present form,

It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done 
and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the same data 
defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in future if not now.

This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the I-D.

Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.  
This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if 
anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text 
from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are 
quoting.

You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not, it 
does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not be 
reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it clear 
what is reproduced, from where and why.

And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do 
what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I said 
in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing more.

Tom Petch

And I would like to share more background information for this internet 
draft:
As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment from 
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several weeks 
ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc describing 
why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific 
management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we 
propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher 
layer and lower layer);

Brs

-Original Message-
From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com 
Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
To: Joel M. Halpern ; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Hi Joel, all,

Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:

* pdf: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=938b5849-cc1060ab-938b18d2-86073b36ea28-e0406a2599fa2a6d=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fraw%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.docx

Cheers,
Med


-Message d'origine-
De : Lsr [mailto:lsr-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Joel M. Halpern
Envoyé : mercredi 16 juin 2021 22:47 À : Acee Lindem (acee)
; lsr@ietf.org Objet : Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action:
draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with
5309.
   I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.

A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
point does reference 5309.)

Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:

Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then

decided that LSR is probably as good as any other place.


Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it
should be referenced?


Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on b

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-21 Thread tom petch
From: Lsr  on behalf of Harold Liu 

Sent: 21 June 2021 02:01

Hi Med and All:
   Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to 
follow the comments;
   The main updating is:
   1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
   2. Change the reference style;
   3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
   4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is 
lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
this section next update the document once this part is finalized;


I still think that this is an unsatisfactory I-D and would oppose adoption in 
its present form,

It is a question of veracity.  It claims to do what others have already done 
and does so without reference, without acknowledgement.  Having the same data 
defined in more than one place can only create confusion, in future if not now.

This is a pattern and starts with the Abstract and continues throughout the I-D.

Thus the Abstract claims 'this defines point-to-point interface type'.  No.  
This type was defined in RFC5309 and you need to say that and to say what if 
anything you are changing in that definition.  You should not reproduce text 
from that RFC unless you have to and then you should make it clear you are 
quoting.

You do the same with Figure 1.  This is a copy, may be accurate may be not, it 
does not matter, from RFC8343 with no mention thereof.  You should not be 
reproducing such text without a good reason and then you should make it clear 
what is reproduced, from where and why.

And as I have said already, IANA Considerations is yet again claiming to do 
what has already happened which can only confuse.  All that is needed as I said 
in a separate note  is to ask IANA to update two references, nothing more.

Tom Petch

   And I would like to share more background information for this internet 
draft:
   As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment from 
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several weeks 
ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
   During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc describing 
why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
   For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific 
management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we 
propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher 
layer and lower layer);

Brs

-Original Message-
From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com 
Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
To: Joel M. Halpern ; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Hi Joel, all,

Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:

* pdf: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=938b5849-cc1060ab-938b18d2-86073b36ea28-e0406a2599fa2a6d=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fraw%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.docx

Cheers,
Med

> -Message d'origine-
> De : Lsr [mailto:lsr-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Joel M. Halpern
> Envoyé : mercredi 16 juin 2021 22:47 À : Acee Lindem (acee)
> ; lsr@ietf.org Objet : Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>
> This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with
> 5309.
>   I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.
>
> A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
> point does reference 5309.)
>
> Thank you,
> Joel
>
>
>
> On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> > Hi Joel,
> >
> > At first I wondered where this document should reside and then
> decided that LSR is probably as good as any other place.
> >
> > Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it
> should be referenced?
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Acee
> >
> >
> > On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  boun...@ietf.org on behalf of j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> >
> >  Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type
> assignment from
> >  IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet
> links.
> >
> >  It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that
> a documen

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-20 Thread Harold Liu
Hi Med and All:
   Thanks for your helpful comments, I have updated a new version 01 to 
follow the comments;
   The main updating is:
   1. More clearly described the intend of this draft in the introduction;
   2. Change the reference style;
   3. Refactor the reference section to make it more reasonable;
   4. I haven't change "IANA Consideration" at the moment given there is 
lots of discussion in this part and it is still up in the air, I will change 
this section next update the document once this part is finalized;

   And I would like to share more background information for this internet 
draft:
   As Joel mentioned, we requested and received an IF Type assignment from 
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links several weeks 
ago and the p2pOverLan type is already added to IANA registry now;
   During the discussion around the assignment we noticed a doc describing 
why that is needed and how to use that would be helpful;
   For example, if no entry saying p2pOverLan layer over ethernet, the 
management will suffer since lose the ability to get to the Ethernet-specific 
management properties (Ethernet MIB or YANG model) via many tools; So we 
propose this draft to define a complete p2pOverLan ifStack(Including higher 
layer and lower layer);

Brs

-Original Message-
From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com 
Sent: Thursday, June 17, 2021 2:16 PM
To: Joel M. Halpern ; draft-liu-lsr-p2pover...@ietf.org
Subject: RE: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

Hi Joel, all, 

Please find some quick comments to this draft, fwiw:

* pdf: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e8e7d1aa-b77ce948-e8e79131-86073b36ea28-edbd778070bbec9a=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fblob%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.pdf
* doc: 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=938b5849-cc1060ab-938b18d2-86073b36ea28-e0406a2599fa2a6d=1=d4a020c9-b337-41fd-bf1b-56dcfaef1044=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fboucadair%2FIETF-Drafts-Reviews%2Fraw%2Fmaster%2Fdraft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00-rev%2520Med.docx
 

Cheers,
Med

> -Message d'origine-
> De : Lsr [mailto:lsr-boun...@ietf.org] De la part de Joel M. Halpern 
> Envoyé : mercredi 16 juin 2021 22:47 À : Acee Lindem (acee) 
> ; lsr@ietf.org Objet : Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> 
> This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 
> 5309.
>   I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.
> 
> A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code 
> point does reference 5309.)
> 
> Thank you,
> Joel
> 
> 
> 
> On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> > Hi Joel,
> >
> > At first I wondered where this document should reside and then
> decided that LSR is probably as good as any other place.
> >
> > Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it 
> should be referenced?
> >
> > Thanks,
> > Acee
> >
> >
> > On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  boun...@ietf.org on behalf of j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> >
> >  Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type
> assignment from
> >  IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet
> links.
> >
> >  It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that
> a document
> >  (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and
> why we
> >  asked for it would be helpful.
> >
> >  The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work
> with the
> >  community to improve and clarify teh draft.
> >
> >  Thank you,
> >  Joel
> >
> >
> >   Forwarded Message 
> >  Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> >  Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
> >  From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
> >  Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
> >  To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> >
> >
> >  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-
> Drafts
> >  directories.
> >
> >
> >   Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition
> for Point to
> >  Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
> >   Authors : Daiying Liu
> > Joel Halpern
> > Congjie Zhang
> > Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
> > Pages   : 7
> > Date: 2021-06-16
> >
> >  

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-19 Thread tom petch
From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 18 June 2021 17:41

How can we clarify the wording.  If it is misleading you, we need to
improve it.   The text is not asking to create an entry (i.e. it does
not "ask for an assignment"), but rather to change an entry that already
exists.  (And obviously, it won't do so until and if the document
becomes an RFC.)


NEW
"IANA Considerations

In the Interface Types registry, IANA has previously assigned a value of 303 
for p2pOverLan with a reference of RFC5309.  IANA is requested to amend the 
reference to point to this document and to make a similar amendment in the YANG 
iana-if-type module which currently points to RFC8561."

I see no need for any more action by IANA; it is the sort of request that has 
been made many times before when one RFC obsoletes another

The body of the document might say more, e.g. that value 303 was assigned for 
interface type ap2pOverLan by Expert review which caused IANA to add the 
entries to the MIB module and the YANG module but IANA do not need to be told 
that - they did it!

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 12:20 PM, tom petch wrote:
> From: Joel M. Halpern 
> Sent: 18 June 2021 16:29
>
> Tom, I am not sure what you mean by "the update has happened">  The code
> point has been assigned.  Assuming this document becomes an RFC, it will
> be significantly clearer if the 303 code point IANA entry points at this
> for information instead of 5309.  So this document requests that update.
>
> 
> I mean that the IANA Registry has been updated to include 303 with a 
> reference to 5309 so I think it wrong of this I-D to ask for assignment which 
> is what I see it doing with
>
> IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)"  with the following status 
> types:
>
>|  303|  p2pOverLan  |Point to Point over LAN interface  |
>
>   It should only ask for the reference to be changed and should also spell 
> out that the assignment was made by Expert Review since that may otherwise be 
> unclear to users..
>
> Likewise the update to the YANG module is automatic, has happened and so 
> specifying it here can only confuse IMHO.
>
> And elsewhere I find the flavour misleading.  The abstract and introduction 
> should IMHO reference RFC5309 as the source of p2pOverLan, add that the 
> values have been assigned by Expert Review and that this I-D ... well I am 
> not clear what it does except lay claim to things that others have already 
> done with RFC5309 and expert review :-)
>
> I think too that camel case is problematic.  SMI uses it, YANG does not but 
> we are now likely stuck with identity p2pOverLan .
>
> Tom Petch
>
> Yours,
> Joel
>
> On 6/18/2021 7:47 AM, tom petch wrote:
>> From: Lsr  on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 
>> 
>> Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46
>>
>> This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
>> I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.
>>
>> A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
>> point does reference 5309.)
>>
>> 
>> which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
>> 303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain 
>> this.  I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the 
>> update has happened.
>>
>> What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was 
>> made by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to 
>> this I-D and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an 
>> updates to 5309 as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG 
>> having fun with that concept but I would go for it.
>>
>> I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present 
>> it looks like an Unused Ref.
>>
>> Tom Petch
>>
>>
>>
>> Thank you,
>> Joel
>>
>>
>>
>> On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
>>> Hi Joel,
>>>
>>> At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that 
>>> LSR is probably as good as any other place.
>>>
>>> Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it 
>>> should be referenced?
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>> Acee
>>>
>>>
>>> On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern" 
>>>  wrote:
>>>
>>>Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
>>>IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.
>>>
>>>It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a 
>>> document
>>>(eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
>>>asked for it would be helpful.
>>>
>>>The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
>>>community to improve and clarify teh draft.
>>>
>>>Thank you,
>>>Joel
>>>
>>>
>>> Forwarded Message 
>>>Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>>>   

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-18 Thread Joel M. Halpern
How can we clarify the wording.  If it is misleading you, we need to 
improve it.   The text is not asking to create an entry (i.e. it does 
not "ask for an assignment"), but rather to change an entry that already 
exists.  (And obviously, it won't do so until and if the document 
becomes an RFC.)


Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 12:20 PM, tom petch wrote:

From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 18 June 2021 16:29

Tom, I am not sure what you mean by "the update has happened">  The code
point has been assigned.  Assuming this document becomes an RFC, it will
be significantly clearer if the 303 code point IANA entry points at this
for information instead of 5309.  So this document requests that update.


I mean that the IANA Registry has been updated to include 303 with a reference 
to 5309 so I think it wrong of this I-D to ask for assignment which is what I 
see it doing with

IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)"  with the following status 
types:

   |  303|  p2pOverLan  |Point to Point over LAN interface  |

  It should only ask for the reference to be changed and should also spell out 
that the assignment was made by Expert Review since that may otherwise be 
unclear to users..

Likewise the update to the YANG module is automatic, has happened and so 
specifying it here can only confuse IMHO.

And elsewhere I find the flavour misleading.  The abstract and introduction 
should IMHO reference RFC5309 as the source of p2pOverLan, add that the values 
have been assigned by Expert Review and that this I-D ... well I am not clear 
what it does except lay claim to things that others have already done with 
RFC5309 and expert review :-)

I think too that camel case is problematic.  SMI uses it, YANG does not but we 
are now likely stuck with identity p2pOverLan .

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 7:47 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 

Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46

This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.

A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
point does reference 5309.)


which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain this.  
I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the update has 
happened.

What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was made 
by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to this I-D 
and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an updates to 5309 
as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG having fun with 
that concept but I would go for it.

I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present it 
looks like an Unused Ref.

Tom Petch



Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:

Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that LSR 
is probably as good as any other place.

Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
be referenced?

Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  wrote:

   Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
   IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.

   It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document
   (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
   asked for it would be helpful.

   The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
   community to improve and clarify teh draft.

   Thank you,
   Joel


    Forwarded Message 
   Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
   Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
   From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
   Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
   To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
   directories.


Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to
   Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
Authors : Daiying Liu
  Joel Halpern
  Congjie Zhang
Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Pages   : 7
Date: 2021-06-16

   Abstract:
   The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
   types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
   the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
   state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
   defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
   

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-18 Thread tom petch
From: Joel M. Halpern 
Sent: 18 June 2021 16:29

Tom, I am not sure what you mean by "the update has happened">  The code
point has been assigned.  Assuming this document becomes an RFC, it will
be significantly clearer if the 303 code point IANA entry points at this
for information instead of 5309.  So this document requests that update.


I mean that the IANA Registry has been updated to include 303 with a reference 
to 5309 so I think it wrong of this I-D to ask for assignment which is what I 
see it doing with

IANA need to update the "Interface Types(ifType)"  with the following status 
types:

  |  303|  p2pOverLan  |Point to Point over LAN interface  |

 It should only ask for the reference to be changed and should also spell out 
that the assignment was made by Expert Review since that may otherwise be 
unclear to users..

Likewise the update to the YANG module is automatic, has happened and so 
specifying it here can only confuse IMHO.

And elsewhere I find the flavour misleading.  The abstract and introduction 
should IMHO reference RFC5309 as the source of p2pOverLan, add that the values 
have been assigned by Expert Review and that this I-D ... well I am not clear 
what it does except lay claim to things that others have already done with 
RFC5309 and expert review :-)

I think too that camel case is problematic.  SMI uses it, YANG does not but we 
are now likely stuck with identity p2pOverLan .

Tom Petch

Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 7:47 AM, tom petch wrote:
> From: Lsr  on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 
> 
> Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46
>
> This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
>I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.
>
> A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
> point does reference 5309.)
>
> 
> which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
> 303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain this. 
>  I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the update 
> has happened.
>
> What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was made 
> by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to this 
> I-D and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an updates 
> to 5309 as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG having 
> fun with that concept but I would go for it.
>
> I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present 
> it looks like an Unused Ref.
>
> Tom Petch
>
>
>
> Thank you,
> Joel
>
>
>
> On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
>> Hi Joel,
>>
>> At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that 
>> LSR is probably as good as any other place.
>>
>> Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it 
>> should be referenced?
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Acee
>>
>>
>> On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern" 
>>  wrote:
>>
>>   Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
>>   IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.
>>
>>   It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a 
>> document
>>   (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
>>   asked for it would be helpful.
>>
>>   The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
>>   community to improve and clarify teh draft.
>>
>>   Thank you,
>>   Joel
>>
>>
>>    Forwarded Message 
>>   Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>>   Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
>>   From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>>   Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>>   To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
>>
>>
>>   A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>   directories.
>>
>>
>>Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point 
>> to
>>   Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
>>Authors : Daiying Liu
>>  Joel Halpern
>>  Congjie Zhang
>>Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>>Pages   : 7
>>Date: 2021-06-16
>>
>>   Abstract:
>>   The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
>>   types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
>>   the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
>>   state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
>>   defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
>>   provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.
>>
>>
>>   The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>>   

Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-18 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Tom, I am not sure what you mean by "the update has happened">  The code 
point has been assigned.  Assuming this document becomes an RFC, it will 
be significantly clearer if the 303 code point IANA entry points at this 
for information instead of 5309.  So this document requests that update.


Yours,
Joel

On 6/18/2021 7:47 AM, tom petch wrote:

From: Lsr  on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 

Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46

This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
   I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.

A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
point does reference 5309.)


which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain this.  
I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the update has 
happened.

What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was made 
by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to this I-D 
and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an updates to 5309 
as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG having fun with 
that concept but I would go for it.

I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present it 
looks like an Unused Ref.

Tom Petch



Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:

Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that LSR 
is probably as good as any other place.

Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
be referenced?

Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  wrote:

  Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
  IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.

  It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document
  (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
  asked for it would be helpful.

  The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
  community to improve and clarify teh draft.

  Thank you,
  Joel


   Forwarded Message 
  Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
  Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
  From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
  Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
  To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
  directories.


   Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to
  Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
   Authors : Daiying Liu
 Joel Halpern
 Congjie Zhang
   Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
   Pages   : 7
   Date: 2021-06-16

  Abstract:
  The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
  types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
  the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
  state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
  defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
  provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.


  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/

  There is also an htmlized version available at:
  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00


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Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-18 Thread tom petch
From: Lsr  on behalf of Joel M. Halpern 

Sent: 16 June 2021 21:46

This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309.
  I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.

A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code
point does reference 5309.)


which confused me as RFC5309 has no IANA considerations and no reference to 
303.  I understand how this is so but think that this I-D could explain this.  
I think that the I-D is wrong to ask IANA to perform an update - the update has 
happened.

What would help would be for this I-D to explain that the allocation was made 
by Expert Review and to ask that IANA update the reference to point to this I-D 
and then this I-D can point back to RFC5309.  This is almost an updates to 5309 
as it give a value to the specification - I can see the IESG having fun with 
that concept but I would go for it.

I think too that this I-D should reference and build on RFC5309.  At present it 
looks like an Unused Ref.

Tom Petch



Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:
> Hi Joel,
>
> At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that 
> LSR is probably as good as any other place.
>
> Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
> be referenced?
>
> Thanks,
> Acee
>
>
> On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern" 
>  wrote:
>
>  Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
>  IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.
>
>  It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document
>  (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
>  asked for it would be helpful.
>
>  The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
>  community to improve and clarify teh draft.
>
>  Thank you,
>  Joel
>
>
>   Forwarded Message 
>  Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>  Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
>  From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>  Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
>  To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
>
>
>  A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>  directories.
>
>
>   Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to
>  Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
>   Authors : Daiying Liu
> Joel Halpern
> Congjie Zhang
>   Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
>   Pages   : 7
>   Date: 2021-06-16
>
>  Abstract:
>  The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
>  types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
>  the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
>  state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
>  defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
>  provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.
>
>
>  The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/
>
>  There is also an htmlized version available at:
>  https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00
>
>
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Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-16 Thread Joel M. Halpern
This document (and the code point) are intended to be in line with 5309. 
 I believe they are.  If we got it wrong, please help us fix it.


A reference would be reasonable to add.  (The IANA entry for the code 
point does reference 5309.)


Thank you,
Joel



On 6/16/2021 4:41 PM, Acee Lindem (acee) wrote:

Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that LSR 
is probably as good as any other place.

Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
be referenced?

Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  wrote:

 Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from
 IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.

 It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document
 (eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we
 asked for it would be helpful.

 The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the
 community to improve and clarify teh draft.

 Thank you,
 Joel


  Forwarded Message 
 Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
 Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
 From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
 Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
 To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


 A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
 directories.


  Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to
 Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
  Authors : Daiying Liu
Joel Halpern
Congjie Zhang
Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Pages   : 7
Date: 2021-06-16

 Abstract:
 The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
 types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
 the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
 state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
 defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
 provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.


 The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/

 There is also an htmlized version available at:
 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00


 Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
 ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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Re: [Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-16 Thread Acee Lindem (acee)
Hi Joel,

At first I wondered where this document should reside and then decided that LSR 
is probably as good as any other place. 

Can you guys check whether it is mostly in line with 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc5309/ and comment as to whether it should 
be referenced? 

Thanks,
Acee


On 6/16/21, 11:10 AM, "Lsr on behalf of Joel M. Halpern"  wrote:

Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from 
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.

It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document 
(eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we 
asked for it would be helpful.

The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the 
community to improve and clarify teh draft.

Thank you,
Joel


 Forwarded Message 
Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.


 Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to 
Point (P2P) Interface over LAN
 Authors : Daiying Liu
   Joel Halpern
   Congjie Zhang
Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Pages   : 7
Date: 2021-06-16

Abstract:
The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00


Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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[Lsr] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt

2021-06-16 Thread Joel M. Halpern
Recently, Ericsson requested and received an IF Type assignment from 
IANA (with expert review) for point-to-point over Ethernet links.


It was noted during the discussion around the assignment that a document 
(eventually, we hope, an RFC) describing how to use that and why we 
asked for it would be helpful.


The below announcement is that draft.  We would like to work with the 
community to improve and clarify teh draft.


Thank you,
Joel


 Forwarded Message 
Subject: I-D Action: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2021 07:00:04 -0700
From: internet-dra...@ietf.org
Reply-To: internet-dra...@ietf.org
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.



Title   : Interface Stack Table Definition for Point to 
Point (P2P) Interface over LAN

Authors : Daiying Liu
  Joel Halpern
  Congjie Zhang
Filename: draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00.txt
Pages   : 7
Date: 2021-06-16

Abstract:
   The point-to-point circuit type is one of the mainly used circuit
   types in link state routing protocol.  It is important to identify
   the correct circuit type when forming adjacencies, flooding link
   state database packets, and monitor the link state.  This document
   defines point-to-point interface type and relevant stack tables to
   provide benefit for operation, maintenance and statistics.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan/

There is also an htmlized version available at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-lsr-p2poverlan-00


Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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