Bug#694518: [Openstack-devel] Bug#694518: [RFR] templates://sheepdog/{sheepdog.templates}

2012-12-04 Thread Justin B Rye
YunQiang Su wrote: Justin B Rye j...@edlug.org.uk wrote: Shouldn't this start with something like: Please choose the commandline arguments that should be passed to the sheepdog daemon. If no argument is given, the default behavior is to start with the corosync driver

Bug#695036: Typos in package description

2012-12-03 Thread Justin B Rye
Russ Allbery wrote: Martin Eberhard Schauer martin.e.scha...@gmx.de writes: Hi Gregor, * Re anyway(s): I leave this to some native speaker, dict recognizes both versions. I do my vocabulary search on dict.leo.org and did not find anyways. There were sensible translations for anyway. And I

Bug#694518: [RFR] templates://sheepdog/{sheepdog.templates}

2012-12-01 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: sheepdog/start Type: boolean Default: true _Description: Automatically start the sheepdog service? Please choose whether you want the shhepdog service to start automatically when the system is booted. Typo: s/shhep/sheep/. And no need to phrase it as a

Bug#674201: Wine does run.. sort of

2012-11-18 Thread Justin Shafer
I am trying to get a neobook file to run for olpc under fedora.. Same problems as Ubuntu. You can get wineserver and wine-pthread to run.. Wineserver -d2 -f -p will run, because all the switches are being called is my guess.. If you run wine2002 or wine 0.9.20-1.1.14 and forget to

Bug#693483: bonnie++: cobwebby package description

2012-11-16 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: bonnie++ Version: 1.96 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch This package description thinks Squeeze is in the future: [...] This is the experimental version. It's not ready to replace the 1.x series in time for Lenny but will be for Lenny+1. The extra features (large file support,

Bug#693355: fuse-utils transition leaves symlinks behind

2012-11-15 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: fuse-utils Version: 2.9.0-2 Severity: normal After a routine Squeeze-to-Wheezy upgrade, the fuse-utils package is an obsolete transitional package. However, purging it doesn't remove its rc*.d symlinks: jbr@xan:~$ ls -l /etc/*.d/*fuse -rwxr-xr-x 1 root root 2909 Dec 4 2009

Bug#680640: [libc-ares2] name resolves in descriptions

2012-11-04 Thread Justin B Rye
Filipus Klutiero wrote: The short description reads: library for asynchronous name resolves One can say that foo.com resolves to 192.168.0.1, but - although I am not a native speaker of English - I don't think resolves can be used in the sense of name resolutions. The noun resolves exists,

Bug#688671: Please review package description boilerplate and line up short descriptions

2012-09-24 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: reviewing the translation of libhepmc-dev (1) I asked myself whether the wording (copied from upstream (2)) is correct. I'm a German native and quite confident in my command of the English language. So the event record is my problem. Shouldn't it be an event

Bug#688070: checksecurity: package description review

2012-09-18 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: checksecurity Version: 2.0.14 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for checksecurity is in need of some work. Description: basic system security checks Good so far! Checksecurity does some very basic system security checks, such as looking for changes in which

Bug#686207: [LCFC] templates://lazarus/{lcl-utils.templates,control}.in

2012-09-16 Thread Justin B Rye
Paul Gevers wrote: In the control.in file, I notice a lot of metapackages which had not architecture: all. This is not really translation related but anyway. I could imaging that it ensures that on all platforms it depends on the correct version in that architecture, but is that really what we

Bug#687240: [RFR] templates://bacula/{bacula-director-db.templates.in}

2012-09-15 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: bacula-director-XX_DB_XX/unsafe-director-password-was-changed +Type: error +_Description: Unsafe bacula-director password changed + Old versions of bacula packages shipped with an unsafe default password + for bacula-director service access. It seems that

Bug#686212: [LCFC] templates://lsh-utils/{lsh-server.templates,control}

2012-09-05 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: Thank you Justin, I agree with all your changes and have no remark after your last version [0], so I don't reattach the files, and thank you in advance for your last remarks. I was vaguely hoping there was still a chance someone would pop up and suggest some extra material

Bug#686207: [LCFC] templates://lazarus/{lcl-utils.templates,control}.in

2012-09-05 Thread Justin B Rye
Paul Gevers wrote: I like to contribute to the description of this package, but don't have the time to do that right now. Maybe I can have a look next week if the review isn't finished by than. Official reviews allow for a lot more time than you might have guessed from my hasty replies.

Bug#685577: [LCFC] templates://ipvsadm/{ipvsadm.templates}

2012-09-03 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: This is the last call for comments for the review of debconf templates for ipvsadm. [...] Template: ipvsadm/kernel_does_not_support_ipvs Type: error _Description: Kernel does not support IPVS ipvsadm is useless with this kernel, since it has CONFIG_IP_VS=n. Please

Bug#686313: Please allow translation of all debconf templates

2012-08-31 Thread Justin B Rye
I notice that one of byobu's five template po files is an en_GB.po that just uses exactly the same strings as the en_US default. Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: byobu/launch-by-default Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Do you want to launch Byobu at shell login for all users?

Bug#686313: [RFR] templates://byobu/{templates,control}

2012-08-31 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: byobu Depends: [...] tmux (= 1.5) | screen Recommends: screen, tmux (= 1.5), [...] Enhances: screen That's odd. Description: powerful, text based window manager and shell multiplexer The expression text-based seems to be there as a sort of awkward hint that it doesn't in

Bug#686182: Please allow translation of all debconf templates

2012-08-30 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot quoted: Template: grub/migrate_from_legacy Type: note _Description: Upgrading from GRUB Legacy GRUB 0.97, the Legacy version of GNU GRUB, is from now on considered a deprecated option. Your system is now being upgraded to GRUB 2. . GRUB 2 features a more advanced

Bug#686260: [RFR] templates://mathematica-fonts/{templates,control}

2012-08-30 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: -Description: Installer of Mathematica fonts +Description: installer of Mathematica fonts s/of/for/ + This package downloads Mathematica fonts through Internet and installs them, because the license prohibits distribution of + the fonts. Please note that the fonts

Bug#686262: [RFR] templates://nvidia-support/{nvidia-support.templates,nvidia-installer-cleanup.templates,control}

2012-08-30 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: _Description: Run nvidia-installer --uninstall? The nvidia-installer program was found on this system. This is + probably left over from an earlier installation of the non-free NVIDIA + graphics driver, installed using the NVIDIA *.run file directly. This installation

Bug#686047: [RFR] templates://git-stuff/{control,git-stuff.templates}

2012-08-29 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Quoting Justin B Rye (j...@edlug.org.uk): When should the cron job be started? Then you get a lintian warning..:-). We always recommended against interrogative form in long descriptions. So such sentences have to be turned in to Please choose whether foobar

Bug#686188: [RFR] templates://jffnms/{templates,control}

2012-08-29 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: Template: jffnms/install-error Type: select -Choices: abort, retry, retry (skip questions) +__Choices: abort, retry, retry (skip questions) Make the choices translatable, separately. Default: abort -Description: Error installing database for jffnms:

Bug#686212: [RFR] templates://lsh-utils/{lsh-server.templates,control}

2012-08-29 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: [...] Other members of the list may have other remarks and improvements to propose, thus this formal call for review. Yes, again the other templates in the package could do with a few changes. Template: lsh-server/lshd_port Type: string Default: 22 _Description: lsh

Bug#686027: [RFR] templates://citadel/{control,citadel-server.templates}

2012-08-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: citadel/BadUser Type: error _Description: Non-existing user The username you entered does not exist. You need to specify an already existing username with external authentication systems. Non-existing should be nonexistent, and I'm not sure what that last

Bug#685822: Please rewrite package description

2012-08-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian T. Steigies wrote: I read it as just claiming to provide fonts which are as good as LaTeX fonts are (however good that is). It was only later that I learned that it does this by actually using LaTeX. So shouldn't there be some sort of package dependency on LaTeX? As far as I

Bug#686047: [RFR] templates://git-stuff/{control,git-stuff.templates}

2012-08-28 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: Please find, for review, the debconf templates and packages descriptions for the citadel source package. s/citadel/git-stuff/ [...] Template: git-repack-repositories/enable Type: boolean Default: false -Description: Git repack: - Git repositories tend to grow quite

Bug#685822: Please rewrite package description

2012-08-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Jan Struyf wrote: Dear Justin and Christian, (Actually I didn't receive a copy, since I'm only on the d-l-e mailinglist, not subscribed to the bug, but fortunately I check this sort of thing!) I'm not talking about a build-time dependency; I'm reading the bits in the upstream description

Bug#686027: [RFR] templates://citadel/{control,citadel-server.templates}

2012-08-27 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: Make template translatable by prepending _ (the actual reason while I've spotted this package), and use of an article. Other member of the list may have other remarks and improvements to propose, thus this formal call for review. Well, the citadel/LoginType template has a

Bug#685580: [RFR] templates://pam-mysql/{libpam-mysql.templates}

2012-08-26 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: pam-mysql/config_file_noread Type: boolean Default: true +_Description: Restrict access to pam-mysql configuration file to root? + This version of pam-mysql uses a configuration file which may include + passwords. It is recommended to restrict access to

Bug#685578: [RFR] templates://chef-solr/{chef-solr.templates}

2012-08-25 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: -Description: New password for the 'chef' AMQP user in the RabbitMQ vhost /chef: - Set the password for the chef user in the AMQP server queue. Use - RabbitMQ's rabbitmqctl program to set this password. The default user - and vhost are assumed (chef and /chef,

Bug#685822: Please rewrite package description

2012-08-24 Thread Justin B Rye
Description: Interactive Graphics Language Editor The short description is outdated - upstream (2) now calls it Graphics Layout Engine. That's better - why would I want to edit a graphics language? And there was never an excuse for the capital I on Interactive. (Besides which, how did

Bug#685577: [RFR] templates://ipvsadm/{ipvsadm.templates}

2012-08-22 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. [...] I agree with all your changes, but found some more things to change in between. ipvsadm can activate the IPVS synchronization daemon. master starts this daemon in master mode, backup in backup mode and

Bug#684908: grammar error

2012-08-14 Thread Justin B Rye
Chad Dunlap wrote: Fixed grammatical error, 'allows to' has been changed to 'allows one to' in debian/control It's true that allows to is ungrammatical, but you can't just replace it with allows one to in a sentence where the user is being addressed as second person. And that's not the only

Bug#684188: laptop-detect: package description review

2012-08-07 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: laptop-detect Version: 0.13.7 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for laptop-detect contains a minor error, but more importantly it's a rather poor explanation of its function. Package: laptop-detect Architecture: any Depends: dmidecode ( 2.8-2) [amd64 i386]

Bug#679295: [RFR] templates://keystone/{keystone.templates}

2012-08-04 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: keystone/auth-token Type: string -_Description: Auth server admin token: +_Description: Authentication server administration token: + Please enter the token to use with the authentication + server. Just some wild guess. I have no idea about what

Bug#683182: [RFR] templates://hoteldruid/{templates}

2012-08-02 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: hoteldruid/purgedata Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Purge HotelDuid data when purging the package? Typo here: missing r in Hoteldruid. That one's been lurking unnoticed for a while, well spotted. Apart from that, I think I agree on the new

Bug#683182: [RFR] templates://hoteldruid/{templates}

2012-08-01 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: I slightly reformulated the template to take into account that it is shown during package purge. See attached file (which also incorporates last suggestions by David and Justin). [...] Template: hoteldruid/purgedata Type: boolean Default: false _Description: Purge

Bug#683182: [RFR] templates://hoteldruid/{templates}

2012-07-31 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Template: hoteldruid/configure-apache [...] + HotelDruid runs on any web server supporting PHP, but automatic + configuration can only be performed for Apache. Better English? (Justin, do you confirm? I may very well have turned it into Frenglish) They're both

Bug#683182: [RFR] templates://hoteldruid/{templates}

2012-07-31 Thread Justin B Rye
David Prévot wrote: Justin B Rye a écrit : Christian PERRIER wrote: + Once configured, HotelDruid can be accessed locally at + http://localhost/hoteldruid. Maybe the URL should be enclosed in angle brackets, as advised in uri(7), so the last dot won't hurt. Angles are one option

Bug#682835: Package description too specific

2012-07-26 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: the package description (1) contains examples for specific tasks. Perhaps I'm not the only one who prefers more generic information. [...] I suggest the following as a starting point for a package description rewrite. Description: HTML/XHTML/XML string

Bug#682802: Package description issues

2012-07-25 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Dear Debian Med Packaging Team, I believe that the package description (1) is not what you intended. There is an extra space at the beginning of the fifth line of the long description that breaks the formatting (2). And I'm afraid there is a missing word in

Bug#682657: Minor package description issues

2012-07-24 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Package: rawtherapee Version: 4.0.9-3 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch (You didn't CC d-l-e, but I saw it anyway!) Hi Philipp, the package description (1) seems to intend three paragraphs, but there is a formatting error to display it this way (2).

Bug#682543: Package description issues

2012-07-23 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Description: Gettext for Ruby ^ Ruby GetText Package is Native Language Support Library and Tools which modeled after GNU gettext package. . In the first paragraph there seems to be quite a lot of unnessary capitalisation as

Bug#681450: t-prot: package description review

2012-07-18 Thread Justin B Rye
Jochen Striepe wrote: message run through a filter before it's displayed. If you use such a program we'd be interested if you could send in your setup. (Did anybody ever do this?) Yes, we got setups for Heirloom mailx and metamail from users ... | It offers hints on how to apply it

Bug#681981: Minor package description issues

2012-07-18 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: there are some minor (mainly orthographic) issues with the package description (1): Description: Compiz Fusion configuration system - gconf backend Compiz Fusion is the result of the re-unification of the Beryl-project and the community around the

Bug#681417: Please reconsider package description

2012-07-13 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Description: Standard Widget Toolkit for GTK+ Java library Having a look at the short description itself one could misunderstand it as too much capitalisation. Actually it does not obey the Developer's Reference recommendations (2): It repeats the package

Bug#681450: t-prot: package description review

2012-07-13 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: t-prot Version: 2.101-2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for t-prot has a couple of typos and language issues. While fixing them I've reshuffled it quite a bit. Description: display filter for RFC822 messages That's not a helpful way of saying it, especially

Bug#681378: concordance: package description review

2012-07-12 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: concordance Version: 0.24-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch Concordance and related packages have a number of minor typos and other language issues in their descriptions. Package: concordance Architecture: any Depends: ${misc:Depends}, ${shlibs:Depends} Description: Harmony remote

Bug#681190: xfonts-intl-phonetic: package description review

2012-07-11 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: xfonts-intl-phonetic Version: 1.2.1-8 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch I noticed a couple of minor spelling/language issues in the package descriptions for xfonts-intl-phonetic and emacs-intl-fonts, and naturally ended up reviewing the whole control file. (This isn't connected to the

Bug#681215: Package description too detailed

2012-07-11 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: I'm sorry to say that IMHO the package description (1) has a number of problems: - The description is copied from upstream (2). Not intrinsically bad, but it explains the rest. - Upstream had a list of 6 items that have become one big fat paragraph in

Bug#680924: awesome: package description review

2012-07-09 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: awesome Version: 3.4.12-2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch Surprisingly for such a relatively mature and high-profile package, awesome has several typos and grammar/usage problems in its package description. Currently: Description: highly configurable, next generation framework window

Bug#680936: package description too historical

2012-07-09 Thread Justin B Rye
Erik Esterer wrote: Dear Fonts Task Force, while translating the package description of fonts-gfs-neohellenic I checked the descriptions of fonts-gfs-* packages and I think they are too historic. E.g. the description of fonts-gfs-neohellenic[1] has the most important information (What does

Bug#680936: package description too historical

2012-07-09 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: the times they are a changin' … Until today I felt I could unconditionally rely on the JBR patch ;-) I felt fairly sure it would need a couple more drafts anyway. New Greek font family with matching Latin New Hellenic is a round, and almost monoline Greek

Bug#680936: package description too historical

2012-07-09 Thread Justin B Rye
Corrections: Justin B Rye wrote: Description: new Greek font family with matching Latin s/new/modern/? New Hellenic is a Greek font family characterized by round, even pen s/New Hellenic/Neohellenic/? In fact there seems to be some confusion about the correct English name for this font

Bug#680746: entagged: package description review

2012-07-08 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: entagged Version: 0.35-4 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for entagged has a couple of typos and stylistic issues. Currently: Description: Java Audio File Tagger This capitalisation would make sense if its name was JAFT, but given that it isn't, leave the words

Bug#680611: svtools: package description review

2012-07-07 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: svtools Version: 0.6-2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for svtools has several typos and language errors, plus a formatting problem. The current version is: Description: Utilities for daemontools and multilog This is fine, apart from the fact that DevRef

Bug#680628: ulatencyd: package description review

2012-07-07 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: ulatencyd Version: 0.5.0-7 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package descriptions for ulatencyd/ulatency have a couple of typos and minor language issues; my review has ended up giving it a thorough rewrite. Current version: Package: ulatencyd [...] Description: Daemon to minimize

Bug#680628: ulatencyd: package description review

2012-07-07 Thread Justin B Rye
Alessandro Ghedini wrote: resources on the running processes. It uses dynamic cgroups to give the kernel hints and limitations on processes. This is just subtly awkward. Does it mean to give it hints, and to give it limitations on processes or to give it hints-and-limitations on

Bug#680656: cortina: package description review

2012-07-07 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: cortina Version: 0.7.3-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for cortina contains several fairly trivial typos and language errors. Currently: Description: Wallpaper changer for gnome DevRef recommends not capitalising the first word of the synopsis, whereas GNOME

Bug#680540: hydra: package description review

2012-07-06 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: hydra Version: 7.3-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for hydra (and hydra-gtk) has a number of minor typos and language errors: Package: hydra [...] Description: Very fast network logon cracker (DevRef recommends not capitalising the first letter, but otherwise

Bug#567517: etherwake: Package Description Typo Grammar

2012-07-06 Thread Justin B Rye
Followup-For: Bug #567517 Package: etherwake Version: 1.09-3 Tags: patch On Fri, 29 Jan 2010 Valarie Moore jei...@gmail.com wrote: The third paragraph of this package's description has a typographical error; the correct spelling for seperates is separates. Furthermore, I think this

Bug#680537: [ovs-dev] Bug#680537: [PATCH] debian: Add netbase dependency for /etc/protocols.

2012-07-06 Thread Justin Pettit
Looks good. Thanks. --Justin On Jul 6, 2012, at 3:08 PM, Ben Pfaff wrote: ovs-ctl.in uses /etc/protocols, which is in the netbase package, so a dependency is required. Debian bug #680537. CC: 680...@bugs.debian.org Reported-by: Bastian Blank wa...@debian.org Signed-off-by: Ben Pfaff b

Bug#680356: tea: package description review

2012-07-05 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: tea Version: 33.1.0-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for tea has a few typos and other language errors. Package: tea Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}, tea-data (= ${source:Version}) Recommends: bzip2, antiword, aspell, hunspell

Bug#679870: [Pkg-fedora-ds-maintainers] Bug#679870: Bug#679870: [RFR] templates://389-ds-base/{389-ds-base.templates}

2012-07-05 Thread Justin B Rye
Timo Aaltonen wrote: now lintian complains: W: 389-ds: description-contains-duplicated-word the the but I don't see why. Oh, sorry, I see it: | Package: 389-ds [...] | . | This is a metapackage depending on the the LDAPv3 server, the HTTP ^^^

Bug#680245: gif2apng: new package description bug

2012-07-04 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: gif2apng Version: 1.7-3 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch I've already submitted a patch fixing worse problems in this package description (#669244), but that patch seems not to have been applied correctly, since the current version still has one of the typos I was trying to correct:

Bug#680247: apng2gif: package description harmonisation

2012-07-04 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: apng2gif Version: 1.5-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The attached patch brings the same minor typofixes to apng2gif that I've also been trying to get fixed in gif2apng (#669244, #680245). Description: convert APNG animated images to GIF files That's a non-DevRef-compliant verb

Bug#679869: [RFR] templates://fs2ram/{templates}

2012-07-03 Thread Justin B Rye
/tmp should be converted into a tmpfs + mount point. This is not the default for fresh installs. I need confirmation by Justin that my changes are improvements..:-) It's exactly what I was thinking of suggesting. But I'm having second thoughts about dropping Debian; yes, we want to avoid excess

Bug#679870: [Pkg-fedora-ds-maintainers] Bug#679870: [RFR] templates://389-ds-base/{389-ds-base.templates}

2012-07-03 Thread Justin B Rye
Timo Aaltonen wrote: I've dropped it nevertheless, since the same info was mentioned in README.Debian (just with too long lines, so rewrapped it). Does this mean I no longer get to review the control file? Most of my suggested revisions are just wishlist-level rephrasings, but this bit needs

Bug#680088: [RFR] templates://tomoyo-tools/{tomoyo-tools.templates}

2012-07-03 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Please find, for review, the debconf templates for the tomoyo-tools source package. As usual recently, I've been lazy and left the package descriptions to Justin..:-) That's fine! [...] _Description: Enable Tomoyo Linux in boot time

Bug#679869: [RFR] templates://fs2ram/{templates}

2012-07-03 Thread Justin B Rye
Philippe Le Brouster wrote: Justin B Rye a écrit: Christian PERRIER wrote: I also wonder whether there should be more explanations about the benefit one can get from such switch. I also wonder whether the defaults might flip-flop; maybe it would be safer to point at something like http

Bug#679900: package description copied from manual page

2012-07-02 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Dear Perl Maintainers, translating the description (1) I wondered whether it is too technical. Actually the text appears to be copied from the manual page (2). Description: Perl module containing stack trace and stack trace frame objects (I suppose we

Bug#679912: exiftran: package description review

2012-07-02 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: exiftran Version: 2.07-10b Severity: wishlist Tags: patch I noticed a couple of apparent typos in the package description, so here's a suggested revision of the whole thing. Package: fbi (Normally I review all the binary packages in a control file at the same time, and by coincidence

Bug#679970: python-pyglew: package description review

2012-07-02 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: python-pyglew Version: 0.1.2-4+b6 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for python-pyglew has quite a few typos and other language errors. Description: GLEW bindings for Python PyGLEW is the Python-bindings for the excellent OpenGL Extension Wrangler Surely PyGLEW

Bug#679733: perl-depends: package description review

2012-07-01 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: perl-depends Version: 2011.0324+git74d587e-1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch I noticed this package has two minor typos close together in its description. Reading the rest I see the content is basically fine, but there are a few other minor language issues, so here's a general rewrite.

Bug#679622: fim: package description review

2012-06-30 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: fim Version: 0.3-beta-prerelease-1.3+b1 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for fim has a few English language problems. Package: fim Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Description: a scriptable frame buffer and ascii art image viewer

Bug#679697: ucimf: package description review

2012-06-30 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: ucimf Version: 2.3.8-4 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package descriptions for ucimf and its relatives contain a few English language issues (starting with two in the first word of the synopsis). Package: ucimf [...] Description: uicode console input method framework

Bug#679505: controlaula: package description review

2012-06-29 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: controlaula Version: 1.8.0-2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch There are several language problems in the package descriptions for controlaula and ltsp-controlaula, which is a pity when the package is intended to appeal to schoolteachers! Package: controlaula Architecture: all Depends:

Bug#679383: cconv: package description review

2012-06-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: cconv Version: 0.6.2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch Cconv's package description has several problems; for instance it spells the word characters in three different ways. Package: cconv Architecture: any Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends} Recommends: iconv Description:

Bug#679412: dns2tcp: package description review

2012-06-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: dns2tcp Version: 0.5.2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch While the content of the package description is good, the English would benefit from some minor fixes. Description: TCP over DNS tunnel client and server X-over-Y should probably be hyphenated (if only for consistency with the case

Bug#679230: karbon: package description review

2012-06-27 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: karbon Version: 2.4.2 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch I'm glad to see the package descriptions for the KOffice^WCalligra suite are being maintained; but there are still a few typos and other language problems, especially in the description for karbon. Package: calligra [...]

Bug#679099: module-assistant: package description review

2012-06-26 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: module-assistant Version: 0.11.4 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch The package description for m-a has several minor language problems and one significant gap in its content. Package: module-assistant Architecture: all As an aside: this would be fair enough if it was possible to use m-a

Bug#679007: apf-server: package description language fixes

2012-06-25 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: apf-server Version: 0.8.4 Severity: wishlist Tags: patch Dear Maintainer, The content of the package descriptions for apf-{server,client} is great, but there are several problems with the English. Package: apf-server (Not to be confused with the APF available as apf-firewall!) [...]

Bug#678745: wims: package description review

2012-06-24 Thread Justin B Rye
Package: wims Version: 4.03a Severity: wishlist Tags: patch Dear Maintainer, The package descriptions for WIMS contain rather a lot of typos and other language errors, especially considering that the target audience for these packages includes English teachers. Package: wims [...]

Bug#678745: wims: package description review

2012-06-24 Thread Justin B Rye
Georges Khaznadar wrote: thank you for this first review. I attach a new version of the control file, please do cricize it: I shall publish it after your second review. Okay, here's round two! Package: wims [...] Description: server for educational content: courses, exercises, and exams

Bug#678257: Typos in package description, rewording proposal

2012-06-22 Thread Justin B Rye
[Oops, this didn't go out when I thought it did. Re-sending:] Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker Also: synopses don't need an initial capital letter, and no dictionaries I can find believe in the word prescriptor (though I

Bug#678257: Typos in package description, rewording proposal

2012-06-20 Thread Justin B Rye
Martin Eberhard Schauer wrote: Description: Pharmaceutical drugs prescriptor and interactions checker Also: synopses don't need an initial capital letter, and no dictionaries I can find believe in the word prescriptor (though I suppose it might be jargon known only to the kind of specialists

Bug#678002: apt-get dist-upgrade fails with: Internal Error, No file name for libbz2-1.0

2012-06-18 Thread Justin Piszcz
Package: apt Version: 0.9.5.1 Error: Internal Error, No file name for libbz2-1.0 I had a similar issue on my x86_64 box: http://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=676635 Packages: http://packages.debian.org/wheezy/amd64/libapt-pkg4.12/download

Bug#678002: Update

2012-06-18 Thread Justin Piszcz
Hi, Please mark this as fixed in 0.9.6. Thanks. Justin.

Bug#677843: [RFR] templates://icinga-web/{icinga-web.templates}

2012-06-17 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. (By the way, I'll be on reduced bandwidth again later this week.) I don't see anything that needs changing in the templates, and I recognise the boilerplate in the package descriptions, but: Package: icinga-web

Bug#677713: [RFR] templates://ipsec-tools/{racoon.templates}

2012-06-17 Thread Justin B Rye
Matthew Grant wrote: Justin B Rye wrote: Justin B Rye wrote: Description: IPsec utilities IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for network traffic at the IP layer. . This package is a port of the utilities from the KAME IPsec implementation on BSD

Bug#677713: [RFR] templates://ipsec-tools/{racoon.templates}

2012-06-16 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. Things are moving fast, we must be close to a freeze! [...] Racoon can be configured two ways, either by directly editing /etc/racoon/racoon.conf or using the racoon-tool administrative front end. I was going

Bug#677713: [RFR] templates://ipsec-tools/{racoon.templates}

2012-06-16 Thread Justin B Rye
Justin B Rye wrote: Description: IPsec utilities IPsec (Internet Protocol security) offers end-to-end security for network traffic at the IP layer. . This package is a port of the utilities from the KAME IPsec implementation on BSD. Correction: actually my patch says

Bug#677303: [RFR] templates://screen/{templates}

2012-06-13 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Before going into details, I'd like to mention that templates seem a bit lengthy to me (they certainly don't fit on a 80x25 screen and need to be scrolled down which is not always obvious with debconf). Shortening them would be nice, but I didn't find any good idea

Bug#677303: [RFR] templates://screen/{templates}

2012-06-13 Thread Justin B Rye
Axel Beckert wrote: -_Description: Previous screen binary has been copied to /tmp/screen-4.0.3 +_Description: Warning: upgrading screen with an active session I dislike this version as it reads as this is something which is generally the case (which it is not). I though like the idea of the

Bug#676312: [RFR] templates://pleiades/{pleiades.templates}

2012-06-10 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. Googling turns up answers to some of my questions: http://dev.eclipse.org/mhonarc/lists/babel-dev/msg00142.html

Bug#669011: [LCFC] wml://{intro/diversity,News/2012/20120420}.wml [Let's release an announcement tomorrow?]

2012-06-05 Thread Justin B Rye
p The strongtechnical/strong part of Debian Project is already ^ Insert the here and below. If I was doing stylistic edits I'd suggest s/part/side/, but that's getting too close to changing the content for my liking. committed to diversity: we don't

Bug#675237: [RFR] templates://nginx/{nginx-naxsi-ui.templates}

2012-05-31 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: _Description: Database host for naxsi: - Please specify the hostname of the server where the naxsi Web Application - Firewall's database should be located. + Please specify the hostname of the server that will host the database + for the naxsi web application

Bug#675237: [RFR] templates://nginx/{nginx-naxsi-ui.templates}

2012-05-30 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. Hmm, this smells familiar. Aha, yes - http://lists.debian.org/debian-l10n-english/2012/05/msg2.html (You'd think a name like nginx-naxsi-ui would be harder to forget.) _Description: Database host for naxsi:

Bug#674860: [RFR] templates://uptimed/{uprecords-cgi.templates,uptimed.templates}

2012-05-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. [...] Template: uptimed/interval All looks good... Template: uptimed/maxrecords Type: string Default: 50 _Description: Number of records that should be kept: + On systems that reboot frequently, you will

Bug#674859: [RFR] templates://nagvis/{nagvis.templates}

2012-05-28 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. [...] +_Description: Monitoring suite used with NagVis: + The NagVis package supports Icinga as well as + Nagios, using the check-mk-live broker backend. I prefer hyphenated back-end, but since that's the only

Bug#674024: [RFR] templates://icinga/{icinga-cgi.templates,icinga-common.templates}

2012-05-26 Thread Justin B Rye
Christian PERRIER wrote: Your review should be sent as an answer to this mail. [...] Template: icinga/check_external_commands Type: boolean Default: false -_Description: Icinga check external commands: +_Description: Use external commands with Icinga? Being a boolean template, it shoul

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