Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-28 Thread Christine Aguila
Nice portrait, but the blown out jukebox is very distracting.  I would clone it 
out completely.  Cheers, Christine


On Apr 24, 2013, at 4:45 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years ago. 
 Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in the 
 towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the 
 grimness of his descent.
 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-28 Thread Christine Aguila
Nice portrait, Walt, but the blown out juke box is very distracting.  I would 
try to clone it out completely.  Cheers, Christine



On Apr 24, 2013, at 4:45 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years ago. 
 Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in the 
 towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the 
 grimness of his descent.
 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.
 
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Aahz Maruch
On Fri, Apr 26, 2013, kwal...@peoplepc.com wrote:

 I agree its a great portrait of the gentleman but overall the image
 is greatly degraded by such a large bright background distraction.

Count me as a vote for slightly degraded, not worth changing because the
rest is so great, didn't even really notice it until other people
complained.  For me, it's the shadow of the right eye (with the eye
itself glaring out) that really draws my attention and makes the picture,
it would be worse if the lighting had been improved as some people
suggested.

Particularly in a collection, you are likely to have other shots with the
jukebox, so it becomes an essential part of the background feel.

Don't even think of adding color IMO.
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Aahz Maruch
On Wed, Apr 24, 2013, Walt wrote:
 
 I don't think I'll be able to salvage the shot unless I go to a
 vertical crop and just lop off the blown out section, but it's just
 not as good an image in that orientation.
 
 And, sadly, I completely lack the Photoshop skills to fix it.
 
 Ah, well -- what coulda been.

Honestly, you really gotta stop beating on yourself!
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Aahz Maruch
On Sat, Apr 27, 2013, Rob Studdert wrote:
 On 25 April 2013 07:45, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Walt, It's a real glimpse into the man's persona regardless of thew
 Pacman on his shoulder :)

LOL!  Now *that's* what it was reminding me of.  (Actually, looks more
like a blurry R2D2 to me.)
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Walt

On 4/27/2013 8:29 AM, Aahz Maruch wrote:

On Fri, Apr 26, 2013, kwal...@peoplepc.com wrote:

I agree its a great portrait of the gentleman but overall the image
is greatly degraded by such a large bright background distraction.

Count me as a vote for slightly degraded, not worth changing because the
rest is so great, didn't even really notice it until other people
complained.  For me, it's the shadow of the right eye (with the eye
itself glaring out) that really draws my attention and makes the picture,
it would be worse if the lighting had been improved as some people
suggested.

Particularly in a collection, you are likely to have other shots with the
jukebox, so it becomes an essential part of the background feel.

Don't even think of adding color IMO.

Thank you, Aahz.

I completely agree about keeping it bw. The image loses all its impact 
in color -- to my eye, at least.


As for the exposure issues, I've always taken a fairly conservative 
approach to fixing that kind of stuff, albeit purely out of necessity. 
Since I have no idea what I'm doing when it comes to such things, I've 
found that most of my attempts to fix exposure problems end up rendering 
the image unusable. So, I generally opt to leave the flaws in (when I 
notice them) and hope they sneak by.


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Walt

Thank you very much, Dave!

I do like the idea of putting together a book, though I still have a 
hard time imagining any one my photos hanging on a wall.


But, as a collection, I'm a little more inclined toward the idea. It 
could take me a little while to get enough images to try something like 
that, but it's definitely a goal worth working toward.


Thanks for the germ!

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On 4/26/2013 9:45 PM, David Savage wrote:

I agree don't change anything. This is brilliant environmental portrait.

If you're not thinking along theses lines already, let me put the germ
of the idea in your head. With this and some of the other shots you've
posted from the bar, you have the makings for a project of
environmental portraits of bar staff  patrons in their environment
that would look cool in a book or hanging on a gallery wall.

Cheers,

Dave

On 27 April 2013 00:54, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

On 4/26/2013 11:05 AM, Mark Roberts wrote:

Rick Womer wrote:


Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a
great portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see
what people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

I'm with Rick. Don't change a thing. This is a stunning environmental
portrait.



Thanks so much, Mark.

That's the kind of photography I enjoy more than any other. If I could focus
on one genre, that would be it.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Walt

On 4/26/2013 9:33 PM, Rob Studdert wrote:

On 25 April 2013 07:45, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in
the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the
grimness of his descent.

Walt, It's a real glimpse into the man's persona regardless of thew
Pacman on his shoulder :)

Cheers,

Thank you, Rob.

What I liked about the photo was the fact that it actually captured what 
I see on a typical workday. Once I saw the expression in his eyes and 
realized that I'd gotten what I was looking for, the exposure problems 
didn't even register with me until I started processing it. At that 
point, they didn't seem severe enough to risk ruining the whole shot 
with a ham-handed attempt at correcting them, so I just decided to let 
them stand.


I may still tweak it a little here and there, but not much.

Thanks again!

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-27 Thread Walt

On 4/27/2013 8:30 AM, Aahz Maruch wrote:

On Wed, Apr 24, 2013, Walt wrote:

I don't think I'll be able to salvage the shot unless I go to a
vertical crop and just lop off the blown out section, but it's just
not as good an image in that orientation.

And, sadly, I completely lack the Photoshop skills to fix it.

Ah, well -- what coulda been.

Honestly, you really gotta stop beating on yourself!
I'll try. It won't be easy, though. I'm mortified by the thought that 
I'm going to produce a shot that I think is great, only to find out that 
it's crap.


So, I err on the side of crap when I judge my own work. That way, no 
disappointment.


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Derby Chang



Really resonant portrait, Walt. I wouldn't fuss with the background - I 
like the edgy tension of it. He looks like King Lear



On 25/04/2013 7:45 AM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this 
shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Stan Halpin

On Apr 24, 2013, at 9:18 PM, Rick Womer wrote:

 Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
 portrait of a despairing guy.
 
 Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
 wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
 didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see 
 what people were bitchin' about.
 
 Strong work!
 
 Cheers,
 
 Rick
  
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I tend to agree with Rick on this - the big blob isn't all that bad given the 
strength of the main subject. My problem when I first saw the image was that I 
didn't know that the blob is a jukebox, and so it was more distracting than it 
might have been - I puzzled over the source of the blob rather than looking at 
Glen.

Some suggested burning in the area of the jukebox, still others suggested that 
it might not work given the blown highlights. As a less-than-expert LR 
technician myself, I would probably take a more brute force approach. At least 
on my screen most of the background looks uniformly black. I would use the 
clone tool, grabbing large chunks of that black background and covering over 
the juke box and the light above Glen's head. Leaving you with just Glen 
against a mostly black background, as though you had done a studio shot with a 
black backdrop. It may or may not work, but it is worth spending an hour 
playing with it because a) you might get a drastically improved portrait, and 
b) you'll have gained an hour's practice in using one of the tools.

stan

 
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 From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
 To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
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 Sent: Wednesday, April 24, 2013 5:45 PM
 Subject: PESO: Glenn
 
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years 
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's 
 thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot 
 captured the grimness of his descent.
 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.
 


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Mark Roberts
Rick Womer wrote:

Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see what 
people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

I'm with Rick. Don't change a thing. This is a stunning environmental
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Eactivist
Very nice portrait, he does look grim (and he  has nice wrinkles). 

The jukebox, while a nice counter point to his head,  is a bit bright. 
Since it is on black, it wouldn't be hard to select that area  and mute it down 
a bit (gray it down). This is a long thread, so now I'll read  it and see if 
someone else recommended the same thing.

Marnie aka Doe  :-)

In a message dated 4/24/2013 2:44:50 P.M. Pacific Daylight Time,  
ldott...@gmail.com writes:
Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one  of a daily  customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/  
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA  50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could  imagine just a few years 
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend  left him and he's 
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I  thought this shot 
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and  suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Walt

On 4/25/2013 3:58 PM, Larry Colen wrote:

On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 01:57:45PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:

I don't think you'll get good results with matrix, Walt.

You've got a similar challenge as in stage performance shooting.
You've got a low-key environment, much of it in darkness, punctuated
with bright spot lights and internally lit objects (eg the jukebox).
If you go matrix metering I think you'll generally end up with very
dark faces and well exposed jukeboxes. :-)

I'd consider going for spot metering. When I'm shooting stage
performers I consider their face to be be key and I spot meter off
that. Then I add two thirds of a stop because caucasian skin isn't 18%
grey. That gets me pretty good exposures.

This will get you blown out jukeboxes unfortunately, but you need to
take other steps to deal with that, like different framing, getting it
behind your subject, or fixing in post.

Walt, you are there every day.  The lights don't move around.  You should
know that if someone sits at the bar under the light, the exposure will
be ISO 6400, f/4 at 1/50 sec,  if they are at the table in the corner
where that cute girl sits, it's ISO 10,000, f/1.8 at 1/20.

If you want a shot with the jukebox not blown out, your option may be
to expose for the jukebox and just use a little bit of fill flash.

My suggestion is to set up lights so that one particular spot at the
bar is nicely lit. In that shot of Glenn, if you set up another, dimmer
light that just happend to provide a bit of fill and soften the shadows,
that would work.  I also suggest that you put a pink frilly barstool there
so that it will be favored by the distaff set.

Just sayin'.



All excellent suggestions, Larry! (Especially the pink, frilly barstool.)

Thanks for the tips!

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Walt

On 4/26/2013 8:57 AM, Stan Halpin wrote:

On Apr 24, 2013, at 9:18 PM, Rick Womer wrote:


Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see what 
people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

Cheers,

Rick
  
http://photo.net/photos/RickW



I tend to agree with Rick on this - the big blob isn't all that bad given the 
strength of the main subject. My problem when I first saw the image was that I 
didn't know that the blob is a jukebox, and so it was more distracting than it 
might have been - I puzzled over the source of the blob rather than looking at 
Glen.

Some suggested burning in the area of the jukebox, still others suggested that 
it might not work given the blown highlights. As a less-than-expert LR 
technician myself, I would probably take a more brute force approach. At least 
on my screen most of the background looks uniformly black. I would use the 
clone tool, grabbing large chunks of that black background and covering over 
the juke box and the light above Glen's head. Leaving you with just Glen 
against a mostly black background, as though you had done a studio shot with a 
black backdrop. It may or may not work, but it is worth spending an hour 
playing with it because a) you might get a drastically improved portrait, and 
b) you'll have gained an hour's practice in using one of the tools.

stan

Thank you, Stan. I'm slowly learning Lightroom -- very slowly, in fact. 
It's so different from anything I've used in the past, I still haven't 
really gotten the hang of navigating it.


I've gotten some very helpful suggestions, though, and I think I can 
rescue the image with a little practice.


Thanks for the suggestions. I may make something out of it yet!

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Walt

On 4/26/2013 11:05 AM, Mark Roberts wrote:

Rick Womer wrote:


Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see what 
people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

I'm with Rick. Don't change a thing. This is a stunning environmental
portrait.

  

Thanks so much, Mark.

That's the kind of photography I enjoy more than any other. If I could 
focus on one genre, that would be it.


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Larry Colen
On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 11:51:41AM -0500, Walt wrote:
 On 4/26/2013 8:57 AM, Stan Halpin wrote:
 On Apr 24, 2013, at 9:18 PM, Rick Womer wrote:
 


 
 I've gotten some very helpful suggestions, though, and I think I can
 rescue the image with a little practice.

Not rescue, improve.  It's a great image as it is, the jukebox is no fatal flaw.

 
 Thanks for the suggestions. I may make something out of it yet!
 
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Walt

Thank you, Derby.

I think if I can get that brightness knocked down without making the 
fix-up job look too obvious, it would really benefit the shot. But, if I 
can't, it won't be the end of the world and I'll still like it despite 
its imperfections.


-- Walt

On 4/26/2013 6:58 AM, Derby Chang wrote:



Really resonant portrait, Walt. I wouldn't fuss with the background - 
I like the edgy tension of it. He looks like King Lear



On 25/04/2013 7:45 AM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought 
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Walt

On 4/26/2013 11:53 AM, Larry Colen wrote:

On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 11:51:41AM -0500, Walt wrote:

On 4/26/2013 8:57 AM, Stan Halpin wrote:

On Apr 24, 2013, at 9:18 PM, Rick Womer wrote:




I've gotten some very helpful suggestions, though, and I think I can
rescue the image with a little practice.

Not rescue, improve.  It's a great image as it is, the jukebox is no fatal flaw.

Thanks again, Larry.

Improve is the best word. I like the shot as-is, but with its flaws 
having pointed out, it's like the man-hands on Jerry's date in the 
Seinfeld episode. ;)


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Thanks for the suggestions. I may make something out of it yet!

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Bruce Walker
On Fri, Apr 26, 2013 at 9:57 AM, Stan Halpin
s...@stans-photography.info wrote:

 It may or may not work, but it is worth spending an hour playing with it 
 because
 a) you might get a drastically improved portrait, and b) you'll have gained
 an hour's practice in using one of the tools.

 stan

That right there is one of the main reasons I do post-work on images,
even sub-optimal ones (I have mostly those). When you come up with a
great image that could be improved just that little bit to make it
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread kwaller
I agree its a great portrait of the gentleman but overall the image is 
greatly degraded by such a large bright background distraction.


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Subject: Re: PESO: Glenn


Rick Womer wrote:

Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about. It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.


Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what? It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all. In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see 
what people were bitchin' about.


Strong work!


I'm with Rick. Don't change a thing. This is a stunning environmental
portrait.


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread Rob Studdert
On 25 April 2013 07:45, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in
 the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the
 grimness of his descent.

Walt, It's a real glimpse into the man's persona regardless of thew
Pacman on his shoulder :)

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-26 Thread David Savage
I agree don't change anything. This is brilliant environmental portrait.

If you're not thinking along theses lines already, let me put the germ
of the idea in your head. With this and some of the other shots you've
posted from the bar, you have the makings for a project of
environmental portraits of bar staff  patrons in their environment
that would look cool in a book or hanging on a gallery wall.

Cheers,

Dave

On 27 April 2013 00:54, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:
 On 4/26/2013 11:05 AM, Mark Roberts wrote:

 Rick Womer wrote:

 Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a
 great portrait of a despairing guy.

 Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's
 wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing
 didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see
 what people were bitchin' about.

 Strong work!

 I'm with Rick. Don't change a thing. This is a stunning environmental
 portrait.



 Thanks so much, Mark.

 That's the kind of photography I enjoy more than any other. If I could focus
 on one genre, that would be it.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread John Sessoms
I didn't find the jukebox as distracting as the black hole between his 
nose  his right eye.


From: Walt

Thanks, Jeffery.

The jukebox wasn't quite as distracting in the color version -- the
colorful lighting was actually kind of pleasant. But, I thought the
subject called for a b/w rendering. Hopefully, I'll figure out how to
use dodge and burn soon and these kinds of issues will be less of a
problem in the future.

-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:03 PM, Jeffery Johnson wrote:

I agree it did capture his grimness. I like it but for me personally
the jukebox in the back is a tad distracting.

On 4/24/2013 4:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!



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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread John Sessoms
Keep this shot in mind and the next time move a couple of feet to your 
left so the jukebox is hidden behind your victim's... ahem, I mean your 
subject's ... head.


From: Walt

Thanks, Bruce.

I went back and started from scratch in Lightroom, and it's pretty
apparent that the jukebox lights are blown out.

I don't think I'll be able to salvage the shot unless I go to a
vertical crop and just lop off the blown out section, but it's just
not as good an image in that orientation.

And, sadly, I completely lack the Photoshop skills to fix it.

Ah, well -- what coulda been.

 -- Walt


On 4/24/2013 7:12 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

I agree with Frank that the jukebox is competing too successfully with
your subject.

The Lightroom adjustment brush can be used very nicely to alter the
exposure of stuff, but I would caution you about something that I
suspect exists here: blown out areas. Blown out areas are where the
pixels have been clipped to full-white by the sensor (because they
were too bright to be represented at that exposure setting).  If you
attempt to reduce the exposure of a blown out area, it will simply
turn into an ugly featureless grey area, like a grey stain on the
image.

Luckily you are converting to BW so the result won't look as bad as
it does in colour, but it may still look rather bogus, lacking grain
for instance. In that case to do a good job you'd need to pull your
image into Photoshop and use the healing or clone brush over the
object to give it some texture and body. Then it could be darkened and
still look real.



On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:

That's a great photo!

Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
might burn it just a little bit.

None the less this is an amazing portrait.

Cheers,
frank

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread Walt
I was unhappy about that, too, but thought the image was worth keeping 
in spite of it.


The jukebox didn't stand out to me nearly as much as the shadow on the 
eye. I'll keep working on it and maybe get something salvageable.


Thanks for the input!

-- Walt

On 4/25/2013 12:08 PM, John Sessoms wrote:
I didn't find the jukebox as distracting as the black hole between his 
nose  his right eye.


From: Walt

Thanks, Jeffery.

The jukebox wasn't quite as distracting in the color version -- the
colorful lighting was actually kind of pleasant. But, I thought the
subject called for a b/w rendering. Hopefully, I'll figure out how to
use dodge and burn soon and these kinds of issues will be less of a
problem in the future.

-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:03 PM, Jeffery Johnson wrote:

I agree it did capture his grimness. I like it but for me personally
the jukebox in the back is a tad distracting.

On 4/24/2013 4:45 PM, Walt wrote:
Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily 
customer.


http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!






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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread Walt

I will definitely account for it in the future.

I always show the photo to the victim and delete it if they ask me to. 
To be honest, I can't think of any other way to catch people at 
unguarded moments.


-- Walt



On 4/25/2013 12:17 PM, John Sessoms wrote:
Keep this shot in mind and the next time move a couple of feet to your 
left so the jukebox is hidden behind your victim's... ahem, I mean 
your subject's ... head.


From: Walt

Thanks, Bruce.

I went back and started from scratch in Lightroom, and it's pretty
apparent that the jukebox lights are blown out.

I don't think I'll be able to salvage the shot unless I go to a
vertical crop and just lop off the blown out section, but it's just
not as good an image in that orientation.

And, sadly, I completely lack the Photoshop skills to fix it.

Ah, well -- what coulda been.

 -- Walt


On 4/24/2013 7:12 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

I agree with Frank that the jukebox is competing too successfully with
your subject.

The Lightroom adjustment brush can be used very nicely to alter the
exposure of stuff, but I would caution you about something that I
suspect exists here: blown out areas. Blown out areas are where the
pixels have been clipped to full-white by the sensor (because they
were too bright to be represented at that exposure setting). If you
attempt to reduce the exposure of a blown out area, it will simply
turn into an ugly featureless grey area, like a grey stain on the
image.

Luckily you are converting to BW so the result won't look as bad as
it does in colour, but it may still look rather bogus, lacking grain
for instance. In that case to do a good job you'd need to pull your
image into Photoshop and use the healing or clone brush over the
object to give it some texture and body. Then it could be darkened and
still look real.



On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:

That's a great photo!

Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head 
position, but I might burn it just a little bit.


None the less this is an amazing portrait.

Cheers,
frank

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily 
customer.


http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years

ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!





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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread Bruce Walker
I don't think you'll get good results with matrix, Walt.

You've got a similar challenge as in stage performance shooting.
You've got a low-key environment, much of it in darkness, punctuated
with bright spot lights and internally lit objects (eg the jukebox).
If you go matrix metering I think you'll generally end up with very
dark faces and well exposed jukeboxes. :-)

I'd consider going for spot metering. When I'm shooting stage
performers I consider their face to be be key and I spot meter off
that. Then I add two thirds of a stop because caucasian skin isn't 18%
grey. That gets me pretty good exposures.

This will get you blown out jukeboxes unfortunately, but you need to
take other steps to deal with that, like different framing, getting it
behind your subject, or fixing in post.


On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 9:55 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:
 Thanks, Dan.

 I can't help wondering if I should have used matrix metering instead
 center-weighted average on it, which is what I usually keep it on when
 shooting at work.

 I need to do more experimenting.

 -- Walt


 On 4/24/2013 7:53 PM, Daniel J. Matyola wrote:

 The portrait is quite strong and effective, but the bright object on
 his left shoulder is distracting.


 Dan Matyola
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 On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:45 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown
 in
 the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the
 grimness of his descent.

 Comments and suggestions appreciated.

 Thanks!

 -- Walt

 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-25 Thread Larry Colen
On Thu, Apr 25, 2013 at 01:57:45PM -0400, Bruce Walker wrote:
 I don't think you'll get good results with matrix, Walt.
 
 You've got a similar challenge as in stage performance shooting.
 You've got a low-key environment, much of it in darkness, punctuated
 with bright spot lights and internally lit objects (eg the jukebox).
 If you go matrix metering I think you'll generally end up with very
 dark faces and well exposed jukeboxes. :-)
 
 I'd consider going for spot metering. When I'm shooting stage
 performers I consider their face to be be key and I spot meter off
 that. Then I add two thirds of a stop because caucasian skin isn't 18%
 grey. That gets me pretty good exposures.
 
 This will get you blown out jukeboxes unfortunately, but you need to
 take other steps to deal with that, like different framing, getting it
 behind your subject, or fixing in post.

Walt, you are there every day.  The lights don't move around.  You should
know that if someone sits at the bar under the light, the exposure will 
be ISO 6400, f/4 at 1/50 sec,  if they are at the table in the corner
where that cute girl sits, it's ISO 10,000, f/1.8 at 1/20.

If you want a shot with the jukebox not blown out, your option may be 
to expose for the jukebox and just use a little bit of fill flash. 

My suggestion is to set up lights so that one particular spot at the 
bar is nicely lit. In that shot of Glenn, if you set up another, dimmer
light that just happend to provide a bit of fill and soften the shadows,
that would work.  I also suggest that you put a pink frilly barstool there
so that it will be favored by the distaff set.

Just sayin'.


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PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years 
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's 
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot 
captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Larry Colen
On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 04:45:46PM -0500, Walt wrote:
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
 years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
 he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
 this shot captured the grimness of his descent.

The harshness of the light works to good effect in this shot.

Very well done.

 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

The K-5 is nice, but nothing spectacular in broad daylight, but when
the lights go down, it performs brilliantly, I could aspire to doing
as well myself.

 
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RE: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread knarftheria...@gmail.com
That's a great photo! 

Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
might burn it just a little bit.

None the less this is an amazing portrait. 

Cheers,
frank 

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years 
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's 
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot 
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

On 4/24/2013 4:50 PM, Larry Colen wrote:

On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 04:45:46PM -0500, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.

The harshness of the light works to good effect in this shot.

Very well done.

Thanks, Larry!

The lighting in the place is just awful, especially at the bar where the 
bulbs are situated directly over the heads of the patrons.



The K-5 is nice, but nothing spectacular in broad daylight, but when
the lights go down, it performs brilliantly, I could aspire to doing
as well myself.

Ha! I can definitely sympathize.

-- Walt




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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thank you, Frank!

There's even a bit of irony in the jukebox's presence in the shot. Glenn 
*hates* the jukebox, and we've butted heads over it many times in the past.


I'll see what I can do with burning it. I have never quite gotten a 
grasp on how to do that.


I'll look into some Lightroom tutorials and try my hand at it.

Thanks for the input!

-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 4:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:

That's a great photo!

Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
might burn it just a little bit.

None the less this is an amazing portrait.

Cheers,
frank

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Paul Stenquist
Nice. Still a good looking man. Fix him up with a good looking lady!
Paul
On Apr 24, 2013, at 5:50 PM, Larry Colen l...@red4est.com wrote:

 On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 04:45:46PM -0500, Walt wrote:
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
 years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
 he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
 this shot captured the grimness of his descent.
 
 The harshness of the light works to good effect in this shot.
 
 Very well done.
 
 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.
 
 The K-5 is nice, but nothing spectacular in broad daylight, but when
 the lights go down, it performs brilliantly, I could aspire to doing
 as well myself.
 
 
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Larry Colen
On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 05:29:05PM -0500, Walt wrote:
 Thank you, Frank!
 
 There's even a bit of irony in the jukebox's presence in the shot.
 Glenn *hates* the jukebox, and we've butted heads over it many times
 in the past.
 
 I'll see what I can do with burning it. I have never quite gotten a
 grasp on how to do that.
 
 I'll look into some Lightroom tutorials and try my hand at it.

The burn tool is also called the adjustment brush.

In Develop, it's in the upper right, and looks like a paintbrush.

To start with, zoom in on what you want to burn, 
click on the brush, 

a menu will show up, slide exposure all the way as negative as it can go. 

adjust the size of the brush set flow to 100% 
and brush over what you want to burn, you'll
get a very dark bit on the screen showing where the mask is. Once you 
have the object masked, you can adjust the exposure slider until it
is as dark as you want.

That's the brute force way of doing it.  

You can also set it to a more reasonable amount of darkening,
set the flow to a smaller amount and just brush on darkening, 
until it's where you want.  This way you can darken the edges 
a little bit by brushing them slightly, and the center more.

Likewise, when setting the size of the brush, you can set it 
to feather the edges, where the center circle gets all of the flo
and the outside circle gets increasingly less.

The third thing you can play with is the auto mask where it will
only do the brush on stuff that match the color of the point in the 
center.  I wouldn't worry about using that right now.

Now that I've given you a quick and easy explanation of how
to do it, I think I can count on the experts on the list to 
correct me.

For what it's worth, in the darkroom, we'd do the same thing by 
punchng a hole in a piece of cardboard, and exposing the print
a bit longer by moving the hole around the area we wanted to 
burn in.

To make it lighter, we'd do something very similar except we'd 
use a small piece of cardboard to dodge, i.e. block the light
while we were exposing the rest of the image.

BTW, when using the adjustment brush on shots in color to de-emphasize
something in the background, in an otherwise dark room, you can 
also dial down the saturation.

 
 Thanks for the input!
 
 -- Walt
 
 On 4/24/2013 4:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:
 That's a great photo!
 
 Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
 might burn it just a little bit.
 
 None the less this is an amazing portrait.
 
 Cheers,
 frank
 
 --- Original Message ---
 
 From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
 Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
 To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
 Subject: PESO: Glenn
 
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.
 
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60
 
 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
 thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
 captured the grimness of his descent.
 
 Comments and suggestions appreciated.
 
 Thanks!
 
 -- Walt
 
 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.
 
 
 
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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thanks, Paul.

He cleans up nice, but getting him to do so sometimes requires intervention.

I'm sure a lady would do him wonders if he could find one that could put 
up with him. The man is a handful.


-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 6:05 PM, Paul Stenquist wrote:

Nice. Still a good looking man. Fix him up with a good looking lady!
Paul
On Apr 24, 2013, at 5:50 PM, Larry Colen l...@red4est.com wrote:


On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 04:45:46PM -0500, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.

The harshness of the light works to good effect in this shot.

Very well done.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

The K-5 is nice, but nothing spectacular in broad daylight, but when
the lights go down, it performs brilliantly, I could aspire to doing
as well myself.


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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Jeffery Johnson
I agree it did capture his grimness. I like it but for me personally the 
jukebox in the back is a tad distracting.


On 4/24/2013 4:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this 
shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.



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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

On 4/24/2013 6:06 PM, Larry Colen wrote:

The burn tool is also called the adjustment brush.

In Develop, it's in the upper right, and looks like a paintbrush.

To start with, zoom in on what you want to burn,
click on the brush,

a menu will show up, slide exposure all the way as negative as it can go.

adjust the size of the brush set flow to 100%
and brush over what you want to burn, you'll
get a very dark bit on the screen showing where the mask is. Once you
have the object masked, you can adjust the exposure slider until it
is as dark as you want.

That's the brute force way of doing it.

You can also set it to a more reasonable amount of darkening,
set the flow to a smaller amount and just brush on darkening,
until it's where you want.  This way you can darken the edges
a little bit by brushing them slightly, and the center more.

Likewise, when setting the size of the brush, you can set it
to feather the edges, where the center circle gets all of the flo
and the outside circle gets increasingly less.

The third thing you can play with is the auto mask where it will
only do the brush on stuff that match the color of the point in the
center.  I wouldn't worry about using that right now.

Now that I've given you a quick and easy explanation of how
to do it, I think I can count on the experts on the list to
correct me.

For what it's worth, in the darkroom, we'd do the same thing by
punchng a hole in a piece of cardboard, and exposing the print
a bit longer by moving the hole around the area we wanted to
burn in.

To make it lighter, we'd do something very similar except we'd
use a small piece of cardboard to dodge, i.e. block the light
while we were exposing the rest of the image.

BTW, when using the adjustment brush on shots in color to de-emphasize
something in the background, in an otherwise dark room, you can
also dial down the saturation.

Thanks for all the tips, Larry!

I've always been leery of using anything beyond the very basic stuff 
because I just don't have a sense for how it works. I really should have 
learned all this stuff a long time ago, but I've always been completely 
baffled by brushes.


It'd be great if there were a Lightroom class at one of the local 
technical schools, but being such a small area, there wouldn't be enough 
demand to justify it.


I'll try my hand at these tips and maybe I'll learn to use some of the 
other brush functions once I get reasonably comfortable.


Thanks again!

-- Walt





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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thanks, Jeffery.

The jukebox wasn't quite as distracting in the color version -- the 
colorful lighting was actually kind of pleasant. But, I thought the 
subject called for a b/w rendering. Hopefully, I'll figure out how to 
use dodge and burn soon and these kinds of issues will be less of a 
problem in the future.


-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:03 PM, Jeffery Johnson wrote:
I agree it did capture his grimness. I like it but for me personally 
the jukebox in the back is a tad distracting.


On 4/24/2013 4:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought 
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.






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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Bruce Walker
I agree with Frank that the jukebox is competing too successfully with
your subject.

The Lightroom adjustment brush can be used very nicely to alter the
exposure of stuff, but I would caution you about something that I
suspect exists here: blown out areas. Blown out areas are where the
pixels have been clipped to full-white by the sensor (because they
were too bright to be represented at that exposure setting).  If you
attempt to reduce the exposure of a blown out area, it will simply
turn into an ugly featureless grey area, like a grey stain on the
image.

Luckily you are converting to BW so the result won't look as bad as
it does in colour, but it may still look rather bogus, lacking grain
for instance. In that case to do a good job you'd need to pull your
image into Photoshop and use the healing or clone brush over the
object to give it some texture and body. Then it could be darkened and
still look real.



On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:
 That's a great photo!

 Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
 might burn it just a little bit.

 None the less this is an amazing portrait.

 Cheers,
 frank

 --- Original Message ---

 From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
 Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
 To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
 Subject: PESO: Glenn

 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
 thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
 captured the grimness of his descent.

 Comments and suggestions appreciated.

 Thanks!

 -- Walt

 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Jeffery Johnson
Hum I wonder how it would look then to have him in black and white and 
the rest of photo not in full on bright colors but a muted tone.


On 4/24/2013 7:13 PM, Walt wrote:

Thanks, Jeffery.

The jukebox wasn't quite as distracting in the color version -- the 
colorful lighting was actually kind of pleasant. But, I thought the 
subject called for a b/w rendering. Hopefully, I'll figure out how to 
use dodge and burn soon and these kinds of issues will be less of a 
problem in the future.


-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:03 PM, Jeffery Johnson wrote:
I agree it did capture his grimness. I like it but for me personally 
the jukebox in the back is a tad distracting.


On 4/24/2013 4:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought 
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.








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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Daniel J. Matyola
The portrait is quite strong and effective, but the bright object on
his left shoulder is distracting.


Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola


On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:45 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:
 Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
 K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

 Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
 ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in
 the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the
 grimness of his descent.

 Comments and suggestions appreciated.

 Thanks!

 -- Walt

 P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thanks, Bruce.

I went back and started from scratch in Lightroom, and it's pretty 
apparent that the jukebox lights are blown out.


I don't think I'll be able to salvage the shot unless I go to a vertical 
crop and just lop off the blown out section, but it's just not as good 
an image in that orientation.


And, sadly, I completely lack the Photoshop skills to fix it.

Ah, well -- what coulda been.

 -- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:12 PM, Bruce Walker wrote:

I agree with Frank that the jukebox is competing too successfully with
your subject.

The Lightroom adjustment brush can be used very nicely to alter the
exposure of stuff, but I would caution you about something that I
suspect exists here: blown out areas. Blown out areas are where the
pixels have been clipped to full-white by the sensor (because they
were too bright to be represented at that exposure setting).  If you
attempt to reduce the exposure of a blown out area, it will simply
turn into an ugly featureless grey area, like a grey stain on the
image.

Luckily you are converting to BW so the result won't look as bad as
it does in colour, but it may still look rather bogus, lacking grain
for instance. In that case to do a good job you'd need to pull your
image into Photoshop and use the healing or clone brush over the
object to give it some texture and body. Then it could be darkened and
still look real.



On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:55 PM, knarftheria...@gmail.com
knarftheria...@gmail.com wrote:

That's a great photo!

Like the way the jukebox in the background mirrors his head position, but I 
might burn it just a little bit.

None the less this is an amazing portrait.

Cheers,
frank

--- Original Message ---

From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
Sent: April 24, 2013 4/24/13
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Rick Womer
Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see what 
people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

Cheers,

Rick
 
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From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
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Sent: Wednesday, April 24, 2013 5:45 PM
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years 
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's 
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot 
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Mark C

Excellent portrait, kind of stark but full of character.


Mark

On 4/24/2013 5:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this 
shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.




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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thank you, Rick.

I will say that I don't take any of the suggestions negatively, though. 
I did solicit the comments and suggestions, and people offered them in 
good faith. It didn't jump out at me, either -- but once it was pointed 
out, it's more glaring. And I do appreciate the pointers as they help me 
to pay closer attention in the future.


That said, I figure it's just one of the hazards of trying to play 
street photographer inside a dark bar with atrocious lighting. All 
things considered, I still like the image and was pleased that I was 
able to get the shot off before he had time to turn his head or throw 
his hands up, which is what he usually does. I had just enough time to 
get his attention and trip the shutter.


I guess it's a dark part of my personality, but I do love capturing 
shots of people with hard lives etched on their faces. And I guess that 
causes me to pay too little attention to what's going on in the background.


Thanks again. I appreciate the kind words. I'm happy with the shot 
overall, and can accept the imperfections as part of the learning 
process and use them as encouragement to do better work in the future.


-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 8:18 PM, Rick Womer wrote:

Well, hell, Walt; I don't know what all the fussing is about.  It's a great 
portrait of a despairing guy.

Yeah, there's the bright thing near his left shoulder, but so what?  It's 
wy out of focus, and the face is so well captured that the bright thing 
didn't distract me at all.  In fact, I had to go back to the photo to see what 
people were bitchin' about.

Strong work!

Cheers,

Rick
  
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From: Walt ldott...@gmail.com
To: Pentax-Discuss Mail List pdml@pdml.net
Cc:
Sent: Wednesday, April 24, 2013 5:45 PM
Subject: PESO: Glenn

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's
thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot
captured the grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thanks, Dan.

I can't help wondering if I should have used matrix metering instead 
center-weighted average on it, which is what I usually keep it on when 
shooting at work.


I need to do more experimenting.

-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 7:53 PM, Daniel J. Matyola wrote:

The portrait is quite strong and effective, but the bright object on
his left shoulder is distracting.


Dan Matyola
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On Wed, Apr 24, 2013 at 5:45 PM, Walt ldott...@gmail.com wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/
K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few years
ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and he's thrown in
the towel over the past couple of years. I thought this shot captured the
grimness of his descent.

Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.

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Re: PESO: Glenn

2013-04-24 Thread Walt

Thank you, Mark.

That's how I tend to like my portrait shots. If the subject isn't 
conventionally beautiful, I tend to focus on the features that help tell 
the person's story.


-- Walt

On 4/24/2013 8:37 PM, Mark C wrote:

Excellent portrait, kind of stark but full of character.


Mark

On 4/24/2013 5:45 PM, Walt wrote:

Here's another one of my workplace shots, this one of a daily customer.

http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/ 
http://www.flickriver.com/photos/walt_gilbert/8678146012/

K-5, FA 50/1.4, ISO 6400, 1/60

Glenn was as much a preening dandy as you could imagine just a few 
years ago. Since then, his longtime live-in girlfriend left him and 
he's thrown in the towel over the past couple of years. I thought 
this shot captured the grimness of his descent.


Comments and suggestions appreciated.

Thanks!

-- Walt

P/S: The K-5 is still impressing the hell out of me in low light.







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